2016 全国卷 短文改错第一轮复习

ProofReadingtheFirstRoundReview,短文改错第一轮专题复习,授课教师：周淑涵,IWarming-upCorrectyourclassmatescompositions,DearLucy,IdliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomethenextSaturdayfortheDoubleNinthFestival,thatisthedayfortheoldpeopleinourculture.Wellgothereandpreparesomeactivity,suchasmakedumplingsandcakeswiththeelderthere.Wellalsospentsomefuntimesinging,dancingandplayinggames,whichwehopewillmakeithappy.Weshouldreturnbackaround4oclockintheafternoon.Ifyouareabletocomewithus,pleaseletusknow,orwellwaityouatthegateat9inthemorning.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua,Add/Correct/Delete,II.CommonMistakesinProofReading,1.冠词article2.关联词associatedword3.名词noun4.非谓语动词non-predicateverb5.形容词adjective,6.动词verb7.代词pronoun8.副词adverb9.连词conjunction10.介词preposition,动词形，名词数；还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别；冠词连词常光顾；习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析；逻辑关系须关注。,III各个击破：1.动词形（动词的_和_的错误,及主谓_的错误）.,1)WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoyagain,myfathersaid,“Thatsit.Nomoretoysforyou.”(2012课标全国卷)2)TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.(2013课标全国卷II)3)Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandafishwascaught.(2013陕西卷),时态,语态,不一致,tore,drunk,was,III各个击破：2.名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。,1)Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktograyovertheyears.(2013课标全国卷I)2)Wouldyouliketogivemesomeadvices?,shoulders,advice,III各个击破：3.注意形和副例如：,1)Iamawfullytiring,butIknowIllneverfallsleep.(2013浙江卷)2)Afterwaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.(2013陕西卷)3)Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweeks.(2012浙江卷)4）IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.(2012课标全国卷),tired,impatient,Unfortunately,less,III各个击破：3.注意形和副,1.形容词的用法：_结构中作表语；修饰_等;区分-ed及-ing结尾的adj.2.副词的用法：修饰_、_、_，作_语3.注意形容词和副词的_级和_级,系表,名词,动词,形容词副词,整个句子,比较,最高,状,III各个击破：4.非谓语，细辨别（非谓语动词形式：动词ing形式，过去分词，动词不定式）,1）Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner(2013课标全国卷II)2）Themeetingholdingyesterdaywasofgreatimportance.3）Weweremadeworkdayandnightinthefactory.,Having,held,to,III各个击破：5.冠词常光顾a/an/the误用,1）Theelderlyladywasintearsandgavemewarmhandshake.2)Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.3)Dontforgettobringaumbrellawithyou.,a,the,an,III各个击破：6.代词格，细领悟（人称代词格的误用；代词与所指内容在性和数方面不一致；作形式主语/形式宾语it的遗漏或误用;不定代词的误用）,1）“Thatwasveryniceofyou,Mother.ButIdidntthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.”“Neitherdidme.”2)Ifpossible,youcandevotewhatyousavetothosewhoneedourhelp.3)Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatthepriceonit.4)Somecountriesareinfavoroftheissue,butotherscountriesareagainstit.,I,your,it,other,III各个击破：7.习惯用法要记住：考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识,如介词的搭配。其错误形式主要有：多词、少词和搭配错误。,1）Itwasverykindforthemtomeetme2）Wemustkeepinmindthatweplayfortheteaminsteadourselves.3）Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmiles.,of,of,as,III各个击破：8.句子成分多分析,Asanexchangestudent,Ieagertoknowmoreaboutyourculture.,am,III各个击破：9.逻辑错误须关注,常考的逻辑错误除了代词的张冠李戴以外还有：连词but,and,or,so,及because,however等的用法错误。Momoisashycat,butsheseldomcomesnearpeoplewhomshehasnevermet.,and/so,实战演练,DearMr.Li,Iamverygladtobeguestofyourfamily.Thankforacceptingme.Asanexchangestudent,Iameagerlytoknowmoreaboutyourculture.AndIthoughtthebestwaytoachievethegoalistostaywithmyfamily.ThatsbecauseIchoosehome-stay.Whatsmore,IloveChinesedishes,whichplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture.Also,home-staywillgivememorechancestomakingChinesefriends.Iwillbeinyourhomethenextmonth.Canyouprepareformeaseparateroom?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,Mike,分析点评,Iamverygladtobeguestofyourfamily.Thankforacceptingme.Asanexchangestudent,Iameagerlytoknowmoreaboutyourculture.AndIthoughtthebestwaytoachievethegoalistostaywithmyfamily.,a,冠词常光顾,eager,注意形和副,Thanks,习惯用法要记住,think,动词形,your,代词所指，细领悟,分析点评,ThatsbecauseIchoosehome-stay.Whatsmore,IloveChinesedishes,whichplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture.Also,home-staywillgivememorechancestomakingChinesefriends.,why,逻辑关系须关注,make,非谓语，细辨别,play,动词形,分析点评,Iwillbeinyourhomethenextmonth.Canyouprepareformeaseparatelyroom?,冠词常光顾,习惯用法要记住,Thankyouforlistening!,PartA单句改错（谓语动词篇）,1.Somestudentsthoughtusingmobilephoneisbadfortheirstudy.2.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmebecauseIwassofaraway.3.Wouldyoupleaserepeatit,sir?Iamnotlistening.4.Itwasturnedouttobeherowncup,whichshedleftontheshelfbymistake.5.Iwassentmymotherabunchofflowers.6.Manyastudenthavejoinedtheclub.,was,would,was,has,PartA单句改错（谓语动词篇）,7.Chinesefoodarelovedbymoreandmoreforeigners.8.Two-thrdsoftheworkhavebeenfinished.9.Henotonlycametoseemebutalsotellmethenews.10.Eitherthestudentsortheteacherknowthetruth.11.Thereareanappleandtwobananasonthetable.12.Henry,ratherthanJaneandJohn,areresponsiblefortheloss.,is,has,told,knows,is,is,PartB单句改错（非谓语动词篇）,1.Sheisbusyallday,cookingforus,washourclothesandalsoteachingustodoourhomework,yetwithoutcomplaining.2.Atthebeginning,Ialwayskeptsilentinoralclasstoavoidmakemistakes.3.ThenIcanspendfourweekstakeasummercourse,hopingitwillhelpmeimprovemyfuturestudies.,washing,making,taking,PartB单句改错（非谓语动词篇）,4.Inoticedmotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandayoungcouple.5.Nowadayswearerequiringtodoresearchworkapartfromthelessonswelearninschool.6.Iwasatabusycrosswaitedforthelightstoturngreen.7.Youdbetternottomissthechan