2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品复习讲义 写作（十一） 北师大版

2020;2020届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十一）简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。学生习作外教批改In the cartoon “Let Go of Me”1，the boy has to attend many spare_time_schools2 extra classes, leaving him tired and depressed.It3 This vividly reflects our present school life.I think too many afterschool classes do students more harm than good.We are occupied with too many extra classes and endless homework every day，which gives us no time to developing4 our own interests and real_abilities talents.As a result，many students feel physically and mentally stressed and some even suffer from nerve5 nervous disorders or poor health.No wonder about 60% of the6students wear glasses today7.We students should not be robbed of our spare time.We desire a golden and cheerful childhood.Going to the theatre，visiting museums and joining8 in social activities should become be part of our life9 lives.I believe these activities will broaden our horizons and make our school life10 fun and meaningful.旁批1这是标题，每个实词的首字母都应该大写。2这种表达方式不正确。可以用extra classes或afterschool classes。3用指示代词语气更强，起到将本句与上一句联系的作用。4这里的to是动词不定式，因此动词必须用原形。只有当to是介词时，后面才能用动名词，即ing形式。例如：I look forward to seeing you.5nerve是名词，这里需要用形容词。6复数名词表泛指时不加冠词。7这个例子不能有效地支持作者的观点。近视不代表身体不健康，也不能说明神经功能紊乱。8and前后的动词形式要保持一致。由于前面两个动词是动名词形式，因此join也应该是动名词形式。9our后应该跟名词复数。10school life泛指是单数形式，不要用our来修饰。本文构思很好，文体得当。大部分语法错误似乎都是由于粗心而造成的。没有什么是作者不应该知道的。交卷前一定要确认自己仔细检查过。高分作文秘诀之五：避免使用汉语式英语。例如：Instead of (不要说：)Have 60% students think an entrance fee shouldnt be received.Use (要说：)60% of the students think an entrance fee shouldnt be charged.Instead of (不要说：)Recently our village has taken place great changes.Use (要说：)Recently great changes have taken place in our village.Instead of (不要说：)His friends are few.Use (要说：)He has few friends.Instead of (不要说：)Welcome you to visit our school.Use (要说：)You are welcome to visit our school.Instead of (不要说：)Today I visited the Smithsmy first time visit to an American family.Use (要说：)Today I visited the Smithsmy first visit to an American family.参考下面漫画，请以Im a Senior Three Student为题，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，短文应包括以下几条要点，不要逐条翻译。参考范文：Im a Senior Three StudentThe picture shows a boy who stays up late doing his homework. Scores of books pile on the desk in front of him. There are always papers waiting to be finished and problems to be solved, seeming to have no ending. Time is never long enough for a student of Senior Three. What I do every day is to listen to the teachers lectures, take notes and do my homework. I hope our teachers will help us ge