读后续写指导

hidebringmeethear,freezebeginridewrite,arisecatchmistakepay,speakswimsmellcost,goburstteachfly,review,ContinuationWriting,读后续写,1.goodhandwriting2.logicalstory3.vividexpression,鉴湖中学黄超琼,Step1readtogetthemainidea,Whoisthemaincharacter?Whendidthestoryhappen?Wheredidthestoryhappen?Whathappenedinthestory?WhyHow,Jenny/hermother/grandma/herfather,How?,thenwhat,but,Fatheraskedhertogivethenecklacetohimformanytimes,Who?,What?,Jenny,herfather,necklace,Shegotitthroughherownefforts,Jennydidntwanttogiveupthenecklacetoherdad,MainIdea,Jennylikedthe_verymuch,andshegotitthroughherownefforts.Herloving_askedherto_formanytimes.Jennywouldnt_herfavoriteandrefusedherfather.,pearlnecklace,giveup,Daddy,givehimthenecklace,WhyHow,didDaddywantthenecklace?,didJennyrefuseDaddy?,wouldthisconflictbesolved?,Step2Furtherthinking,conflict,Para1Afewnightslaterwhenherdaddycamein,jennywassittingonherbed,waitingforherfather.Whywasjennywaitingforherfather?Para2Withtearsinhisowneyes,Jennyskinddaddyreachedoutonehandtotakethecheapnecklace.,Jennydecidedtogiveherfavoritenecklacetoherfather,andsaidsomethingverymoving.,Step3Excavatetheclues(挖掘线索）Thegivensentencesandwords,Tip1:Focusonthegivensentenceofparagraph2first.Andsomeinformationinitmustbementionedinparagraph1.,Para2Withtearsinhisowneyes,Jennyskinddaddyreachedoutonehandtotakethecheapnecklace.,withtearsinhisowneyes,hewasdeeplymoved,kinddaddy,theremustbeareason,onehand,whatwastheotherhanddoing?,Tip2:smallwords,bigclues.,cheapnecklace?,hisdaughterdeserveabetterone.,DaddypreparedanexpensivenecklaceforJenny,andhisotherhandwasreachingforit.,Theunderlinedkeywords:metalboxhouseworkbuyhomecheappearlnecklacedaddylovegivemeyournecklacegiveup,Tip3:Thekeywordsthatrespectivelystandforthemostimportantinformation,themaincharacterandthemainobjectshouldbechoseninyourwriting.,Step3Excavatetheclues(挖掘线索）Thegivenwordsandsentences,Step4developtheplot(outline),Para1Afewnightslaterwhenherdaddycamein,jennywassittingonherbed,waitingforherfather.,Para2Withtearsinhisowneyes,Jennyskinddaddyreachedoutonehandtotakethecheapnecklace.,D:whyJennywaswaitingJ:gavethenecklacetoDaddyD:surprisedandconfusedJ:explainedandsaidsomethingmoving,D:hisotherhand.J:surprisedD:explained,proudJ:excitedandkissed/hugconclusion:Alessonislearned,Step4developtheplot(outline),Para1Afewnightslaterwhenherdaddycamein,jennywassittingonherbed,waitingforherfather.,Para2Withtearsinhisowneyes,Jennyskinddaddyreachedoutonehandtotakethecheapnecklace.,D:whyJennywaswaitingJ:gavethenecklacetoDaddyD:surprisedandconfusedJ:explainedandsaidsomethingmoving,D:hisotherhand.J:surprisedD:explained,proudJ:excitedandkissed/hugconclusion:Alessonislearned,DaddyaskedJenny,”Jenny,whyareyoustillsitting?”,Jennygavethenecklacetoherfather.,Daddywasverysurprisedandconfused,andasked.,Jennysaid,”Youarethemostimportantperson.,Hisotherhandtookoutanothernecklacewhichis.,Jennywasverysurprisedandaskedwhy.,Daddysaid,“Youdeserveabetterone.,Jennywassohappythatshehuggedherfathertightly.,Sometimes,youhavetolearntogiveuptoget.,Readtogetthemainidea(whowhat)Furtherthinking(whyhow/conflict)3.Excavatetheclues(theunderlinedwords,thegiventwosentences)4.Developtheplot(usuallyaposit