写作常见错误分析.ppt

英语写作常见错误分析,GuoRui,一.语法错误,（一）句子结构错误1.主从句叠置(1)Therearemoreandmorestudentsliketousethecomputer.(2)Therearestillmanyproblemsshouldbenotedandresolved.,who,that,2.简单句叠置,Ilikechattingonlineverymuch,Igotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend.,so,3.从句叠置,Asisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.Itisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.,4.句子成分缺失,Ifworkhard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.Workinghard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.,we,5.语序错误,1.Whycollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?2.Ioftenwonderwherehavetheygottheirmoney.,do,theyhave,2.语态错误,1.Ihaveexcitedseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcome.2.Mostofthestudentssatisfywiththeserviceinthedinghall.,been,aresatisfied,(二).动词错误,1.时态错误Manypeoplethoughtthattheinternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.,think,3.单复数错误,1.Wisemanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.Awisemanseeksopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.2.Someoneareafraidthatcomputersmaycontrolmeninthefuture.,men,people,4.非谓语动词错误,1.Doexerciseinthemorningisgoodforoneshealth.2.Havingstudiedinourschoolfor3years,thecanteenservicehaschangedalot,Doing,Ifindthat,（三）代词错误,1.Wecanusecomputersindoingeverythingyoulike.2.Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodotheirwashingontheirown.,we,Collegestudents,（四）冠词错误,1.Horseisanusefulanimal.2.TheexamwillbeheldintheDecember,2004.,AThehorse,(五）词性错误,1.Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggests.2.Ifapersonwantstosuccess,hemustlearntoenduresufferingsandsetbacks.,suggestions.,succeed,二.用词错误,1.Studentsmustknowhowtoapplyacomputer.2.PeoplecantouchmanynewthingsontheInternet.3.Thepurposeofthisletteristoreactsomeopinionsontheserviceinthedininghall.,operateuse,learn,express,三.表达习惯错误,1.Now6000yuancanbuyaP4computer.Now6000yuanisenoughforyoutobuyaP4computer.NowyoucanbuyaP4computerfor6000yuan.2.Aroomoftenlives6-8students.,Ina,表达习惯错误,3.Ithinkthisgreatchangehasthreereasons.Ithinktherearethreereasonsforthisgreatchange.4.Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.,that,四.标点符号及大小写错误,1.However,everycoinshastwosides,Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenarethebestamongalluniversities