高中英语基础写作―学会用复合句和非谓语动词

基础写作训练,_学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,2008年广东高考基础写作,第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.Thesport,whichfirstappearedin1896,waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928Games.ItwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheOlympic.However,notuntil1968werewomenfirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshooting.Withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular,ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today.,广东08高考基础写作范文：,句子表达有何亮点？,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm.,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子,Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,tearscamedownfromhisface.,Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,itismadeofglass.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.,OverfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.,4.过多地使用并列句组合信息,Weweredrivingoutintothecountry,andwesawourEnglishteacherridinginabus,andthebuswascrowded.,Itisabeautifulday,andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing.,Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing.,Asweweredrivingoutintothecountry,wesawourEnglishteacherridinginacrowdedbus.,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,Kateisanewstudent.Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.Shespeaksadialect.Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.,Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudy,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,IfchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime,thiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy,方法2：,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters网络语言：weblanguage,要求：1.用两句话表达表格内容2.两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）：1.学生作文中出现很多错别字2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。,Therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositions.,Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,合并句子：,Theyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,1.Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters,第二句:1.每天有很多作业做2.没有记住生字。,Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday.,2.Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,3.Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,合并句子：,Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,连接两句话：Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.Moreover,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,一个乞丐在路边讨钱(askformoney)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。乞丐很生气，伸出(stickout)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(tripover)。李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a100-yuannote)。突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。,实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。,Abeggar,Exchangeanddiscussyourpartnerscomposition,thengiveeachotherascoreaccordingtothefollowingcriteria.,Pairwork,AbeggarOneday,whenMr.Lihurriedonhiswaytowork,abeggarontheroadsidewasaskingformoney,butMr.Lipaidnoattentiontohim.Asaresult,thebeggargotangryandstuckouthiswalkingstick,whichalmosttrippedMr.Liover.Realizingthebeggarwasadisabledperson,Mr.Libegantosearchforsomemoneyinhispockettogivehim.Hetookout