短文改错、写作与听力+.ppt

Errorcorrectingcompositionwritingandlistening,Errorcorrecting短文改错,此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。,人称时态转折连词、介词、副词冠词主谓一致,(09NationalTestPaperI)Afterfiveyearsawayinmyhometown,Ifindthat_76.theneighborhoodwhichIusedtolivinginhaschanged_77.alot.TheSichuanRestaurantandtheolderfishshop_78.acrossthestreetfromourmiddleschoolweregone._79.,from,are,live,old,Thereexistnowaparkthathasasmallriverrunning_80.through.ThefactoryatthecornerofFriendshipStreetand_81.ZhongshanRoadhasbeenmovedoutofthecity,andsports_82.centerhasbeenbuiltintheirplace.Themarketatthecornerof_83.FriendshipStreetandXinhuaRoadhasbeengivenwayto_84.asupermarket.Besidesthebookstorenexttoourmiddle_85.schoolisstillthere.,exists,a,its,But,keys,76.from77.live78.old79.are80.exists,81.82.a83.its84.been85.But,人称时态转折连词副词介词冠词主谓一致,(09nationII),HiSusan.ImsorrythatIwasntabletoreturntoyour76bikeontimeyesterday.Imeantogiveit77backtoyoubeforefourintheafternoon，andI78washolduponmywayback.JustbeforeI79turnedcornerofParkStreet.Ihappenedto80,meant,held,the,but,seeanaccident.Alittlegirlwashurtandher81motherneededhelp.SoIhelpedthemgoingto82thenearesthospital.Istayedhereforoneand83ahalfhourandmadesurethatthegirlwasall84right.WhenIgotback,itwerealready6pm.85Ihopeyouunderstand.Thankyou!LiLing,go,there,hours,was,Keys,76.to83.here-there77.meanmeant84.hour-hours78.and-but85.were-was79.hold-held80.cornerthe81.82.going-go,(09Zhejiang)OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atruckcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldntbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.Themaninsisted,soIgrateful,friends,beside,an,was,gratefully,acceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.,but,someone,to,expecting,Keysfriendfriendsbesides-besidea-an去掉inis-wasgrateful-gratefullyand-buteveryone-someonepossibletoexpect-expecting,考点1动词考点2名词、代词的数与格考点3形容词和副词考点4主谓语一致及其它前后一致考点5连词与关系词考点6句型变化（否定、疑问、倒装、省略、替代等）考点7行文逻辑（人物性别、数量增减，时间顺序等前后一致，并列、转折与因果）考点8改错的注意事项,Compositionwriting书面表达,When/AfterIfinishmyhomeworkeveryday,IalwayswatchTVforhalfanhour.,IalwayswatchTVforhalfanhourwhenIfinishmyhomeworkeveryday.Withmyhomeworkdone,IwillwatchTVforhalfanhour.IalwaysspendhalfanhourwatchingTVwhenIfinishmyhomeworkeveryday.,beinterestedin对感兴趣befondof喜欢,爱好,(09NationalTestPaperI),第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东MrsWilson不在家，你准备外出，请给MrsWilson写一留言条，内容包括：1外出购物2替房东还书3Tracy来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消2)此事已告知Susan3)尽快回电注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Mrs.Wilson,Imgoingoutshopping,andwontbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.AtaboutIoclockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldntmeet,想象力丰富，用了定语从句,Ihavegoneshopping.,Tracycalledtosaythatshecouldntmeet,youatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.Shehopedyoucouldarrangeitanothertime.,LiHua,(09NationalTestPaperII),假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；位置：天安门广场南面；交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。,参考词汇：步行街pedestrianstreet当当车trolleycar地铁subway注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。,ItliestothesouthofTiananmenSquare.TothesouthofTiananmenSquareliesQianmenStreet.,DearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenstreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Alongthis800-metrestreet,therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTiananmenSquare,itisveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakebusesNo.17,69or59.SubwayLine2,hasastopthere,too.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsototheatresandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.Imsureyoulllikeit.Yours,LiHua,usefulstructuresandwordsforwriting,对（于）很积极beactivein合计为addupto承认错误admitonesmistake接受某人的建议take/followonesadvice就提出建议giveadviceon建议某人做某事advisesb.todosth.