山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（45）

山西省2020高考英语第二次复习专题训练：随笔写错了(45随笔错了要解决这个问题，必须纠正给定随笔的错误。对标题号码的每一行做出判断。如果没有失误，就在那一行的右横档上划；如果存在错误(每行只有一个错误)，请按以下方式更正：另一个词：用斜线表示额外的词，写在那一行的右边水平线上，用斜线表示。这一行缺了一个词。在遗漏的单词中添加脱字符号()，并在该行的右侧水平线写连字。这一行在错误的单词下面画水平线，并在该行的右边水平线上写修改后的单词。注意：原始行没有错。time flies as an arrow . I m already in the second half 1of senior grade 3 before I realized it。it is only a little more 2than three months before I graduate middle school . at 3The present，I m busy reviewing my lessons in order to4take the college entrance examination . I hope to go to 5北京大学，that is one of the best university ities not 6Only in China but also in the world .Ill try my best to turn 7my dream to reality . most of my class mates are also 8studening very hard to realize our wishes . I do believe 9every one will be able to enter a very good university and college . 10书面表达科学技术日新月异，他们在人们的生活中使用得越来越广泛，但也带来了一些问题。结合下图，谈谈科技对人的影响。注意：1.字数：100-120字左右。2.开头已经为你写了，不包括在字数中。可以适当地添加细节，使文章连贯。From the above pictures，we can see the following scene。随笔错了1.as like 2 .realized realize3。graduate from4.the 5 .to into 6。移除our their7.8。至 into 9。our their10.and or书面表达One possible version:Form the above pictures，we can see the following scene : in the past when fate came back from work And stepped into the house，他的wife would bringBut now when father gets home，He finds that his son is additioned to playing computer games and his daughter is busy photoning her friends and his wisthe father doesn t become angry he is also dealing with his business with a cell phone .what the pictures reflect is that the wide use of technology is