山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（65）

山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（65）短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. Its better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.书面表达最近海航在你校招收飞行员，请你根据提示，用英语写一封应聘信。应包括以下要点：个人信息：姓名、性别、年龄、身高、所在学校等；申请条件：1. 身体、心理素质； 2. 自己的特长； 3. 自我控制能力和合作意识； 4. 有一定航空航天知识，对航空航天的兴趣。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数； 4. 参考词汇：心理素质 mental quality高考资源网 Sir or Madam,I have learned the news that pilots are wanted in your company. Id like to apply for that job very much._.Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly Li Hua短文改错：waitingeasilytheiraSocausesiscitiesTraffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.possibleIn my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. Its better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.写作： One possible version:高考资源网 Sir or Madam,I have learned the news that pilots are wanted in your company. Id like to apply for that job very much. Below are my qualifications for the job.I am Li Hua, male, aged 16. I am now studying at Taiyuan No. 5 Middle School. Since my childhood, I have showed special interest in space flight and have a good understanding of it. Therefore, I attach great importance to subjects such as physics, computer science, English and so on, in which I have been doing very well. In addition, I am in good health, 1.77 meters tall and I have an excellent mental quality and good self-control. Whats more, I show a high sense of team spirit, which I thin