Mini-Grammar.pptx

写作改错例题演练(短文改错不难但得分低),亲爱的妈妈，母亲节快到了。我感到很抱歉我在国外，不能送花给您，所以我现在写信给您。妈妈，我知道我之前从来没有向您表达过我的感谢。但是今天，在这个特别的日子，我想大声地跟您说：我爱您，妈妈！非常感谢您不仅赐予我生命，也教会了我如何成为一个好人。谢谢您为我做的一切。妈妈。虽然我可能没有经常说，（但）我确确实实是爱您的。没有人能够取代您在我心中的位置。无论我在哪里，我将一直爱您。祝愿您身体健康，开心每一天！您的小女儿Jennifer,A:梓昌颖宝郑龙延濡珺岚杰文振濠吉红舒曼晓媚（10人）B：14人C：2人书写不合格：4人没有写班级学号姓名：3人,作文情况反馈,Presentations,Presentations,书法字帖,不求龙飞凤舞，但求干净清楚！,1.TheMothersDayiscoming.,2.Inthisspeciallyday,Iwanttospeakloudly.,3.IknowIneverexpressedmythanktoyou.,special,us,4.Thankyounotonlygivemealife,butalsoteachmehowtobecomeagoodman.,have,On,thanks,for,_,giving,_,teaching,一、单句改错（摘自学生习作）,5.Thanksforyoudoforme.,6.Hopeyouahealthandhappylifeeveryday.,7.Icantgiveyourflower,becauseIamaboard.,what,you,8.WheneverIgo,Iwillloveyou.,Wish,healthy,_,flowers,_,abroad,_,Wherever,二、习作中易混淆语言点之拓展练习,儿童节_国庆节_感恩节_端午节_春节_中秋节_,ChildrensDay,NationalDay,ThanksgivingDay,TheDragonBoatFestival,TheSpringFestival,TheMid-autumnFestival,2.thank/thanksIamwritingtoexpressmy_foryourhelpingmeimprovemyspokenEnglish._yousomuchforyourconsideration.,thanks,Thank,3.wish/hopeWe_youahappyyear.I_Iweretenyearsyounger.I_youllbebettersoon.,wish,wish,hope,4.health/healthyFreshairandexercisearegoodforthe_.Ivealwaysbeenperfectly_untilnow.Theytestedthedrugon_volunteers.,health,healthy,healthy,5.board/broad/abroad/aboardHewassixfeettall,with_shoulders.Wenevertravelled_whenwewerekids.Theplanofthenewbuildingisdisplayedona_atthebackoftheroom.Theyfinallywent_theplane.,broad,abroad,board,aboard,DearMom,1MothersDayiscoming.ImsorrythatIamabroadandcant2sendyourflowers,soImwritingtoyou.3Mom,IknowIhaveneverexpressedmythanktoyouago.But4ontoday,atthisspecialtime,Ijustwanttotellyouloudly:Ilove5you,Mom!Thankyousomuchbynotonlygivingmelife,butalso6teachmehowtobeagoodperson.Thankyouforallyouhaddone7forme.Mom,thoughImayoftensayit,Idoloveyou.Nobodycan8takeyourpartinmyheart.WheneverIam,Iwillalwaysloveyou.9Hopeyougoodhealthandmuchhappinesseveryday!Yourlittlegirl,Jennifer,三、短文改错（2012四川卷）,111,you,thanks,before,for,teaching,have,not,Wherever,Wish,拓展练习：写作改错训练,四、请把下面短文翻译成英文。今天是母亲节。尽管它是西方的节日，但是它现在在中国很受欢迎。妈妈有一份全职工作，但是她还要去做绝大部分的家务。她是一位伟大的母亲。我和爸爸计划着在母亲节这天做些事情。早上我们很早起床。爸爸打扫房子，然后去购物。