高考英语书面表达指导与训练2ppt课件

,TheGuidanceandPracticeofEnglishWriting,英语书面表达指导与训练,1,.,2,.,学习目标,通过本节课的学习,使学生了解英语写作高分技巧即：文章增“亮”三重奏和掌握英语写作的方法即：书面表达六步曲,学习重点,学习难点,怎样创作出一篇高分作文,文章增亮三重奏书面表达六步曲,3,.,解读新课标高考书面表达评分标准,第五档（best）（21-25分）第四档（better)（16-20分）第三档（good）（11-15分）第二档(bad)（6-10分）第一档(worse)（15分）0分空白或内容与写作任务无关或无法辨认。注意：书写规范的重要性干净入法眼，工整是敲门砖！,StepWhichleveldoesyourEnglishwritingliein?Whichleveldoyouprefer?,4,.,解读新课标高考书面表达评分标准第五档(best)(2125分）,1.准确、清楚地表达短文的内容，要点无遗漏；2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。,5,.,StepHowtowriteacharmingEnglishcomposition?,文章增亮三重奏,高级词汇句型多样衔接顺畅,6,.,1.Pleasecomparethefollowingtwosentencesandtellwhichoneisbetter.Themathproblemisdifficultforustoworkout.Themathproblemisagreatchallengeforustoworkitout.,Technique1:Advancedwords（高级词汇）,7,.,2.PleasetranslatethefollowingsentenceintoEnglishbyusingvariousforms.,我们很吃惊，他没有来上学。（一句多译）,Wewereverysurprisedthathewasabsentfromschool.Muchtooursurprise,hewasabsentfromschool.Itwassurprisingtousthathewasabsentfromschool.Hewasabsentfromschool,whichsurprisedusmost.Whatsurprisedusmostwasthathewasabsentfromschool.,Technique2:Varioussentencepatterns(句型多样）,8,.,3.【课堂体验】用适当的连接词填空,Heisagreatscientist._,heisgoodatplayingtheviolin.Theyoungmandidntenjoyhispreviousjob._,（相反地）hefindsthenewjobveryinteresting.Englishisausefullanguage._,(一方面)itisanofficiallanguageintheUN._,(另一方面）itiswidelyusedinbusiness,scienceandtechnology.,Whatsmore/Besides/Inaddition,Onthecontrary,Foronething,Foranother(thing),Technique3:Properlinkingwords,9,.,StepHowtoorganizeagoodEnglishcomposition?,Thesixstepsofwritingagoodcomposition,书面表达六步曲,10,.,书面表达六步曲,11,.,网赚牁茽琚,12,.,仔细审题，找出主题(定人称、时态、体裁和格式),课堂演练书面表达六步曲,抓住细节，列出要点,拓展要点为句子（运用文章增“亮”三重奏即：高级词汇；句型多样）,借助连接词，连句成段(运用文章增亮三重奏即：衔接顺畅）,通读全文，仔细排查错误,誊写并注意字体规范和卷面整洁,13,.,Practice课堂演练书面表达六步曲最近，你班学生就“金钱是否能带来幸福”这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论，辩论的结果如下:,RecentlyIhavehadadiscussionaboutwhethermoneycanbringushappiness._,请根据上表内容为某英语报写一篇英语稿件，介绍这次辩论会的内容，并谈谈我们该如何正确看待金钱。注意：1.词数100120，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。,14,.,正方观点(positiveside)Somestudentsthinkthat(正方1)_.Besides,(正方2）_.Inaddition,(正方3）_.,反方观点(negativeside)Others,However,haveoppositeopinions.Theythink(反方1）_.Forexample,(反方2)_.(反方3）_.,15,.,正方观点(positiveside)Somestudentsthinkthat(正方1)_.Besides,(正方2）Inaddition,(正方3）,moneyissoimportantthatwecouldntsurvivewithoutmoney.,moneycanhelpustosolvemanyproblemsinlife.,Itsmoneythatallowsustoliveacomfortablelife.,16,.,反方观点(negativeside)Others,However,haveoppositeopinions.Theythink(反方1)_.Forexample,(反方2）(反方3）,moneydoesntmeaneverything.,moneycannotbuyhappinessorhealth.,Ifweattachtoomuchimportancetomoney,wecannotfindtherealmeaningoflife,andnorcanwefindpleasureinlife.,17,.,模板训练RecentlyIhavehadadiscussionaboutwhethermoneycanbringushappiness.Thestudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentsthinkthat(正方1)_.Besides,（正方2）_.Inaddition,(正方3)_.Others,However,haveoppositeopinions.Theythink(反方1)_.Forexample,(反方2)_.（反方3）_.Personally,weshouldnotregardmoneyaseverything.Moneyisjustatoolthathelpsustogetwhatweneed.Weshoulduseitwiselyandproperly.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoylifetothefullest.,18,.,StepSummary,2.书面表达六部曲,Practicemakesperfect.,熟能生巧。,Nothingistoodifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.,世上无难事，只怕有心人。,1.文章增亮三重奏,19,.,StepHomework【课后强化】（运用书面表达六步曲和文章增亮三重奏写一篇作文),假设你是李华。最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容，给校报写一篇英文稿件，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。,注意：1.词数120左右；2.标题与开头已写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：新资源newresources,宇