2017专四写作新题型特训 DAY 1ppt课件.ppt

TEM4新题型写作特训,Lecturer:,1,写作题型变化,1）命题形式略有变化，不再考查NOTEWRITING.2）写作模式有所变化Previously:陈述观点论证观点得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）NOW:概括双方观点，并提出自己观点论证观点得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）,2,TACTICStogetexcellentmarks,仔细审题，分析材料(2-3mins)列出提纲，确定布局(3-4mins)导语部分：引出话题，概括双方观点；主体部分：提出自身观点，并列出多条理由论证自身观点；结尾部分：重申观点或提出建议3.正式写作(30-35mins)4.检查并优化(2-3mins),材料作文,3,Structureof1stpara.,Describeaphenomenon+introducethediscussedtopic+opinionsfrombothsides;Introducethediscussedtopic+opinionsfrombothsides;,4,OLDWINEINANEWBOTTLE!,与传统命题作文并无二致！,TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood,Exceptions:,5,AmajoradvantageanddisadvantageofadvertisingonTelevision,Previously:Nowadays,moreandmoreadvertisementsareseenonTVeveryday.SomepeoplethinkthatadvertisingonTVcanbringuslotsofbenefits,butotherholdadifferentopinion.Inmyopinion,Iminfavoroftheformer.Nowwhat?,6,PassengersShouldnotEatandDrinkonSubwayTrains,Previously:Inrecentyears,eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainshavebeenfoundmoreandmorecommon,whichhastriggeredmanyproblems.Thus,insomecitiespassengersareforbiddentodothatandviolatorswillbefined.,AsfarasImconcerned,eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainsareindeedimproperbehaviorsandshouldbediscouraged,andthereareseveralreasonsaccountingformystance.,7,Nowwhat?ShouldPassengers?,Inrecentyears,eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainshavebeenfoundmoreandmorecommon,whichhastriggeredmanyproblems.Thus,insomecitiespassengersareforbiddentodothatandviolatorswillbefined.,Therehasbeenaragingdebateoverthenewregulation.Somebelievethateatinganddrinkingdontthreatthesafetyofthesubwayoperationandarenotagainstanylawandregulation.Otherswanttocurbthebadbehaviorsoastomakethepublicenvironmentcleanandtidy.,8,材料作文：导语部分写作,大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。whenitcomestothevastpoolofyoungandunderemployedcollegegraduates,theyarereallyonthehornsofadilemmaofchoosingaproperplacetostarttheircareer.TochooseamoderncitylikeBJandSH,ortostayinasmalltown,isatoughquestion.Somegraduatespreferbigcitiesforthemetropolisesremainsastrongappealtothemwiththemultitudinousopportunities.Smalltowns,insomeothergraduatesopinion,createacomfortableworkenvironment.,9,3.微信存在风险之我见。Nowadays,WeChathasgainedpopularity,especiallyitsfunctionofShake-ShakeandDriftBottlewhichallowsuserstorandomlyconnecttootheruserscloseby.However,somepeopleareworriedaboutthepotentialrisksbroughtaboutbyWeChatspositioningfunctionwhenusingittosocializewithstrangers.,材料作文：导语部分写作,10,材料作文：导语部分写作,2.是否应该让年轻人担任政府要职？Nowadays,whetheryoungpeopleshouldholdimportantpostsinthegovernmenthasbecomeacontroversialissue.Manycitizenstendtodistrustyoungleadersworkingabilitiesduetotheirageandlackofworkexperience.However,somepeoplebelievethatyoungstersareeligibleforleadershiprolesbecauseoftheirinnovationabilityandvitality.,11,那么问题来了,Pros2.astome;3.frommyperspective;4.personallytalking;5.inmyview;6.frommypointofviewetc.,Elaboration:1.Firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast;2First,second,third;3Firstly,secondly,thirdly;4Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand;5Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,lastbutnotleast;6Initially,besides/furthermore,lastbutnotleast,15,CONCLUSION,Inconclusion,Istronglyholdthatitisbetterforgraduatestochooseajobinbigcities.Theabundantopportunitiestherewillenableyoungpeopletoexploittheirpotentialandrealizetheirdreams.Althoughlifeinbigcitiesmaybemoredifficultandarduous,alltheeffortsandhardshipwillbepaidoffifwearedeterminedtoseizetheopportunities.,16,Allinall,whileembracingtheconvenienceofWeChat,wehavetotakemeasurestoguardagainstitspotentialrisks.Aslongasweareawareoftheriskswhichareinherentinsoftware,wecansafelyenjoythesurprisebroughtbyrecenttechnologicaladvancement.,17,Howtowriteaconclusion,AllinallInanutshellTosumupInawordInconclusionInsho