（包头专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作04 事情介绍课件

,话题写作(四)事情介绍,第三篇话题写作妙解,【典型例题】你们班进行了一次关于同学们心目中的未来理想工作的调查,下面是调查表的一部分。请根据调查表的内容,以“adreamjob”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍一下你和你的同学们的性格特点、爱好、理想工作及原因。,一、审圈要点、定时态、定人称你们班进行了一次关于同学们心目中的未来理想工作的调查,下面是调查表的一部分。请根据调查表的内容,以“adreamjob”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍一下你和你的同学们的性格特点、爱好、理想工作及原因。,二、列列短语,尽可能为习惯用语forfreetravelaroundtheworldbegoodat/dowellinmakefriendsthereasonwhycometruenotonlybutalso,三、加定人称(第三人称和第一人称)、定时态(一般现在时)形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。liqiangisoutgoing.hishobbyisreading.hecantravelforfree.hewantstobeatourguide.wanglingisconfident.herhobbyiswriting.shewantstobeareporter.shecanmeetmanyinterestingpeople.imhumorous.myhobbyisacting.iwanttobeanactor.,四、连添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯保证基础平均分上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。whatwillyoudointhefuture?accordingtoit,wemadeasurvey.forexample,liqiangisoutgoing.hishobbyisreading.hecantravelforfree.hewantstobeatourguide.whatsmore,wanglingisconfident.herhobbyiswriting.shewantstobeareporter.becauseshecanmeetmanyinterestingpeople.,asforme,imhumorous.myhobbyisacting.soiwanttobeanactor.imsurewecanachieveourdreamjob.五、美表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活避免chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。,及时体验基础句accordingtoit,wemadeasurvey.发展句wemadeasurveyaboutwhatthestudentswanttodowhentheygrowup.基础句liqianglikesreading.升格句liqiangisfondofreading.基础句wanglingshobbyiswriting.升格句sheisinterestedinwriting.shewantstobeareporter.,六、查典型病例(参见话题一)七、洁书写定天下!whatwillyoudointhefuture?accordingtoit,wemadeasurveyaboutwhatthestudentswanttodowhentheygrowup.forexample,liqiangisoutgoing.heisfondofreading.hewantstobeatourguide.ifhebecomesatourguide,hebelieveshecantravelforfree.whatsmore,wanglingisconfident.sheisinterestedinwriting.shewantstobeareporterbecauseshecanmeetmanyinterestingpeople.asforme,imhumorous.imbetteratacting.soihopetobeanactor.,wedbetterworkharderthanbeforetoachieveourdreamjob.,2019德州假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生,你校正在参加全市文明校园的评选。以下内容是学校根据山东省中小学文明校园评比细则列举的部分信息。请你根据表格内容,写一篇英语短文,向社会宣传自己的学校,并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事,为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。,要求1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;3.词数:80-100,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。imfromno.3middleschool.myschoolismakingitsefforttobeacivilizedschool.letmeintroduceit.therearemanyexperiencedteachersinmyschool.theyhelpusmakeprogressinmanyways._letstryourbesttomakeourschoolmorebeautifulandmakeitacivilizedschool.,onepossibleversion:imfromno.3middleschool.myschoolismakingitsefforttobeacivilizedschool.letmeintroduceit.therearemanyexperiencedteachersinmyschool.theyhelpusmakeprogressinmanyways.ourfriendlyheadteachersoftencommunicatewithourparentsandteachustogrowasaperson.abiglibrarystandsinthecenterofmyschool.itholdsalargenumberofbooks.wecanenjoybookshereandlearnmoreabouttheworld.aplaygroundandsomesciencelabsareinmyschool.wecandosportsandfindsomethingnewafterschool.ithelpsuskeepfitandhaveacolorfullife.,50%ofourschooliscoveredwithplants.therearedifferentkindsoftreesandflowers.itiscleanandbeautiful.weoftenhavesafetyeducationclasses.weca