如何写求助信ppt课件

HowtoWriteaLetterofAskingforHelp,1,Leadin,Readasampleofawritingpassageandfindoutthestructureandcharacteristicsofaletterforhelp.,2,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（LearningCenter）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简历2.求助内容3.约定时间4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua;Phone:12345678)注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.结束语已为你写好。,3,DearSir/Madam,ImLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.Imwritingtoaskforhelp.IcameherelastmonthandIfindmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-makingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandImanxioustogethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.Pleaseletmeknowwhichdayisokwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua;12345678.Thanksforyourkindnessinadvance.Lookforwardtoyourreply.yours,LiHua,点明目的,描述困难,恳求帮助,表示感谢,4,1.交代背景/询问对方，_；2.叙述现状，_，_；3.寻求帮助，_，期盼回复。,Commonstructure,点明目的,描述困难,恳求帮助,表示感谢,5,Characteristics,1.通常使用的时态：_；2.阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，注意语气委婉、真诚；情态动词多使用_3.注意使用过渡性词汇，如：first,besides,also,whatsmore,atthesametime,meanwhile,inaddition,unfortunately,luckily,thus,however,sothat等等。,一般现在时,would/could,6,Usefulexpressionsforwritingtheletter:,A.点明目的B.描述困难C.恳求帮助D.表示感谢E.期盼回复,Presentation,7,A.点明目的我写信是为了向你寻求帮助。1._2._Moreexpressions：3.Iamsorrytobotheryou,butIreallyneedyourhelp(with)4.Imwritingtoaskwhetheryoucanhelpme.,Iamwritingthislettertoaskyoutodome,Imwritingtoyoutoget/askforsomehelp.,afavor/givemeahand.,8,B.描述困难我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。1._2._Moreexpressions：3.Iamnowconfronted/facedwiththedifficultywith/followingdifficulties.4.ThereasonwhyIwritethisletteristhatIhavetroublewhenIdosth.,Ifinditdifficultformetodosth.,Ihavesomedifficulty/troubleindoing,(because),9,C.寻求帮助/建议你可以帮助我吗？1._2._Moreexpressions：3.Facedwith/Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoturntoyouforsomehelp.4.Itwouldbeveryhelpfulifyoucoulddomeafavor.5.Ireallydontknowwhattodoandexpectyoutogivemeyouradvice/suggestions.6.IhavenoideawhatIshoulddoandlongforyouradvice.,Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththe,Couldyoupleasegivemeahand?,difficulty.,10,D.表示感谢如果你能帮助我/给予我建议，我将不胜感激。1.Iwouldbegrateful_2.Iwould_it_Moreexpressions：3.Iwouldliketoexpressmythanks/gratitudeinadvance(foryourkindness).4.Thankyoufor,ifyoucouldgivemesome,suggestions(onhowtosolvetheproblem).,appreciate,ifyoucouldoffer,mehelp.,11,E.期盼回复希望尽快收到你的来信。1._2._Moreexpressions：3.Isincerelyhopetogetyourtimelyreply.4.Yourkindearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.,Expectingyourwritingbacksoon.,Lookingforwardto/Hopingforyourearly,reply(andIllbegratefulforyourhelp).,12,Practice,Example1：（2011山东卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：a询问Tom的生活和学习情况；b谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；c告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：a词数：100左右；b可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,13,Step1：构思,一般现在时,第一、第二人称,Tom上个月来到北京学习，询问Tom的生活和学习情况。,我将去参加英语演讲比赛，在等方面遇到了困难。,打算赛后去看Tom,求助，感谢,14,Step2：提笔DearTom,IthasbeenamonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.(问候)_?IamgoingtoBeijingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJulythissummer.However,（搜集资料困难）_whenIcollectusefulmaterials.Meanwhile,（语言运用困难）_inusingEnglishproperly._,Imaybetoonervoustospeakinfaceofthousandsofaudience.（求助并感谢）_.Hopefully,thegreateffortIammakingwillpayoff.IhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.Yours,LiHua,Step3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章（如时态，主谓一致等）,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou,Iamnowconfrontedwithdifficulty,Istillhavesometrouble,Besides,Iwouldappreciateit,ifyoucouldgivemeahandandthankyouforyourhelp,15,（2017汕头一模）假如你是李华，最近在学习美国风俗，但国内有关这方面的地道书籍较少。你想麻烦你的美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。现在请根据以下信息给Mike写一封信。1.说明买书的理由；2.对书的要求（如数量，寄送时间等）；3.会转账给他。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；生词：转账transfermoney,Example2：,16,Step1：构思,一般现在时,第一、第二人称,问候Mike，请他帮忙买书,说明买书的理由（书籍少）；书的数量，寄送时间；会转账,感谢，期待回复,17,DearMike,（问候）_?（写信目的）_.Recently,（我在学习美国风俗）_.（国内有关这方面的书较少）_（请求帮助）_.,Step2：提笔,Howiseverythinggoing,Iamwritingtoaskifyoucanhelpmebuysome,interestinAmericancustoms.,However,inChinatherearefewbooksrelated,Thus,itwouldbevery,booksinAmerica.,Ihavegreat,tothistopic.,helpfulifyoucouldbuysomebooks.,18,（书的数量）_.（寄送时间）_.（我转账）_._.（表示感谢）_.（期待回复）_.Yours,LiHua,Aboutthreetofivebooksareenough,andIhopethattheyareeasyformetounderstand,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsend,themtomebeforeApril,pleasetellmehowmuchyoupayforthemandIwill,Bytheway,transfermoneytoyou,Iwouldliketoexpressmythanks,toyourearlyreply,foryourkindness,Lookingforward,Step3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章（如时态，主谓一致等）,19,假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1.作业多，没有时间运动。2.压力大，难以入睡。3.希望得到Kate的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Homework：,20,DearKate,IamLiHua,aSenior3student._Yourssincerely,LiHua,21,DearKate,IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Recently,IhavebeenbusypreparingformyCollegeEntranceExam,butunfortunatelyIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.SoIamwritingtoaskyouforhelp.Iamencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First,IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.Moreover,thehighexpectationsfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakemeextremelystressedbecauseIdontwanttoletthemdown.,22,1.Whattroublesmemostisthatitisdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.2.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheseproblems?3.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,23,24,问候语,Howiseverything(going)?一切都好吗？Ihopeeverythingisallright.我希望(你)一切都好。Howareyougettingalongthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.你近来过得如何？我十分想念你。,25,高考英语满分作文：求助信假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意:1.词数:120150;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,26,DearTom，Howisitgoingthesedays?IkeepwonderinghowyoufeelaboutyourschoollifeinBeijing.Haveyo