中考英语复习专题写作训练课件

中考英语复习专题写作训练,1,WritingLesson写作训练,2013年3月,2013年中考专题复习,中考英语复习专题写作训练,2,中考英语书面表达,书面表达是中考题的重要题型，分值较高，占总分的10%。根据英语新课程标准的要求，初中阶段英语书面表达主要是综合考查考生的以下两方面内容：知识方面：在写作过程中熟练运用以下基础知识：（1）常用时态（2）主要句型（3）固定短语（4）主要从句（5）常用连词2.能力方面：（1）观察能力（2）思维能力（3）运用语言知识的能力（4）用英语组词造句、连句成篇的能力（5）书写能力,中考英语复习专题写作训练,3,2010-2012年中考英语书面表达题分析,表达情感,记事,一般过去时,中考英语复习专题写作训练,4,近几年中考作文发展趋向及答题要求,1.作文词数增加,要求80100个词，即10-15句话，切忌画蛇添足；2.近几年只局限于命题作文,而且是通过记叙某一件事来表达真实情感，感悟人生的哲理；3.文章的表达不局限于一种时态；4.句子结构的难度增加,要求会使用一定比例的复合句和适当的过渡词,使段落层次分明，从而提高文章的档次；5.对卷面整洁和书写规范有一定的要求。,Soeasy!,中考英语复习专题写作训练,5,楚雄市统测八年级满分作文,2012年,ILove,Step5:,Beautify,中考英语复习专题写作训练,6,一档(8-10分)内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言错误；二档（6-7分）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少；三档（4-5分）内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达较多错误；四档(1-3分)有一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。(注意：抄袭卷中阅读材料的，抄袭部分不给分。),中考满分作文的评分标准,中考英语复习专题写作训练,7,第三节书面表达(满分l5分)IAmNotaChildAnyMore提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以IAmNotaChildAnyMore”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。,2011年八地联考书面表达真题展示,中考英语复习专题写作训练,8,IAmNotaChildAnyMoreIama16-year-oldgirlnow.Ihavechangedalot.Iusedtobeweakandshort.Butnow,Iamstrongerandastallasmymother.ThemostimportantthingisthatIhavelearnedtounderstandandcareaboutothers.ItwasaWednesdayevening.WhenIwentbackhome,noonewasin.SoIcookedthemeal.Ididntknowmymotherwasilluntilmyparentscamebackfromthehospital.Theybothsaidthemealwasverydelicious,althoughittastedsalty.Aftersupper,Ifoundtheyweretootired,Igothotwaterforthem.Whenmymotherputherfeetintothewater,withtearsinhereyes,shesaid:“Dear,youhavegrownup.”ItwasthefirsttimethatIcaredaboutmyparents.IrealizedIwasnotachildanymore.,中考满分范文展示,中考英语复习专题写作训练,9,范文“骨架”常用句型等,第一句：Iamnow.Ihavechangedalot.第二句：Iusedtobe.Butnow,Iam.第三句：ThemostimportantthingisthatIhave第四句：Itwasa.WhenISoI.第五句：Ididntknowuntil第六句：Theybothsaid,althoughit.第七句：Aftersupper,Ifound,I.第八句：When,with,shesaid:“.”第九句：ItwasthefirsttimethatI.第十句：IrealizedIwas.,解密中考满分作文高分技巧,中考英语复习专题写作训练,10,中考英语书面表达“五步曲”,看（Look）,想（Think）,列（Rank）,连（Link）,美（Beautify）,审题抓点确定体裁,把握时态构思文路,提炼要点草拟提纲,斟酌词句连句成文长短交替亮点润色,规范誊写留好印象从句适量高分有望,中考英语复习专题写作训练,11,3、一般将来时表达想法和愿望,1、一般过去时记叙已发生的事情,技巧一：用准三种时态,2、一般现在时描写人或事物,Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficulttolearnwell.,Howtimeflies!,ButIwillneverforgetonethingthatimpressedmeverymuch.,Inmylife,therearesomanywonderfulmemoriesthatmakemeunforgettable.,Igrowupdaybyday.,中考英语书面表达高分技巧,五个“三”,中考英语复习专题写作训练,12,技巧二：确定关键词句用对三种句型,（表示人或事物的身份、特征、形状等）,句型3：主语+动词+宾语,句型2：主+系(am/is/are)+表(n./adj./num.),句型1：主+谓,Itisthemostunforgettablething.Teacherssmilewaslikeaspringwind.,Shehadaheart-to-heartwithme.Ialwaysrememberthisthing.,Igrowup.,中考英语复习专题写作训练,13,技巧三：列出提纲用上三个从句,1、状语从句,2、定语从句,3、宾语从句,Iwilltrymybesttohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.,ButIwillneverforgetonethingthatimpressedmeverymuch.,Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficulttolearnwell.,IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofherstudents.,中考英语复习专题写作训练,14,技巧四：用好三类连词将“三段式”作文连段成文,1、表转折的连词:but,although,however,2、表因果的连词:because,so,3、表顺序的连词:atfirst,tobeginwith,then,later,atlast,Beginning（23句话）“凤头”,Body（68句话）“猪肚”,Ending（23句话）“豹尾”,A.“三段式”,A.