高考英语书面表达ppt课件

.,1,书面表达,.,2,“考试大纲”对写作的要求明确规定要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：（1）（2）,在一定的语境中,准确使用,语法,和词汇；,使用一定的句型、词汇，,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。,.,3,书面表达答题步骤?,认真审题，明确要求；-列提纲分析要点，遣词造句；-翻译造句扩展成文，认真检查。-过渡词,（注意时态、人称等）,Tips,.,4,一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;1句子结构错误双谓语现象句子结构混乱2动词使用错误时态错误语态错误滥用be动词3名词单复数错误4.不规则动词及常用词拼写错误5.汉语式英语三、词义模糊，用词不够准;四、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接.,尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误,Tips,.,5,1.卷面整洁,书写漂亮；2.用词造句，扬长避短；3.要点写全,亮点突出；4.结构完整，脉络清晰作文阅卷时间紧，且采用globalscoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。,英语作文如何得高分？,切实加强对写作的总结，积累一些非常地道、非常具有表现力的优美的词组和句型并有意识地用于自己的习作中。,Tips,.,6,列举要点常用词:first(ly),second,third,finally,lastbutnotleast,inthefirstplace,firstofall,tostartwith,foronething,foranother增加论点:whatsmore,furthermore,also,inadditiontothis/that,additionally,besides,apartfromthis/that,nottomentionthefactthat(aswellas),常用过渡词,.,7,陈述相对或相反观点:However,Ontheotherhand,But,Nevertheless,Despite,Inspiteof,Regardlessof,其它过渡词:Inotherwords,Thanksto,Owingto,Dueto,As/Solongas,Onconditionthat,Asaresult,Therefore,Consequently,Surely,Withoutanydoubt,Asisknowntoall,Totellthetruth,Tobehonest,Honestlyspeaking,Tospeakfrankly,Importantly,Intermsofsth.总结语:Aboveall,Inconclusion,Inshort,Inaword,Inmyopinion,Personally,.,8,半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型,Inmyopinion,Personally,（onlyinthiswaycanwe）Takingeverythingintoaccount,IthinkAsispreviouslystated,Inconclusion,Onthewhole,Inaword,AsfarasIamconcerned,ImoftheopinionthatAllthingsconsidered,.,9,高考英语书面表达之话题训练,.,10,很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看法。请根据下面表格提示，以HomestayService为题写一篇短文，并发表你自己的观点。,.,11,现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑写一封信发表观点。,.,12,人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的看法.(2005年江西高考),.,13,假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿,并表明你的观点.,.,14,一.书面表达(满分30分)三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论.讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童开始?请你根据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下讨论的情况.,.,15,Para1Para2Para3Para4,Opinions/advice,Advantages/approval,Disadvantages/objection,Generalintroduction,Thestructureofthiskindofcomposition,.,16,很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看法。请根据下面表格提示,以HomestayService为题写一篇短文,并发表你自己的观点。,_,.,17,Studyingabroadhasbeenpopularinrecentyears.,However,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.,Generalintroduction,Para.1,.,18,Advantages,Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldstudyabroadifpossible.,Tostartwith,itisgoodfortheirEnglishimprovement,especiallytheycanbecomefluentinspokenEnglish.,Para.2,Finally,theydontworryabouttheirfoodandhousing.,Inaddition,theywillhaveabetterunderstandingofculturesandcustomsofthecountry.,.,19,Disadvantages,Ontheotherhand,otherpeopleholdtheopinionthattherearesomedisadvantages.,Theythinkthestudentsarentaccustomedtothefoodofferedbythehomestayfamily.,Andthecostoflivingishigher.,Para.3,Whatsworse,therewillbesomelimitstotheirlife.,.,20,Opinionsoradvice,Inmyopinion,itisgoodforthestudentstostudyabroad.,Whilestudyingabroad,theycanbroadentheirknowledge.,SoIhopetherearemoreandmorestudentsstudyingabroad.,Para.4,.,21,Ontheotherhand,otherpeopleholdtheopinionthattherearesomedisadvantages.Theythinkthestudentsarentaccustomedtothefoodofferedbythehomestayfamily.Andthecostoflivingishigher.Whatsworse,therewillbesomelimitstotheirlife.,Studyingabroadhasbeenpopularinrecentyears.Butpeoplehavedifferentopinions.,Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldstudyabroadifpossible.Tostartwith,itisgoodfortheirEnglishimprovement,especiallytheycanbecomefluentinspokenEnglish.Inaddition,theywillhaveabetterunderstandingofculturesandcustomsofthecountry.Finally,theydontworryabouttheirfoodandhousing.,Inmyopinion,itisgoodforthestudentstostudyabroad.Whilestudyingabroad,theycanbroadentheirknowledge.SoIhopetherearemoreandmorestudentsstudyingabroad,.,22,StudyingAbroadStudyingabroadhasbeenpopularinrecentyears.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldstudyabroadifpossible._Ontheotherhand,otherpeopleholdtheopinionthattherearesomedisadvantages._,Theythink,Besides,/whatsmore/furthermore/moreover/,TostartwithInaddition,Finally,Personally,/Inmyopinion/Ithink,.,23,现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑写一封信发表观点。,.,24,Nowadaysinourcity,moreandmorepeopleowncars.Ithinktherearegoodreasonsforowningacar.First,withacarapersoncangetaroundfreely,withoutspendingalotoftime.Second,acariscomfortabletotravelin.Finally,itissafetodriveacarthancycle.HoweverIamafraidmoreandmorecarswillcauseairpollution.Whatisworse,moretrafficjamsandaccidentsarehappeningeveryday.Personally,Ihopethegovernmentshouldcontrolthenumberofthecarstoletushaveaclean,quietenvironment.,.,25,人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的看法.