英语写作训练(上课)PPT课件

.,1,ClassPreparation,全力投入会使你与众不同！重视课堂，全神贯注，你一定能做的更好！,请拿出你的英语写作训练学案；课堂笔记本、双色笔。激情第一!,我是最棒的！,我的课堂我的舞台,我的课堂我的舞台,.,2,英语写作训练,EnglishWritingPractice,2013.10.16,.,3,Tasks,Demands,howtowriteawholesentence.(句子构建)2.Abilityaim:Groupcooperationandexploringthemysteryofwriting.(合作探究，学会总结),.,4,自主学习（Self-work）任务：ReadtheSelf-workpaperandcompletethesetasks.Agoodessayismadeupof_parts.Agoodparagraphshouldcontain:_材料一linkingwords;variedsentencepatterns.,.,5,Agoodessayisusuallymadeupof：,1.Topicparagraph(主题段)SupportingParagraph/Point12.SupportingParagraph/Point2(扩展段)SupportingParagraph/Point33.Concludingparagraph(结论段),.,6,Body(supportingideas),Conclusion,Introduction(topic),.,7,Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.,Topicsentence(主题句)Supportingsentences(扩展句),.,8,材料一：,Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall,topicsentence,.,9,Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.,材料二：,justlikeagarden.,Ourschoolis,justlikeagarden.,Ourschoolis,topicsentence,.,10,材料三,IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,Englishalsoplaysanimportantroleintodaysbusinessworld.Lastly,.,11,时间先后：,first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,转折关系：,but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless,因果关系：,because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat,让步关系：,although,evenif/though,though,inspiteofthefactthat,正确使用有关连接词(linkingwords),.,12,递进关系：,条件关系：,if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat,表列举：,forexample/instance,takeforexample,thatstosay,inotherwords,asfollows,表总结：,inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstatedabove,allinall,正确使用有关连接词(linkingwords),whatsmore,inaddition,furthermore;foronethingforanotherthing,.,13,丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。,e.g.Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!,感叹句,强调句,e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.,.,14,e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Therecomesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.,e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.,e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.,倒装句,省略句,with结构,.,15,e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.,定语从句,e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.,各种名词性从句,.,16,e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.,各种状语从句,.,17,1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）,_surpriseshimis_thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇,Weak_Iam,Illmaketheeffort.,_notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper_he_whathadhappened.,I_thephysicsexam_yourhelp.,Line1-1林前钰,自主学习高效展示,What,that,as/though,Itwas,that,knew,wouldnt,havepassed,without,.,18,5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（祈使句+and）,_bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,_and_,theywentbacktoschool.,_,Iwontbelieve.,Studyhard_youllmakerapidprogress.,Line2-1张珂,Followed,Singing,laughing,Nomatterwhathesays,and,.,19,9HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themorethemore),Nosooner_backfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.,Weall_him.,Theplan_afailure.,_hespoke,_hefelt.,Line8-1王鑫,Comment：Line6-2刘琦,hadhe,come,thinkhighlyof,变式训练：He_byus.,isof,highlythought,turnedout,tobe,Themore,themoreexcited,vi.,.,20,Summary(自主学习总结):,Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.,Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.,Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.,Agoodparagraphisonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.,.,21,自主学习评价,.,22,Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife._1_._2_,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._3_,theywanttowinothersadmirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._4_,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._5_,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool._6_,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!,ThereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.FirstlyC.LastbutnotleastD.WhatsmoreE.AsfarasIamconcernedF.Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,.,23,进一步总结：写作训练的思路,写一完整的句子:,句子的完整句子的连贯句子的简洁句子的多样化,主题句,扩展句,结论句,设计一个段落:,.,24,CooperationPractice(合作探究练习),.,25,合作探究一,Exercise一1.判断正误；(Paper3)2.翻译简单句；3.翻译并列句；4.判断从句；5.改正句子。,.,26,高效展示一,Comment1：L3-1秦；Comment2：L2-3臧,.,27,写一个完整的句子,1.这几句是正确的句子吗?如果你认为有误,该怎么改?,1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.,2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.,3.Ihaveabrother,whoisadoctor.,last,and,4.Thereareonly4studentsattendclass.,who,attending,Line6-1倪雪,.,28,重点特别强调,3.翻译下面的并列句,4)_HanHuisingwell,_shedanceswell.,5)Imeantto_youyesterday,butyouwerenotinyouroffice.或I_totellyouyesterday,butyouwerenotinyouroffice.,Notonlydoes,butalso,havetold,hadmeant,.,29,1)Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion.2)ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday.3)Thatswhattheyshoulddo.4)WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain.5)ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor.6)Astimewenton,Einsteinstheoryprovedtobecorrect.,主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句,定语从句,状语从句,4.判断下面句子含有那种从句,L5-2任云洋,.,30,1)Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,one-thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries.,1.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,_one-thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries.2.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,one-thirdof_arefromnearbycountries.,5.改正下面句子，使之成为正确的一句话,and,whom,L7-3禚焕发,.,31,2)Itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefield.,1.Itwasraininghard,_theycouldnotworkinthefield.2.Itwasraining_hard_theycouldnotworkinthefield.3.Theycouldnotworkinthefield_itwasraininghard.4._itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefield.,so,so,that,because,As,.,32,3)Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom,hecarriedabagofbookswithhim.,1.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom_hecarriedabagofbookswithhim.2.Theprofessor,_carriedabagofbooks,walkedintotheclassroom,3.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom,_abagofbookswithhim.（-ing）5.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom_abagofbooks.（prep）,and,who,carrying,with,.,33,合作探究二,（小组快速讨论，做出决定。）Exercise二、句子连贯；Exercise三、句子简洁；Exercise四、设计段落。,.,34,高效展示二,.,35,二、句子的连贯,Faulty:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.,1).Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobywhathedoes.2).Amanisjudgednotonlybyhiswordsbutalsobyhisdeeds.,前后的一致、对等、平衡,Group1,.,36,Attention,连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序、清楚句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾,.,37,三、句子的简洁,1.Doyouknowthegirlwhoisdressedinred?2.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroomandhecarriedabagofbookswithhim.3.Themanwhoisstandingbythewindowisourteacher.4.Wedidntknowhertelephonenumber,sowecouldntgetintouchwithher.5.JohnsonlookedlikeamanwhowaswantedinLosAngelesforrobbery.6.Wefinallyreachedhomeat10pm,andweweretiredandhungry.,carrying,Notknowing,Group2,.,38,四、段落设计,1)根据全段内容拟定一个主题句：_.Firec