后天thedayaftertomorrow毕竟；终究afterall违心againstoneswill在岁时attheageof实现目标achieveonesaim急于做某事beanxioustodosth.分开住liveapart除了apartfrom,在空中；悬而未决intheair在户外，在露天里intheopenair在机场attheairport火警thefirealarm满腔怒火befilledwithanger因某人之言行而生气beangryatsth.生某人的气beangrywithsb.通知makeanannouncement相继地，按顺序地oneafteranother相互，彼此（三者或三者以上之间）oneanother相互（指两者之间）eachother没有回答givenoanswer为而担心beanxiousabout因某事向某人认错或道歉make/offeranapologytosbforsth.,使用过渡性词语。这样使文章更加连贯、更具有逻辑性。（1）表示增加的过渡词：also，and，andthen，too，inaddition，furthermore，moreover，again，ontopofthat，another，first/second/third等。（2）表示时间顺序的过渡词：now，then，before，after，afterwards，earlier，later，immediately，soon，next，inafewdays，gradually，suddenly，finally等。,（3）表示空间顺序的过渡词：near（to），far（from），infrontof，behind，beside，beyond，above，below，totheright/left，around，outside等。（4）表示比较的过渡词：inthesameway，justlike，justas等。（5）表示对照的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，inspiteof，eventhough等。,（6）表示结果和原因的过渡词：because，since，so，asaresult，therefore，then，thus，otherwise等。（7）表示目的的过渡词：forthisreason，forthispurpose，sothat等。（8）表示强调的过渡词：infact，indeed，surely，necessarily，certainly，withoutanydoubt，truly，torepeat，aboveall，mostimportant等。（9）表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，infact，inthiscase，foractually等。（10）表示总结的过渡词：finally，atlast，inconclusion，asIhaveshown，inotherwords，inbrief，inshort，ingeneral，onthewhole，ashasbeenstated等。,学会使用从句。如：（1）使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.（一般）Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.（高级）（2）使用状语从句Iwontbelievewhathesays.（一般）Nomatterwhathesays，Iwontbelieve.（高级）,Ifyoucomebackbeforesixoclock，youcangoout.（一般）Youcangooutonconditionthat（providedthat）youcomebackbeforesixoclock.（高级）Ifshedoesntagree，whatshallwedo？（一般）Supposingthatshedoesntagree，whatshallwedo？（高级）,3.合理使用复杂的句型，这样可以给人地道、深刻的感觉。如：Whenhespoke，hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.（一般）Themorehespoke，themoreexcitedhefelt.（高级）Whowillbeondutytoday.（一般）Whoseturnisittobeondutytoday？（高级）Shecantcorrectlypronouncetheword.（一般）Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.（高级）,这是反映你知识贮存量的多寡，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。例：Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.（一般）Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.（高级）ShewenttoAustraliainordertostudymusic.（一般）ShewenttoAustraliaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.（高级）,Becausetheweatherwasgood，ourjourneywascomfortable.（一般）Thankstothegoodweather，ourjourneywascomfortable.（高级）Whensheheardhehaddied，shewentpalewithsorrow.（一般）Atthenewsofhisdeath，shewentpalewithsorrow.（高级）,Appreciationofagoodpassage,MaryandherhusbandDimitrilivedinthetinyvillageofPerachorainsouthernGreece.OneofMarysprizepossessionswasalittlewhitelambwhichherhusbandhadgivenher.Shekeptittiedtoatreeinafieldduringthedayandwenttofetchiteveryevening.Oneevening,however,thelambwasmissing.Theropehadbeencut,soitwasobviousthatthelambhadbeenstolen.,Iwasbroughtupinasmallcityof,WhenDimitricameinfromthefields,hiswifetoldhimwhathadhappened.Dimitriatoncesetouttofindthethief.Heknewitwouldnotprovedifficultinsuchasmallvillage.Aftertellingseveralofhisfriendsaboutthetheft,Dimitrifoundoutthathisneighbour,Aleko,hadsuddenlyacquiredanewlamb.DimitriimmediatelywenttoAlekoshouseandangrilyaccusedhimofstealingthelamb.,Hetoldhimhehadbetterreturnitorhewouldcallthepolice.AlekodeniedtakingitandledDimitriintohisbackyard.Itwastruethathehadjustboughtalamb,heexplained,buthislambwasblack.Ashamedofhavingactedsorashly,DimitriapologizedtoAlekoforhavingaccusedhim.WhiletheyweretalkingitbegantorainandDimitristayedinAlekoshouseu