（宿迁专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作07 情感表达课件

,话题写作（七）情感表达,第三篇话题写作妙解,【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。,【参考谚语】1.asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的药。4.worrykillsmorementhanwork.忧虑比劳累更伤人。,【相关短语】thanksfor因感谢;makenewfriends结交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顾;keepintouch保持联系;befriendlyto对友好;bringback带回,【亮点句型】学校的感受1.idliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.youalwaysencouragedmetostudyharder.3.althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.4.imsothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.,家庭的感受1.idliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.2.imsuremyparentswillgetonwellwitheachothersoon.3.weshouldhavegoodhabitsandtryourbesttotakeexerciseeveryday.4.illspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.5.whenifailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.6.ibelieveifwedoso,wecanhaveahappylife.,.根据汉语意思完成句子。1.在我去上学和回来的路上,你们总是和我在一起。toandfromschool,youwerealwayswithme.2.我将会尽我最大的努力去理解你,并且为你做我所能做的。illtounderstandyouanddowhaticanforyou.,onmyway,trymybest,3.我担心他们,并且非常害怕失去我的家。imthemandlosingmyfamilyverymuch.4.坚持你的梦想,你一定能做到的!yourdreamandyoucanmakeit!5.父亲鼓励我,并在必要时给我帮助。fathermeandgavemeawhennecessary.,worriedabout,afraidof,stickto,encouraged,hand,.用括号内所给提示,将下列句子译成英语。1.自我出生起,父母就一直无微不至地照顾我。(takegoodcareof).2.我们应该学会与家人好好相处。(getalongwellwith).,sinceiwasborn,myparentshavetakengoodcareofme,weshouldlearntogetalongwellwithourfamily,3.学生不应该被允许花太多时间玩电脑游戏。(beallowedtodo)_4.他们总是因为一些不必要的事情争吵。(becauseof)_5.没有老师的帮助,我就不会通过这次考试。(without).,thestudentsshouldntbeallowedtospendmuchtimeplayingcomputergames.,theyalwaysarguewitheachotherbecauseofsomeunnecessarythings.,withouttheteachershelp,icouldntpasstheexam,2019天水“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业,是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。要求(1)给我生命,一直照顾我成长;(2)努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;(3)拥有爱心,教我学会;(4)今天,我要为你们(自主发挥,至少两点)。,注意事项(1)词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。youbringmeup.iwillbewithyouinyourlife.youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth._,【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是表达你对父母的感激,同时也表达出你对父母的爱。注意语言表达要有情感,短文可以从以下几个方面展开:(1)父母的付出,如照顾、帮助、鼓励、教育等;(2)我对父母的回报,如努力学习、希望父母永远幸福、健康等。2.确定时态:一般现在时(谈论现在父母对我的付出)和一般将来时(我将要对父母的回报)。3.确定人称:第一人称。,【写作架构】,【佳作欣赏】youbringmeup.iwillbewithyouinyourlife.youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.whenihaveproblemswithmystudyandlife,youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpandencourageme.inordertoletmeliveapleasantlifeandreceiveagoodeducation,youalwaysworkhardfrommorningtoeveningeveryday.youarealsopeoplewhohaveheartsfulloflove.youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.youteachmetobeakindperson.inthepast,ineversaid“iloveyou”toyou.todayiwillgraduate,andiwanttosayittoyouloudly.iwillstudyhardertogetbetterresults.ihopeyouwillbehappyandhealthyforever.,【名师点评】1.本文表达对父母的感恩之情,处处流露着真情实感。文章具体描述了在成长过程中,父母是如何对“我”付出的,体现了父母对子女无私的爱。在短文的结尾处,作者表达了要努力学习取得好的成绩来回报父母的付出,首尾呼应。2.文章中运用了一些从句和短语,如when,who,takecareof,inorderto等,体现了作者扎实的基本功。,a分享是一种行为方式,也是一种良好的品质(quality)。人生处处充满分享,懂得分享非常重要。分享快乐,快乐加倍;分担烦恼,烦恼减半。请根据以上观点,结合思维导图所示,以“mysharingexperience”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文。,要求(1)短文须包括所有要点提示,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;(2)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。参考词汇befullof,cutinhalf,thanksto,overcomemysharingexperiencesharingisawayofbehavioraswellasagoodqualityofpeople._,onepossibleversion:mysharingexperiencesharingisawayofbehavioraswellasagoodqualityofpeople.lifeisfullofsharing.ithinkitsimportanttosharehappinessandsadnesswithothers.wheniwasten,imovedtoanewdistrict.facingthestrangesurroundings,ifeltlonelyandupset.itwasmyneighbor,tim,whohelpedmefindpleasureagain.heshowedmearoundandintroducednewfriendstome.healsosharedhisfavouritebooks,musicand,learningmethodswithme.wesoonbecamegoodfriends.thankstohissharing,ibegantosharewithothers.asweknow,whenhappinessisshared,itwillbedoubled;whenaproblemisshared,itislikecuttingitinhalf.sharingbringsuspleasure,confidenceandcouragetoovercomedifficulties.letsopenourheartstosharewithothersinourfuturelife!,b2019苏州假定你是苏华,最近你的澳大利亚笔友nathan犯了一些错误,倍感懊恼,写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮助他排解困惑,请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历,用英语回信开导他。,注意(1)词数:90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;(2)回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;(3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。,dearnathan,imsorrytoknowthatyouarenothappythesedays._ihopemyexperiencecanhelpyouout.bestwishes,suhua,onepossibleversion:dearnathan,imsorrytoknowthatyouarenothappythesedays.youneedntworrytoomuch.itstruethateveryonemakesmistakes.takeme,forexample.oneday,ispentsomuchtimeplayingfootballwithmyfriendsthatiforgottodomyhomework.isaidsorrytomyteacherandfinisheditthenextday.ifounditimportanttoac