河南省鹤壁市综合高中2020年高考英语作文复习专题4

河南省鹤壁市综合高中2020年高考英语作文复习专题4第四讲 书面表达常见错误及扣分分值英语书面表达常见的十大错误书面表达常见的十大错误一、汉式英语（误） Good good study， day day up.（正） Study hard and youll make progress every day（误） There is a notice in the park， saying：“To take notice of safe； slippery sideway ”（正）There is a notice in the park， saying：“Watch your step. Slippery sideway. ”“方法点拨”要减少汉式英语必须做到：（1）养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯，注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达；（2）平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语；（3）多读原汁原味英语。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、Chinese population is the most in the world.2、Everywhere can see this kind of tree.3、Li Ping has 5 classes in the morning， afternoon has 2 classes.4、Her age is young.5. Im very like the book.6. Have five people live here.7. Such implanted ads are too many.二、关系不一致（误）In the bedroom there are a bed， a desk and a chair.（正） In the bedroom there is a bed， a sofa， a desk and a chair.巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、He closed the door and hurries away to class.2、In spite of its small size， these cameras can take good pictures.3、If I were you， I wont do that.三、词性混用（误）60 of the students against the idea of entrance fees.（正）60 of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.（误）2 days past before his letter arrived.（正）2 days passed before his letter arrived.巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1、I have no difficult in finding your home.2、John always does his homework careful.4、Fortunate， people are beginning to realize how seriously the pollution is.5. The moon like a cake in the sky.四、重复累赘（误）The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.（正） The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.（误） We hope to improve our work better.（正） We hope to improve our work.“方法点拨”有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出现造句累赘现象。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、Mary married with John.2、I returned back the book to you at 6 a.m3、My most favorite song is “Hand in hand”。4、The train is entering into the tunnel.5. Her eyes are blind.6. Well gather together at the school gate.五、选词或搭配不当（误）Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.（正）Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、Peter is a warmhearted person， so everybody likes to have friends with him.2、Mr. Smith said an interesting story at the beginning of the meeting.3、Its cold outside， please dress your overcoat.六、无关联词（误）I am tired， I must go to bed.（正）I am tired， so I must go to bed.“方法点拨”英语句子特点之一重“形合”，句子的各个部分由各种关联词联在一起。而汉语句子重“意合”，句子前后连接主要是通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现，很多学生在写作时往往忽略这一点造成句子的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、You practise more reading， you will improve your reading ability.2、China is still a developing country， most people cant afford a car yet.3、I arrived at the station， the train had left.4、His living room seemed empty， there were only 2 chairs， a desk and a bed.七、非平行结构、逻辑不一致（误）There were 40 foreigners came to visit our school.（正）There were 40 foreigners who came to visit our school.（正）40 foreigners came to visit our school.（误）Without a friend will feel lonely.（正）Without a friend one will feel lonely.“方法点拨”一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分（除祈使句外），如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内之间过渡自然、层次分明。而学生在习作中常出现未用过渡词语、非平行结构和语义不完整的分割句等错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1、The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher.2、I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.3、Although rained， we went on working.4、There are some students like the game very much.5. Arriving at the station, the train had left.八、句子缺乏统一性（误）Being an honest man， Tom worked very hard.（正）Being an honest man， Tom never tells a lie.巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、She must be ill because I saw a doctor going into her room.2、 I was born and grew up in Hang Zhou in 1953.九、句子缺乏连贯性或指代不明（误）Rose falls in love with John is in love with Mary.（正） Rose falls in love with John， while John is in love with Mary.巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、Every university has many rules and regulations and they must obey them.2、At the age of 10，Toms mother died.十、标点符号误用标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解标点符号的用途以及英汉标点的差异，结果出现错误。（误）China Dailyis a great help to the English learners.（正）China Daily is a great help to the English learners.（误）Li Ping is not old enough， he can not join the army.（正）Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army/ Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.“方法点拨”英语无书名号，报刊、书名等单词首字母大写，或斜体；一般情况下，一个主谓结构就构成一个英语句子，句末应用句号。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误1、I like many subjects such as C