经典古诗词英译-以《清明(杜牧)》为例

经典古诗词英译以清明为例,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,目录,2014.12,古诗词英译概述,清明英译文赏析,2,3,清明英译小试,科技英汉互译教程,古诗词英译概述,2014.12,我国古代诗人在严格的格律束缚下,着力于构筑情景交融的意美,达到“从心所欲,不逾矩”的境界,充分发挥和展现了汉语表义的魅力。给译者带来很大困难。,形美,音美,“三美”原则（许渊冲）,BeautyinSense,BeautyinStyle,意美,BeautyinSound,科技英汉互译教程,“3S”Priciple,许先生曾说：三美的重要性并不是鼎足三分的。在我看来,最重要的是意美,其次是音美,再其次是形美。换句话说,押韵的音美和整齐的形美是必要条件,而意美却既是必需条件,又是充分条件。因此,在翻译唐诗的时候,我要求在传达原诗这种音美和形美的范围之内,用深化、等化、浅化的译法，尽可能传达原诗的意美”。,意境,音韵,形体,（许渊冲.翻译的艺术.1984）,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,蔡廷干译(1989):,AllSoulsDayTherainfallsthickandfastonAllSoulsDay,Themenandwomensadlymovealongtheway.TheyaskwherewineshopscanbefoundorwheretorestAndtheretheherdboysfingersAlmond-Townsuggest.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：题目意译，主题相合缺点：第三人称，情感略弱,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,吴钧陶译(1996):,ThePureBrightnessDayItdrizzlesthickonthePureBrightnessDay;Itravelwithmyheartlostindismay.“Isthereapublichousesomewhere,cowboy?”HepointsatApricotBloomVillagefaraway.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：韵脚一致，朗朗上口缺点：题目直译，有所偏差,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,孙大雨译(1997):,TheClear-and-BrightFeastUpontheClear-and-BrightFeastofspringTheraindrizzlethdowninspray.Pedestriansoncountry-sidewaysIngloomarepinningaway.Whenasked“WhereatavernfairforrestIshereaboutstobefound”,TheshepherdboytheApricotBloomVillDothpointtoafarandsay.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：一二四押韵，符合七绝格律缺点：单句变双句，不够简洁清晰,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,万昌盛、王中译(1999):,TheTomb-visitingDayTheceaselessdrizzlesdripsallthedismalday,Sobroken-heartedfaresthetravelerontheway.Whenaskedwherecouldbefoundatavernbower,Acowboypointstoyondervillageoftheapricotflower.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：题目异化，铺垫情感缺点：韵脚转换，格律略杂,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,杨宪益、戴乃迭译(2000):,IntheRainySeasonofSpringItdrizzlesendlessduringtherainyseasoninspring,Travelersalongtheroadlookgloomyandmiserable.WhenIaskashepherdboywhereIcanfindatavern,Hepointsatadistanthamletnestlingamidstapricotblossoms.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：意境开阔，身临其境缺点：韵脚欠佳，感情稍弱,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,许渊冲译(2000):,TheMourningDayAdrizzlingrainfallsliketearsontheMourningDay;Themournersheartisgoingtobreakonhisway.Wherecanawineshopbefoundtodrownhissadhours?Acowherdpointstoacotmidapricotflowers.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：题译准确，中西合璧，长短整齐缺点：第三人称，代入感弱，无伤大雅,清明英译小试,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,张锦旺译(2014):,TheQingmingDayRainaroundtheQingmingDaymeaningnostop;Peopleontomb-visitingwayareinasad-mood.“WherecanIfindawineshopnearby,cowboy?”Hepointsmeinthedir