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,高考舞台秀出精彩！,ByGuSir,书面表达(作文指导),1.Doyouthinkitisdifficulttowriteagoodcomposition?2.Generally,whatisthescoreofyourcomposition?,谷Sir课件,Thebasicstructure:,整体三部分,Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body3.Ending小结；呼应主题,Topicsentence(中心句),Supportingsentences(支撑句),Concludingsentence（结尾句）,温馨提示：时态，人称，体裁要审准了！,Doyouknow?,语言地道，规范卷面整洁,覆盖所有内容要点,内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了关联词,了解高考中书面表达评分原则,1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。,第五档.2125分第四档.1620分第三档.1115分,第二档.610分第一档.15分0分,谷Sir课件,Howtoshowyourself?,Elegance,2.学会句式结构多样化,1.合理使用关联词,Measurestotake-策略及手段（主要介绍2种）,谷Sir课件,The1stway-UsingAssociatedWords,1.）表起始：firstofall，accordingto，inmyopinion，asfarasIamconcerned，asfarasIknow，asforme,2.)表示并列或递进besides.moreover.inadditionwhatsmoreforonething.foranother.notonly,butalsoontheonehand.ontheotherhand.lastbutnotleast,3.表列举:first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)，finally/lastbutnotleast,4.)表因果:therefore，thanksto，asaresult(of)，becauseof，dueto，owingto5.)表总结:inshort，inaword，inconclusion,inbrief，generallyspeaking，tosumup，allinall,6.）时间,比较,转折,谷Sir课件,1.SurfingtheInternethasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages,_,wecanbenefitalotifwecanmakegooduseofit,_,itcanalsohaveagreateffectonourstudyifweareaddictedtoit.2.LiMingusedtobeahealthyboy,_overayearago,hegotintothehabitofeatingalotofjunkfoodandsnacks._,hespentalotoftimelyingonthesofa,watchingTV,anddidlittleexercise._,heputonsomuchweightthathefounditdifficulttoclimbthestairs.,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,Discussion1,but,Besides,Asaresult,谷Sir课件,3.Onecankeepfitinthefollowingways._,oneshouldkeepabalanceddiet._,oneshouldworkoutregularly._,oneshouldgetridofbadhabits,suchasdrinkingandsmoking._,makesuretobealwaysinagoodmood.,Lastbutnotleast,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,4.Therearemanyadvantagesofsmiling.Itcan_makeushappy,_pleaseothers.,notonly,butalso,5.Ifyouworkharder,yourEnglishwillbebetter.(使用themore,thebetter）.6.WecanlearnEnglishwellinthisway.(使用倒装句)7.HedidnotbegintolearnEnglishuntillherealizedtheimportanceofit.(使用强调句型),Theharderyouwork,thebetteryourEnglishwillbe.,The2ndway-Usingvarietiesofstructures,OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.,ItwasnotuntilherealizedtheimportanceofEnglishthathebegantolearnit.,Discussion2,5-10,谷Sir课件,8.(1)Lighttravelsfasterthansound.(2)Everyoneknowsit.用定语从句合并：,_,Lighttravelsfasterthansound.,9.Weshouldsparenoeffortstoworkhardatourlessons.Wewanttobeadmittedtouniversity.(用不定式表目的),_,weshouldsparenoeffortstoworkhardatourlessons.,Inordertobeadmittedtotheuniversity,10.Whenweseeourschoolfromthe4thfloor,itappearsmorebeautiful.(用过去分词作状语),_,ourschoolappearsmorebeautiful.,Seenfromthe4thfloor,Aseveryoneknows,谷Sir课件,1.Sayingsorproverbs2.Setphrasesandsentencestructures3.Differentexpressions,Otherways?,因为我有好多作业要做，所以不能一起和你去看电影,BecauseIhavelotsofhomeworktodo,(justso-so),_,Icantgotoseethefilmwithyou.,Withlotsofhomeworktodo,(verygood),Havinglotsofhomeworktodo,(verygood),谷Sir课件,学以致用,Topic1-GuSirstrict，friendly,humorous,interesting,takecareof,careforTopic2-Ourschoolbig,beautiful,therebe,nextto,becoveredwith,takeonanewlook,agoodplaceTopic3-LearningEnglishimportant,useful,aninternationallanguage,makesomeforeignfriends,个人SHOW,湖南卫视直播节目,谷Sir课件,Asourcollegelifeiscoming,whatweshoulddoistohaveapositiveandoptimisticattitude.InorderthatIcanliveawonderfulcollegelife,someplanscanbelistedasfollows.AsfarasIamconcerned,wecandoalotofthings.Ontheonehand,inordertolearnmoreknowledge,itisimportantforustostudyhard.Ontheotherhand,itisalsonecessaryforustodosomeoutsideactivities,justlikejoiningtheschoolclubs,playingsports.Lastbutnotleast,wearesupposedtomakesomefriends.Goodfriendshipislikeasunlight,whichcanmakeusliveahappylife.Inaword,weshouldmakefulluseofeverychance.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveameaningfulandcolorfullife.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,优秀作文鉴赏Whatsyourideaaboutthispassage?,Conclusion(总结归纳),1.TherearesomanywaysandskillsthatIcantteachallofthem2.Towriteabettercomposion,firstly,weshoulddecidethetense,personwearetouse,weshouldalsopayattentiontothestyleofthepassageyouwillwritein.Secondly,youshouldkeepthebasicstructureofthepassageinmind.Thirdly,usesometechniquesandskillsdisscussedinthisclasstomakeyourcompositionmorebeautiful.Lastbutnotleast,itisvery