高三英语二轮复习公开课求助信ppt课件

高考备考书面表达,应用文专题求助信,之,丰顺中学高三19班,李洪庆,1,.,Step1analyzetherequirements(认真审题)Step2drawupanoutline(谋篇布局)Step3organizethesentences(联句成篇)Step4getthearticlepolishedup(锦上添花)Step5checkthemistakes(查漏补缺),FivestepstowriteanEnglishessay：,2,.,求助信的文章框架：,1.直言目的,2.描述困难,3.表达希望得到的帮助,（自我介绍）,（联系方式）,3,.,1.askforhelp/seekforhelp_2.encountersomeproblems_3.befacedwithdifficulties_4.offersomeconstructiveguidance_5.begratefultosb.forsth_6.offersb.ahand_7.(做)某事有困难_8.给某人留下深刻印象_9.设法成功做某事_10.进一步的消息_11.请某人帮忙_12.一次难忘的经历_,寻求帮助,遇到一些问题,面临困难,提供一些有建设性的指导,havetroublein（doing）sth.,给某人帮助,leavesb.adeepimpression,managetodosth.,furtherinformation,asksb.afavor,anunforgettableexperience,因某事感激某人,4,.,Recitation,提出请求帮助1.我想知道您是否能够2.如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。阐明自己的问题3.AndIvefoundthatmyproblemlieschieflyintwoaspects.Foronething,.Foranotherthing,.4.Therefore,itsmyhopethatyoucangiveussomepracticaltipsonhowto.表达谢意5.谢谢您一切的好意。,5,.,Usefulpatterns,1.Iamwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor/givemeahand.,2.Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublesmealot.Tobeginwith,Whatsworse,Whattroublesmemostis,3.Unfortunately,Ifinditquitedifficulttodo.,4.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iameagertogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceon?,5.Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.,6,.,【SentenceCorrection】,1.ThewholethingisgettingverydifficultandIrealneedyourgoodadvice!,real改为really,2.ThemainreasonImwritingisthatIhavelittefavourtoask.,little前面加a,3.Ithankyouintheadvanceforyourpromptattentiontothesematters.,删掉the,7,.,4.Iwouldliketobringyourattentiontosomeproblemswhatareoccurringinthisblock.,what改为that/which,5.Thepeopleintheapartmentbelowmineoftenplayloudlymusiclateatnight,makingitverydifficultformetosleep.,loudly改为loud,6.Also,thereisoftenrubbishleavinginthestairway.,leaving改为left,8,.,7.Iwouldappreciateyouifyouwouldhelpmesolvetheseproblems.,第一个you改为it,8.Weretryingtofindsomeonetolookafterthecatswhileweaway.,away前加are,9,.,9.Therearehundredsofpeoplegotoworkincarsandbuses.,go改为going,10.Ilookforwardtohearfromyouabouttheactionthatthecouncilwilltakeonthismatter.,hear改为hearing,10,.,DearMr.Brown,Imnowsafelybacktohome.ThanksyouverymuchforallthekindIgotfromyouduringmystay.Hopeeverythingarefinewithyouthere.NowIwonderwhetherIcouldaskyoufavor.WhenIcomeback,IsuddenlyrealizedthatIhaveleftmyEnglishdictionarybehindatyourplace.,Thank,kindness,is,_,_,_,a,_,came,_,had,【PassageCorrection】,11,.,ItisanpreciousgiftfrommyAmericanteacher.Wouldyoupleasebesokindlyastosenditbacktome?Illpayforthepostage.Thedictionarymustonthebookshelfinmybedroom.Itistheonewitharedcover.Thanksandallthebest.Yours,LiHua,a,kind,_,_,be,12,.,【Appreciation】,【2013新课标卷：请求帮助接机】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30,13,.,【Structure】,14,.,DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtohaveameetinginyourcity.DoyouremembertheChinesepaintingIpromisedyoulastyear?Myunclewillbringittoyousoon.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavour.ThisisthefirsttimethatmyunclevisitstheUS,soIhopeyoucanmeethimattheairport.Hearrivesat11:30a.m.onAugust6thandhisflightnumberisCA985.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakehimtohishotel.Myuncleistall.Hewillbewearingdarkglassesandabluejacket.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,写信目的,困难；问题,具体细节,感谢及回复,【Appreciation】,15,.,Translation,【2011山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】作文原题假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。,16,.,亲爱的Tom，你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。你的，李华,17,.,ItsbeenamonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?,1.你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。,2.今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。,IamgoingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJuly.Tohaveaverygoodperformance,Iammakingpreparationsforit.,18,.,However,Istillhavesometroubleincollectingusefulmaterials.Meanwhile,IfindithardtouseEnglishproperly.,3.然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。,4.如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand./Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucoulddomeafavor.,19,.,Youknow,Ihavebeenmissingyousinceyouleft,soIhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.,5.你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。,6.我等不及再次和你见面了。,Icantwaittoseeyouagain!,20,.,【模仿翻译】DearTom,ItsbeenamonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?IamgoingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJuly.Tohaveaverygoodperformance,Iammakingpreparationsforit.However,Istillhavesometroubleincollectingusefulmaterials.Meanwhile,IfindithardtouseEnglishproperly.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.Youknow,Ihavebeenmissingyousinceyouleft,soIhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.Icantwaittoseeyouagain!Yours,LiHua,21,.,求助信写作三步走：介绍自己、提出请求-说明原因及其它事项-表达谢意、期盼答复Tips:在许多情况下，求助信是写给不太认识的人或者机构，所以在信的开头可以做一下简单的自我介绍。同时，由于提出的请求往往都是需要麻烦别人的事情，所以要注意语气的礼貌程度，不要吝啬你的感谢。,22,.,1正确把握时态,保证语言准确性-目前某方面存在困难一般现在时-描绘得到帮助后的进步一般将来时2.熟悉常用句型,提高文章整体美感-首先做自我介绍，简要交待自己的困难,展望获得帮助后自己的进步,Attention,23,.,3.贴切使用过渡性词汇,提高文章逻辑性-first,besides,whatsmore-inthemeanwhile,atthesametime,inaddition,also4.适当使用高级表达方式,提高表达档次-“很难与朋友相处”1).Itshardtogetalongwithmyfriends.2).Ifinditdifficulttogetalong.,24,.,Sample1：,Dear_,Mynameis_.Im_.Ihavemetmuchdifficultyin_.First,_.Whatsworse/Worsestill,_.Whatsworst,_.Facedwith/Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.Wouldyouliketo_sothat/inorderthat_?Inthemeanwhile/Meanwhile,_.Also,Iwouldlikeyouto_to_.ImsurethatIcan_withyourhelp./Iwillbemuchappreciatedifyouhelpmeto_.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours_,_,25,.,Dear_,Iam_(介绍自己的身份).Iwill/am_(与请求有关的自身现状)。Idliketo_(阐明自己的请求).Iwillappreciateyour_(有关该请求的详细信息).Imgoingto_(对方如能帮助实现请求，自己将要做些什么)。Herearethereasonswhy_(承上启下，开始解释原因).Foronething,_(请求的