英语写作如何写建议信ppt课件

Aletterofgivingadvice亳州市十八中杨秀英,1,写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,2,写作模式(三段式)1.首段（beginning)：开门见山，表明写作意图。陈述事由，注意语气。2.主体段落（body）：对所提问题进行分析，针对问题提出建议并阐述理由(suggestions-reasons/evidence)。3.结尾段(ending)：呼应开头，重申观点并礼貌地表达希望收信人接受建议的愿望。,3,建议信写作的注意事项：a开门见山，直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。,4,写作语料库：英语建议信的常用语句,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1.Iamsorrytoknowthat2.Iamwritingtoyoufor/withthepurposeof3.Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter.4.Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsabout/concerning.4.Thanksfortrustingme.Itsmygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice/tips,5,B.建议信第二段常用句式。(提出建议，阐述理由。）I.标准整套句式Inthefirstplace/Tobeginwith/Firstofall,whynot?IfyoudothisWhatsmore/Furthermore/Besides,youshould/aresupposedtodo/areexpectedtodoThen/Thatway,Lastbutnotleast,itwouldbeagoodideaifBydoingthis,6,II.升级加分句式1.IfIwereyou,Iwould.2.Iwouldliketosuggestthat.3.Ithinkitwouldbemorehelpful/beneficial/ofgreaterhelp/benefitifyoucould.4.AsfarasIamconcerned./Inmyopinion.,7,建议信结尾常用句式,Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.Ibelieveifyoufollowmyadvice,youll.3.Iwillhighlyappreciateyourconsiderationofmyadvice/suggestions/tips.4.Ibelieve,withyourdetermination,youcanmanagetoovercomethesedifficulties.,8,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题,9,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step1Listthekeypoints,Step2Makesentences,Step3.Formapassageandpolish,10,写作训练：假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。1.制定复习计划，树立信心2.坚持锻炼身体。3.保持良好睡眠注意：词数100词左右可适当增加细节，已使行文连贯energetic,11,DearJack:Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeelextremelynervousbeforeanimportantexam.Idliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,makecarefulplansbeforeexamstomasterwhatyouhavelearnedcompletely.Itwillhelpyoubuildupyourconfidence.Second,takeproperexerciseregularly,whichwillhelpyoukeephealthyandenergetic.Lastbutnotleast,dontstayuplatestudying.Itisveryimportant/wouldbeagoodideatohaveagoodsleepatnightifyouwanttobeenergeticduringtheday.Ihopemysuggestionscanhelpyoureducethepressureofexamsandperformwellinthem.,12,范文讲解：学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popularsciencebooks)和文学类图(literarybooks)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的开头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。,13,DearMr.Wang,Knowingthat(-ing现在分词用法)ourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,Idliketogiveyousomesuggestions.（写作意图）Whatweneedmost(主语从句)arepopularsciencebooks.Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.,14,Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.Thatis(表语从句)whyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks：literarybooks.Classicworks,writtenbymasters(-ed过去分词用法),presentgreatthoughtsthroughfascinatingstoriesandlangua