三类连词,中考英语复习专题写作训练,15,技巧五：凸显三处亮点美化文章,1、There+be+物+地/+事+时,2、tooto/sothat,3、Its+adj.+forSb.+todoSth./Ifindit+adj.todosth.,Inmylife,therearesomanywonderfulmemoriesthatmakemeunforgettable.,Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficulttolearnwell.,Teacherssmilewaslikeaspringwind,sogentlethatIwasdeeplymoved.,中考英语复习专题写作训练,16,提示：人生中会有很多令人难忘的人和事，给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆，让你咀嚼，让你回味。或许是同学、朋友间的互助和支持,父母的关心和照顾,老师的鼓励与帮助,又或是你我身边的一次次感动这一切都会令我们记忆犹新，难以忘怀。请以“AnUnforgettableThing”为话题，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，记叙一件值得你回忆的事，镌刻这美好的瞬间。,AnUnforgettableThing,备考演练,Step1:,Look,中考英语复习专题写作训练,17,看（Look）,想（Think）,列（Rank）,连（Link）,美（Beautify）,审题抓点确定体裁,把握时态构思文路,提炼要点草拟提纲,斟酌词句连句成文长短交替亮点润色,规范誊写留好印象从句适量高分有望,请用“五步曲、三段式”完成写作,记叙文,一般过去时态,words,sentences,paragraph,article,记叙一件值得你回忆的事,或许是同学、朋友间的互助和支持,父母的关心和照顾,老师的鼓励与帮助,又或是你我身边的一次次感动,Step1:Look,Step2:Think,中考英语复习专题写作训练,18,remember,haveaheart-to-hearttalk,happiness,gentle,growup,smile,sharewith,unforgettable,lucky,encourage,wonderful,make,impress,forget,memories,beeagertodo(渴望做),discusswriteshare,AnUnforgettablething,learnfrom,becomeinterestedin,trymybestto,befullof,Step3:,Rank,Whatsthetopic?,中考英语复习专题写作训练,19,5人一组进行讨论，迅速完成以下任务：Step1(1)各自在小卡纸上写出你认为最好的开头句和结句；(2)组内或组间交互；(3)各组代表在黑板上展示本组收集的精彩首、尾句。Step2(1)组内讨论，选定一个事件，简要写出关键词或句；(2)写出正文初稿，修改完善，工整誊写在大卡纸上；(3)各组发言人交流发言。,中考英语复习专题写作训练,20,Wonderfulsentences,Beginning开头句,1.Howtimeflies,Igrowupdaybyday.2.Inourlives,therearesomanywonderfulmemoriesthatmakeusunforgettable.,1.Forme,itsthemostunforgettablething.2.Ialwaysrememberthethinginmyheart.,Ending结尾句,Body中间句,中考英语复习专题写作训练,21,AnUnforgettableThing,Howtimeflies!Igrowupdaybyday.Inmylife,therearesomanywonderfulmemoriesthatmakemeunforgettable.ButIwillneverforgetonethingthatimpressedmeverymuch.Iameagertosharemyunforgettablethingwithyou.,主题句,重复关键词,Onepossibleversion:,Beginning(首段),Step4:Link,中考英语复习专题写作训练,22,Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficulttolearnwell.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldntdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,withagentlesmile,shehadaheart-to-hearttalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Teacherssmilewaslikeaspringwind,sogentlethatIwasdeeplymoved.Atthatmoment,happinesswasfromthebottomofheart.EverytimeIwantedtogiveup,sheencouragedmewiththebrightestsmile.,连接词,Body（正文）,中考英语复习专题写作训练,23,Itmademetrymybestagain.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,IbecomeinterestedinEnglishandgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofherstudents.Also,Ivelearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrymybesttohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.,Forme,Itisthemostunforgettablething.Ialwaysrememberthethinginmyheart.WheneverIrememberthisthing,myheartisfullofhappinessandcourage.,Ending（尾段）,再次点题,并抒发情感,中考英语复习专题写作训练,24,AnUnforgettableThingHowtimeflies!Igrowupdaybyday.Inmylife,therearesomanywonderfulmemoriesthatmakemeunforgettable.ButIwillneverforgetonethingthatimpressedmeverymuch.Iameagertosharemyunforgettablethingwithyou.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficulttolearnwell.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldntdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,withagentlesmile,shehadaheart-to-hearttalkwithmea