(2005年江西高考),.,26,假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿,并表明你的观点.,Homework,_,.,27,一.书面表达(满分30分)三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论.讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童开始?请你根据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下讨论的情况.,.,28,注意:1.文章的起始句已给出2.词数:120左右(不包括已给出的起始句);3.参考词汇:基础foundation汉语拼音ChinesepinyinThestudentsofclass3hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.,.,29,SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.First,littleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,andtheycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.Whatsmore,thiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.Butsomeotherstudentsdontagree.TheydontthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Tobeginwith,youngchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.Next,IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixthemup.Inaddition,thiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.,.,30,书面表达练习作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据下面的提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。,_,Practice,.,31,.,32,Wemiddleschoolstudentshavemanytestsorexams.,Wehavebothachievedsuccessandsufferedfromfailure.,Differentstudentstakedifferentattitudestowardsfailure.,Somefallinlowspiritswhentheydontdowellintheexams.,Theyoftenloseheartandnolongerstudyashardasbefore.Butmoststudentstakeanactiveattitudestowardsfailure.,Practice,.,33,Theyencouragethemselvestobeself-confident.,Theyfindoutandanalyzethecausessothattheywillnolongermakesimilarmistakes.,Iagreewiththosewithactiveattitudes.,Asweallknow,failureisthemotherofsuccess.,Evengreatmenmayhavefailedmanytimesbeforetheysucceeded.,Sowemustdealwithourfailurecorrectly.,Practice,.,34,Thepeopleslivelihood,.,35,Writingmaking,人们一直面临着上学难、看病难、买房难的问题。如：大部分人都负债买房。今年政府将更加重视民生。教育、医疗、住房，就业等状况将会得到改善。如：义务教育免费、减轻农民负担、控制房价、扩大就业等,让人民群众持续地得到实惠。请根据以上所述写篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。1.词数：120左右。2.参考词汇：民生thepeopleslivelihood义务教育compulsoryeducation,_,.,36,OnepossibleversionNowadays,mostpeoplecannotaffordtobuyahouse,togotoschoolortoseeadoctor.Asweallknow,mostpeopleareindebtforahouse.Thisyear,thegovernmentarepayingmuchmoreattentiontothepeopleslivelihood.Alotofmeasureswillbetakentoimproveit.Theconditionsofeducation,medicalservices,housingandemploymentwillbegreatlyimproved.Forexample,thegovernmentwillprovidefreecompulsoryeducation.Also,thefarmersburdenissurelygoingtobelightened.Inadditiontothis,thepricesofthehousesaretobecontrolled.Moreover,thegovernmentwillcreatemanymorechancesforjobs.Asispreviouslystated,wecanseethatChinaisgettingricherandstronger,andpeopleslifewillbegettingbetterandbetter.Personally,Ithinkweshouldstudyhardertomakecontributionstoourcountry.,.,37,Nowadays,mostpeoplecannotaffordtobuyahouse,togotoschoolortoseeadoctor.Asweallknow,mostpeopleareindebtforahouse.Thisyear,thegovernmentarepayingmuchmoreattentiontothepeopleslivelihood.Alotofmeasureswillbetakentoimproveit.Theconditionsofeducation,medicalservices,housingandemploymentwillbegreatlyimproved.Forexample,thegovernmentwillprovidefreecompulsoryeducation.Also,thefarmersburdenissurelygoingtobelightened.Inadditiontothis,thepricesofthehousesaretobecontrolled.Moreover,thegovernmentwillcreatemanymorechancesforjobs.Asispreviouslystated,wecanseethatChinaisgettingricherandstronger,andpeopleslifewillbegettingbetterandbetter.Personally,Ithinkweshouldstudyhardertomakecontributionstoourcountry.,过渡词,.,38,目前，民生问题受到空前关注。为保障民生，改善民生，政府将采取一系列措施。请根据下面漫画写一篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。注意:1.恰当表达图画含义,要有适当发挥.2.词数：120左右；参考词汇：保障ensurevt完善perfectvt养老金pensionn医保Medicaren,.,39,如何看图写作？,仔细看图列出要点；选准词句恰当表达；紧扣主题适当发挥。连句成篇认真检查,（理解图画所表达的含义）,.,40,PairworkWorkinpairsandeachpairmustmakeoneortwosentencesaccordingtothepicture.,1,2,3,4,.,41,Onepossiblesentence,Thegovernmentwillprovidepension,Medicareandtrainingforjobs.,.,42,Possiblesentences,Topeoplesdelight,variouslawsaretobeperfected.Somelegalservicecenterswillbesetuptoprotectpeoplesrights.,.,43,Onepossiblesentence,Tomakesurethatpeoplecanlivesafelyandpeacefully,thegovernmentwillmakegreatefforts.,.,44,Onepossiblesentence,Thegovernmentwilltryitsbesttostopwaterandairpollution,sopeoplecanenjoycleanwaterandfreshair.,.,45,Neverbeforehasthepeopleslivelihoodbeencaredaboutasitistoday.Toensureandimprovethepeopleslivelihood,thegovernmentistakingaseriesofmeasures.Asisshowninthepictures,thegovernmentwillprovidepension,Medicareandtrainingforjobs.Topeoplesdelight,variouslawsaretobeperfected.Moreover,somelegalservicecenterswillbesetuptoprotectpeoplesrights.Whatsmore,tomakesurethatpeoplecanlivesafelyandpea