九年级英语写作Unit 7 Where would you like to visit

-Unit 7 Where would you like to visit? 【佳篇欣赏】 ALast summer holiday, I went to Hainan with my family by air. The weather was wonderful! It wasnt hot at all. The sky was blue more than I could describe, the sea was blue and bright more than I could believe. Walking by the sea is just like being in an oil painting. We sailed to an island called Xidao. I swam there. Swimming in the sea is quite different from that in a swimming pool, because the sea is so deep that I can dive for a long time. We also enjoyed the food there. We had a nice seafood dish. It was really tasty. I really like that place. I hope to go there again some day. BBeijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter here is long and cold and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season in Beijing, for it is neither too cold nor too hot. As for traditional food, one of the most famous is Beijing Roast Duck. In addition, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, which brings a better chance to know about China and Beijing. So, welcome to Beijing and enjoy everything here.CMany people like to go to places where there are mountains and rivers. I would like to visit somewhere unusual. I surfed the Internet and found that Hami is a place worth visiting. Hami is in the east of Xinjiang. It is famous for Hami melon. The weather there is unusual. It is dry all the year round. It is very hot in summer and hardly rains. In winter, it is very cold, and sometimes it snows heavily. The scenery there is quite unusual. In the south of the city, it is mainly gobi desert. Hami City is an oasis in the desert. In the north of city，it is mainly grassland. It is just like two worlds. I hope to go there some day. Its really an attractive place. 【原创习作点评】寒假即将来临，你们家决定外出旅游，你认为应该去哪儿呢？写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈你的想法，并说明为什么。分析：这是一篇发挥余地较大的作文，可以根据实际情况来写自己想要去的一个地方。从题目要求来看，首先要说明自己想去的地方。也可以先谈自己想去什么类型的地方，再选择一个具体的城市。其次，要讲原因，就是为什么想去这个地方。根据自己所了解的，简单介绍所要去的地方，要凸出特征，引起人们的兴趣,把重点放在可以做的事情上。 习作 1：Winter holiday is coming. Id like to go to somewhere warm, because it is too cold here. I think we can go to Sanya. Sanya is warm in winter. Its the best time to go there. The Temperature is between 23 and 29. We can enjoy the sunshine at the beach. In the morning，we can walk along the seaside because the air is fresh. If it is warm enough we can even swim in the sea. Lets go to Sanya. 教师点评这是一篇中等的学生习作。得分点（1）内容完整，符合作文要求（2）语言流畅，层次清晰。失分点此处应为go somewhere, somewhere是副词，副词前不使用介词。此处介词搭配错误，应该是on the beach。习作 2：Winter holiday is coming. I think we should go somewhere to enjoy the holiday. Winter is a beautiful season. I think we should go to Harbin. There we can enjoy the world of snow. We have many things to do there. We can go to the Sun Island to see the ice sculpture. Its more beautiful at night. I think it must be interesting. We can also go skating on the Songhuajiang River. It must be more exciting. I want to make a big snowman and have a snowball fight with my parents. I am looking forward to going there.教师点评这是一片较好的学生习作。得分点（1）能按照题目要求写作，作文内容完整。 （2）通过举例，说明了去哈尔滨旅游的特色，比较有说服力。（3）用词较丰富，无语言错误。【拓展练笔】1、在假期生活中，几乎每个人都去过自己喜欢的地方，即使你没有如愿以偿，也会对你想去的地方有很深的了解。现在请你介绍一下你最想游览的地方。提示：1. 想要游览的城市； 2. 那个城市的自然风光； 3. 值得游览的地方。One possible version:Id like to visit places where the scenery is really beautiful. I think I will go to Guilin by train with my parents next summer holiday. Guilin is in the north of Guangxi. The city is famous for its beautiful scenery in the world. The environment is very nice there. The hills are green, the water is clear and the air is fresh. Every year thousands of tourists visit the city. We can enjoy the beauty of Lijiang River by boat. We will also pay a visit to the mountains around the city. Of course, we wont miss the Elephant Trunk Hill. I am sure we will have a good time in Guilin. 2、 (改自湖北省咸宁市中考题) Mr. Green 和他的家人明天下午两点半乘飞机到北京，你去机场接他们。他们在北京逗留一周，在此期间，你将带他们去登长城、游览其他名胜地、市内观光、购物等。请根据提示写一篇英语作文。要求：1. 短文必须包括上述所有要点，可适当增减细节，使其意思完整、语句通顺；2. 词数不少于80个。One possible version:Mr. Green and his family will arrive in Beijing at half past two tomorrow afternoon. I will go to the airport to meet them. They will stay in Beijing for a week. During their stay here, I will take them to the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven and some other places of interest in the city. They will go sightseeing around the city with me. They will do some shopping and buy some souvenir for their friends before they leave Beijing. I hope they will have a good time in Beijing. 3、（改自海口市中考题）假如你是一名导游，提示的信息，用英语向你的游客们介绍一下海口。位置海南省的东北部、省会城市人口150万气候夏季凉爽、冬季温暖，气候宜人环境碧海蓝天、空气清新、吸引各地游客景点假日海滩(Holiday Beach)、海瑞墓(Tomb of Hairui)等要求：1. 语句通顺、语意连贯、要点齐全；2. 不要逐字翻译，可进做紧扣主题的适当发挥；3. 词数不少于90个。One possible version:Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Haikou City. I am your tour guide. Id like to tell you something about Haikou. Haikou is the capital city of Hainan Province. Its in the northeast of Hainan, and it has a population of 1,500,000. The weather here is very pleasant. Its cool in summer and warm in winter. So Haikou is a nice city to go on vacation for many people. We can enjoy the fresh air, the blue sky, the endless sea and the long