抓住细节PPT精选教学PPT课件

写作,抓住细节,运用你的想象合理扩展一句话，恰当地添加动作、表情、神态、语言、心理等将这句话的内容充实起来。*她骂他懦夫（樱桃山菊骂红红野孩子）*她骂他道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加语言）*她用手指着他的鼻子骂道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加动作）*她早已被气得浑身颤抖，脸色铁青，怒睁杏目，用手指着他的鼻子骂道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加神态）其实她早已被气得浑身颤抖，脸色铁青，但她还是在不断的告诫自己：不要失态、不要骂人！最终她实在是忍不住了，于是怒睁杏目，用手指着他的鼻子骂道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加心理）,细节描写文学作品中对人物动作、语言、神态、心理、外貌以及自然景观、场面气氛等细小环节或情节的描写。使读者如见其人，如睹其物，如临其境。细节描写在刻画人物性格、丰满人物形象、连接故事情节、丰富作品内涵等方面具有重要作用。生动的细节描写，有助于折射广阔的生活画面，表现深刻的社会主题。,方法一：精用动词,我看见他戴着黑布小帽，穿着黑布大马褂，深青布棉袍，蹒跚地走到铁道边，慢慢探身下去，尚不大难。可是他穿过铁道，要爬上那边月台，就不容易了。他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向上缩；他肥胖的身子向左微倾，显出努力的样子。这时我看见他的背影，我的泪很快地流下来了。（摘自朱自清背影）,方法二：巧用修饰语,父亲佝偻着身子，慢慢地朝前面一个小店走去。进了店门，父亲堆着满脸的笑：“老板，生意好！请帮帮忙，换两张大钞票。”笑着说着，贴满膏药的手伸进夹衣口袋，抖抖索索地摸出一大把钱，摊到柜台上，当着老板的面，几分的，几角的，半天才凑足了20块钱。(摘自山路弯弯),方法三：巧妙的运用修辞,对事物加以淡妆浓抹，能使语言增亮增色，提高文章品味给人以美感。母亲曾经有过一头浓密的黑发，柔软、亮洁、光泽，由于一生辛劳，捧出所有的心血，奉献最纯洁的母爱，来抚育我们成长，所以未老先衰，四十几岁，头发开始花白。先是两鬓染霜，后来是额前飘白，就象春天黛青的远山里悄然冒出一抹残雪，一丝丝，一缕缕垂在饱经风霜的脸上，再后来脑前脑后全沾满了白发，白得我们儿女们心疼。,总之，好的细节描写，就犹如一座座精美的灵魂，有了它才能使人物性格鲜明，形象栩栩如生。抛砖引玉,03,01,02,精用动词,服务巧用修饰语,巧妙的运用修辞,抓住细节,写作实践,Reader,Imarriedhim.Aquietweddingwehad:heandI,thmoreorlessConstanceChatterleysposition.Thewarhadbroughttheroofdownoverherhead.Andshehadrealizedthatonemustliveandlearn.ShemarriedCliffordChatterleyin1917,whenhewashomeforamonthonleave.Theyhadamonthshoneymoon6.ThenhewentbacktoFlanders:tobeshippedovertoEnglandagainsixmonthslater,moreorlessinbits.Constance,hiswife,wasthentwenty-threeyearsold,andhewastwenty-nine.Hisholdonlifewasmarvellous.Hedidntdie,andthebitsseemedtogrowtogetheragain.Fortwoyearsheremainedinthedoctorshands.Thenhewaspronouncedacure,andcouldreturntolifeagain,withthelowerhalfofhisbody,fromthehips7down,paralysedforever.Thiswasin1920.Theyreturned,CliffordandConstance,tohishome,WragbyHall,thefamilyseat.Hisfatherhaddied,Cliffordwasnowabaronet,SirClifford,andConstancewasLadyChatterley.TheycametostarthousekeepingandmarriedlifeintheratherforlornhomeoftheChatterleysonaratherinadequate9income.Cliffordhadasister,butshehaddeparted.Otherwisetherewerenonearrelatives.Theelderbrotherwasdeadinthewar.Crippledforever,knowinghecouldneverhaveanychildren,CliffordcamehometothesmokyMidlandstokeeptheChatterleynamealivewhilehecould.Hewasnotreallydowncast.Hecouldwheelhimselfaboutinawheeledchair,andhehadabath-chairwithasmallmotorattachment10,sohecoulddrivehimselfslowlyroundthegardenandintothelinemelancholy11park,ofwhichhewasreallysoproud,thoughhepretendedtobeflippantaboutit.Havingsufferedsomuch,thecapacityforsufferinghadtosomeextentlefthim.Heremainedstrangeandbrightandcheerful,almost,onemightsay,chirpy,withhisruddy,healthy-lookingface,arid12hispale-blue,challengingbrighteyes.Hisshoulderswerebroadandstrong,hishandswereverystrong.Hewasexpensivelydressed,andworehandsomenecktiesfromBondStreet.Yetstillinhisfaceonesawthewatchful13look,theslightvacancy14ofacripple.Hehadsoverynearlylosthislife,thatwhatremainedwaswonderfullyprecioustohim.Itwasobviousintheanxiousbrightnessofhiseyes,howproudhewas,afterthegreatshock,ofbeingalive.Buthehadbeensomuchhurtthatsomethinginsidehimhadperished,someofhisfeelingshadgone.Therewasablankofinsentience.Constance,hiswife,wasaruddy,country-lookinggirlwithsoftbrownhairandsturdybody,andslowmovements,fullofunusualenergy.Shehadbig,wonderingeyes,andasoftmildvoice,andseemedjusttohavecomefromhernativevillage.Itwasnotsoatall.Herfatherwastheoncewell-knownR.A.,oldSirMalcolmReid.HermotherhadbeenoneofthecultivatedFabiansinthepalmy,ratherpre-Raphaelitedays.Betweenartistsandculturedsocialists16,ConstanceandhersisterHildahadhadwhatmightbecalledanaesthetically17unconventionalupbringing.TheyhadbeentakentoParisandFlorenceandRometobreatheinart,andtheyhadbeentakenalsointheotherdirection,totheHagueandBerlin,togreatSocialist15conventions,wherethespeakersspoke18ineverycivilized19tongue,andnoonewasabashed20.Thetwogirls,therefore,werefromanearlyagenottheleastdaunted21byeitherartoridealpolitics.Itwastheirnaturalatmosphere.Theywereatoncecosmopolitan22andprovincial23,withthecosmopolitanprovincialismofartthatgoeswithpuresocialideals.TheyhadbeensenttoDresdenattheageoffifteen,formusicamongotherthings.Andtheyhadhadagoodtimethere.Theylivedfreelyamongthestudents,theyarguedwiththemenoverphilosophical24,sociologicalandartistic25matters,theywerejustasgoodasthementhemselves:onlybetter,sincetheywerewomen.Andtheytrampedofftotheforestswithsturdyyouthsbearingguitars,twang-twang!TheysangtheWandervogelsongs,andtheywerefree.Free!Thatwasthegreatword.Outintheopenworld,outintheforestsofthemorning,withlustyandsplendid-throatedyoungfellows,freetodoastheyliked,and-aboveall-tosaywhattheyliked.Itwasthetalkthatmatteredsupremely26:theimpassionedinterchangeoftalk.Lovewasonlyaminor27accompaniment.BothHildaandConstancehadhadtheirtentativelove-affairsbythetimetheywereeighteen.Theyoungmenwithwhomtheytalkedsopassionately28andsangsolustilyandcampedunderthetreesinsuchfreedomwanted,ofcourse,theloveconnexion.Thegirlsweredoubtful,butthenthethingwassomuchtalkedabout,itwassupposedtobesoimportant.Andthemenweresohumble29andcraving30.Whycouldntagirlbequeenly,andgivethegiftofherself?Sotheyhadgiventhegiftofthemselves,eachtotheyouthwithwhomshehadthemostsubtleandintimatearguments.Thearguments,thediscussionswerethegreatthing:thelove-makingandconnexionwereonlyasortofprimitive31reversionandabitofananti-climax.Onewaslessinlovewiththeboyafterwards,andalittleinclinedtohatehim,asifhehadtrespassed32ononesprivacyandinnerfreedom.For,ofcourse,beingagirl,oneswholedignityandmeaninginlifeconsistedintheachievementofanabsolute,aperfect,apureandnoblefreedom.Whatelsedidagirlslifemean?Toshakeofftheoldandsordid33connexionsandsubjections.Andhoweveronemightsentimentalizeit,thissexbusinesswasoneofthemostancient,sordidconnexionsandsubjections.Poetswhoglorified34itweremostlymen.Womenhadalwaysknowntherewassomethingbetter,somethinghigher.Andnowtheyknewitmoredefinitelythanever.Thebeautifulpurefreedomofawomanwasinfinitely35morewonderfulthananysexuallove.Theonlyunfortunatethingwasthatmenlaggedsofarbehindwomeninthematter.Theyinsistedonthesexthinglikedogs.Andawomanhadtoyield.Amanwaslikeachildwithhisappetites.Awomanhadtoyieldhimwhathewanted,orlikeachildhewouldprobablyturnnastyandflounceawayandspoilwhatwasaverypleasantconnexion.Butawomancouldyieldtoamanwithoutyieldingherinner,freeself.Thatthepoetsandtalkersaboutsexdidnotseemtohavetakensufficiently36intoaccount.Awomancouldtakeamanwithoutreallygivingherselfaway.Certainlyshecouldtakehimwithoutgivingherselfintohispower.Rathershecouldusethissexthingtohavepoweroverhim.Forsheonlyhadtoholdherselfbackinsexualintercourse37,andlethimfinishandexpend38himselfwithoutherselfcomingtothecrisis:andthenshecouldeparsonandclerk,werealonepresent.Whenwegotbackfromchurch,Iwentintothekitchenofthemanor-house,whereMarywascookingthedinnerandJohncleaningtheknives,andIsaid-Mary,IhavebeenmarriedtoMr.Rochesterthismorning.Thehousekeeper2andherhusbandwerebothofthatdecentphlegmatic3orderofpeople,towhomonemayatanytimesafelycommunicatearemarkable4pieceofnewswithoutincurring5thedangerofhavingonesearspiercedbysomeshrill6ejaculation,andsubsequentlystunned7byatorrent8ofwordywonderment.Marydidlookup,andshedidstareatme:theladlewithwhichshewasbasting9apairofchickensroastingatthefire,didforsomethreeminuteshangsuspendedinair;andforthesamespaceoftimeJohnsknivesalsohadrestfromthepolishingprocess:butMary,bendingagainovertheroast,saidonly-Haveyou,Miss?Well,forsure!Ashorttimeaftershepursued-Iseedyougooutwiththemaster,butIdidntknowyouweregonetochurchtobewed1;andshebasted10away.John,whenIturnedtohim,wasgrinningfromeartoear.ItelledMaryhowitwouldbe,hesaid:IknewwhatMr.Edward(Johnwasanoldservant,andhadknownhismasterwhenhewasthecadetofthehouse,therefore,heoftengavehimhisChristian11name)-IknewwhatMr.Edwardwoulddo;andIwascertainhewouldnotwaitlongneither:andhesdoneright,foraughtIknow.Iwishyoujoy,Miss!andhepolitelypulledhisforelock.Thankyou,John.Mr.RochestertoldmetogiveyouandMarythis.Iputintohishandafive-poundnote.Withoutwaitingtohearmore,Ileftthekitchen.Inpassingthedoorofthatsanctumsometimeafter,Icaughtthewords-Shellhappendobetterforhimnoronyotgrandladies.Andagain,Ifshebentoneothhandsomest,shesnoanfaalandvarrygood-natured;andihiseenshesfairbeautiful,onybodymayseethat.IwrotetoMoor12HouseandtoCambridgeimmediately,tosaywhatIhaddone:fully13explainingalsowhyIhadthusacted.DianaandMaryapprovedthestepunreservedly.Dianaannouncedthatshewouldjustgivemetimetogetoverthehoneymoon14,andthenshewouldcomeandseeme.Shehadbetternotwaittillthen,Jane,saidMr.Rochester,whenIreadherlettertohim;ifshedoes,shewillbetoolate,forourhoneymoonwillshineourlifelong:itsbeamswillonlyfadeoveryourgraveormine.HowSt.Johnreceivedthenews,Idontknow:heneveransweredtheletterinwhichIcommunicatedit:yetsixmonthsafterhewrotetome,without,however,mentioningMr.Rochestersnameoralluding15tomymarriage.Hisletterwasthencalm,and,thoughveryserious,kind.Hehasmaintainedaregular,thoughnotfrequent,correspondenceeversince:hehopesIamhappy,andtrustsIamnotofthosewholivewithoutGodintheworld,andonlymindearthlythings.YouhavenotquiteforgottenlittleAdele,haveyou,reader?Ihadnot;IsoonaskedandobtainedleaveofMr.Rochester,togoandseeherattheschoolwherehehadplacedher.Herfrantic16joyatbeholding17meagainmovedmemuch.Shelookedpaleandthin:shesaidshewasnothappy.Ifoundtherulesoftheestablishmentweretoostrict,itscourseofstudytoosevereforachildofherage:Itookherhomewithme.Imeanttobecomehergovernessoncemore,butIsoonfoundthisimpracticable;mytimeandcareswerenowrequiredbyanother-myhusbandneededthemall.SoIsoughtoutaschoolconductedonamoreindulgentsystem,andnearenoughtopermitofmyvisitingheroften,andbringingherhomesometimes.Itookcaresheshouldneverwantforanythingthatcouldcontributetohercomfort:shesoonsettledinhernewabode18,becameveryhappythere,andmadefairprogressinherstudies.Asshegrewup,asoundEnglisheducationcorrectedinagreatmeasureherFrenchdefects;andwhensheleftschool,Ifoundinherapleasingandobligingcompanion:docile19,good-tempered,andwell-principled.Byhergratefulattentiontomeandmine,shehaslongsincewellrepaidanylittlekindnessIeverhaditinmypowertoofferher.Mytaledrawstoitsclose:onewordrespectingmyexperienceofmarriedlife,andonebriefglanceatthefortunesofthosewhosenameshavemostfrequentlyrecurred20inthisnarrative21,andIhavedone.Ihavenowbeenmarriedtenyears.Iknowwhatitistoliveentirely22forandwithwhatIlovebestonearth.Iholdmyselfsupremely23blest-blestbeyondwhatlanguagecanexpress;becauseIammyhusbandslifeasfullyisheismine.NowomanwasevernearertohermatethanIam:evermoreabsolutelyboneofhisboneandfleshofhisflesh.IknownowearinessofmyEdwardssociety:heknowsnoneofmine,anymorethanweeachdoofthepulsation24oftheheartthatbeatsinourseparatebosoms25;consequently,weareevertogether.Tobetogetherisforustobeatonceasfreeasinsolitude26,asgayasincompany.Wetalk,Ibelieve,alldaylong:totalktoeachotherisbutamoreanimated27andanaudiblethinking.Allmyconfidenceisbestowed28onhim,allhisconfidenceisdevoted29tome;weareprecisely30suitedincharacter-perfectconcord31istheresult.Mr.Rochestercontinuedblindthefirsttwoyearsofourunion;perhapsitwasthatcircumstancethatdrewussoverynear-thatknitussoveryclose:forIwasthenhisvision,asIamstillhisrighthand.Literally32,Iwas(whatheoftencalledme)theappleofhiseye.Hesawnature-hesawbooksthroughme;andneverdidIwearyofgazingforhisbehalf,andofputtingintowordstheeffectoffield,tree,town,river,cloud,sunbeam-ofthelandscapebeforeus;oftheweatherroundus-andimpressingbysoundonhisearwhatlightcouldnolongerstamponhiseye.NeverdidIwearyofreadingtohim;neverdidIwearyofconductinghimwherehewishedtogo:ofdoingforhimwhathewishedtobedone.Andtherewasapleasureinmyservices,mostfull,mostexquisite33,eventhoughsad-becauseheclaimedtheseserviceswithoutpainfulshameordampinghumiliation34.Helovedmesotruly,thatheknewnoreluctance35inprofitingbymyattendance:hefeltIlovedhimsofondly,thattoyieldthatattendancewastoindulgemysweetestwishes.Onemorningattheendofthetwoyears,asIwaswritingalettertohisdictation,hecameandbent36overme,andsaid-Jane,haveyouaglitteringornament37roundyourneck?Ihadagoldwatch-chain:IansweredYes.Andhaveyouapalebluedresson?Ihad.Heinformedmethen,thatforsometimehehadfanciedtheobscuritycloudingoneeyewasbecominglessdense38;andthatnowhewassureofit.HeandIwentuptoLondon.Hehadtheadviceofaneminent39oculist40;andheeventuallyrecoveredthesightofthatoneeye.Hecannotnowseeverydistinctly:hecannotreadorwritemuch;buthecanfindhiswaywithoutbeingledbythehand:theskyisnolongerablanktohim-theearthnolongeravoid.Whenhisfirst-bornwasputintohisarms,hecouldseethattheboyhadinheritedhisowneyes,astheyoncewere-large,brilliant,andblack.Onthatoccasion,heagain,withafullheart,acknowledgedthatGodhadtemperedjudgment41withmercy.MyEdwardandI,then,arehappy:andthemoreso,becausethosewemostlovearehappylikewise.DianaandMaryRiversarebothmarried:alternately,onceeveryyear,theycometoseeus,andwegotoseethem.Dianashusbandisacaptaininthenavy,agallant42officerandagoodman.Marysisaclergyman,acollegefriendofherbrothers,and,fromhisattainments43andprinciples,worthy44oftheconnection.BothCaptainFitzjamesandMr.Whartonlovetheirwives,andarelovedbythem.AstoSt.JohnRivers,heleftEngland:hewenttoIndia.Heenteredonthepathhehadmarkedforhimself;hepursuesitstill.Amoreresolute45,indefatigable46pioneerneverwrought47amidstrocksandda