英语书面表达写作实例指导

EnglishWriting,中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。提示：1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他；2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资源；3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。要求：1、词数150左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数。2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。,Howcanweorganizethepassage?,Para.1,Measures,Phenomena,Harm,Para.3,Para.2,Para.1Phenomena,havelightsonordertoomuchfoodandleaveleftoversonthetable,Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoneyandspendtoomuchonsnacksordrinks.,usepapercasuallyspendpocketmoneyonsnacks,Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.,leavetapwaterrunning,Para.2Harm,haveabadeffectononescharacterbuildingaddfinancialburdentoonesparentsuseuptheworldslimitednaturalresources,(school)burdenwithextraexpenditure(开支).,Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworldslimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.,Para.3Measures,haveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituationeducatestudentsinschoolsetrulesstartfromoneselftaketheleadinreducingthewaste,Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.,Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoneyandspendtoomuchonsnacksordrinks.,Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworldslimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.,Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.,117words,第五档(很好)（21-25分）第四档(好)（16-20分）第三档(适当)（11-15分）第二档(较差)（6-10分）第一档(差)（1-5分）,书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（16-20分）完成了试题规定的任务。比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。,第三档（11-15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏，没有写自己的认识应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,第二档（6-10分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。未能清楚地表达短文的内容，写了一些无关内容语法结构简单，词汇项目有限有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,Howcanwegetourpassagepolishedup?,Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavemuchleftoversonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoneyandspendtoomuchonsnacksordrinks.,Thestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashingandhavethelightsoninthedaytime,whichmeansahugewasteofwaterandelectricity.Somestudentsgetintoabadhabitoforderingmuchdeliciousfoodinthecanteenbuttheydonteatallthefood,leavingmuchonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoney.Soitishightimewehadtodealwiththeproblem.Thereasonsareasfollows:,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;,Tips,Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworldslimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedup.,Inthefirstplace,thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Secondly,itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Lastbutnotleast,theworldslimitednaturalresources,suchaswaterandelectricity,willbeusedupsoon.,FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,Whatsmore,Finally,Whatsworse,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;,Tips,Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.,Buthowcanwereducewaste?Inmyopinion,itiseverybodysdutytofightagainstwaste.Ontheonehand,Ishouldstartwithmyselftosaveeverything.Ontheotherhand,Idliketoremindmyfriendsheretotaketheleadinreducingthewaste.,AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkonlywhenallofusarefullyawareofitsseriousnesscanthesituationbeimproved.Ontheonehand,itisnecessaryforschoolstoeducateeverystudentnottowasteanythinginanyformandontheotherhandeveryoneofusshouldstartwithourselvestofightagainstwaste.Itisnotuntilallofusareinvolvedintheactivitythatwecanbringthesituationundercontrol.,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。,Tips,养成良好的写作习惯一、书写规范，卷面整洁；二、审清题目，提炼要点；三、组词造句，组句成篇；四、仔细检查，认真修改。,Nowdays,itiscommonthatthestudentshavetapwaterrunningafterwashingandleavethelightsoninthedaytime,whichmeansahugewasteofwaterandelectricity.Somestudentsgetintoabadhabitoforderingmuchdeliciousfoodinthecanteenbuttheydonteatallthefood,leavingmuchonthetable.Someevenasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoney.Soitishightimewehadtodealwiththeproblem.Thereasonsareasfollows:,Sample:,Inthefirstplace,thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Secondly,itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Lastbutnotleast,italsoexhauststheworldslimitednaturalresources,suchaswaterandelectricity.,Buthowcanwereducewaste?Inmyopinion,itiseverybodysdutytofightagainstwaste.Ontheonehand,Ishouldstartwithmyselftosaveeverything.Ontheotherhand,Idliketoremindmyfriendsheretotaketheleadinreducingthewaste.,Thanksforyourkindattendance!,国务院日前向全国各机构下发关于限制生产销售使用塑料袋的通知。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇150词左右的短文,简述该规定的有关内容,并就此谈谈你的看法。,FromJune1,2008,Chinawillbanshopsfromofferingplasticshoppingbagsforfree.Allsupermarkets,departmentstoresandshopsmustchargethecustomersforthem.,EachyearChinaconsumesalargenumberofplasticshoppingbags.Toomuchuseofthem,inadequaterecyclingandotherfactorshavecausedaseriouswasteofresourcesandseriousenvironmentalpollutionaswell.,Ifthingsgoonlikethis,theearthweliveonwillbeburiedinanoceanofwhiterubbishoneday.ThenewregulationbringsChinainlinewithagrowinginternationaltrendtocutbackontheuseofplasticbags.,Personally,Ithinktheregulationisatimelymeasureagainstplasticbags.Thebanonfreeplasticbagsencouragespeopletobemoreenv