中考英语作文复习

2010年英语中考作文复习一：历年英语中考作文中出现的常见错误。1. 单词拼写错误。tree/teer, fruit/friut, pool/poor,visitor/visiter, themselves /theirselves/ themselves etc.l 病因:没有根据音标记单词，或平时读音不准，或没真正掌握构词法。2 .名词不注意单复数或复数形式不正确。l 病因：可能受母语影响,或语法掌握得欠扎实。3. 动词原形和过去式乱用。build /built, lie /lay, should/can 后加to do doing 都有l 病因：到底哪个是原形，哪个是过去式不清楚。情态动词后加原形的结构很不熟练。4、形容词比较等级乱用。more healthy/more stronger/much strong等都有。l 病因：比较等级欠透。5. 少主语或乱用主语，尤其动名词作主语多用成原形了。There can plant /Liu Ying thinks plant fruit trees./Li Ping thinks plant trees is a good way./ Its can /Mount Feng can build /It can buildl 病因：宾语从句和动名词及情态动词的句子结构没搞懂。6. 词数不足，极个别太多，或遗漏要点，或将我写成自己的名了。l 病因：审题不仔细。7. 易混淆词或词组乱用。摘pick写成pick up， 乱造make/set up/build，keep health/keep in good healthy, 胡花费pay money for sthspend in there/ relax/relaxing/relaxed乱用。l 病因：词性和词组没吃透。8. There be 句型写成了There have9. 中国式英语表达形式较多。10. 欠连贯，缺少连接过渡词。11. 口头语挺多，尽量要少用。12.不注意标点符号，If youre free.Youll .到高中，由于标点乱用，这样两个句子都要算错了的。极个别甚至连英语句号是实心点等的常识都不知道。13. 书写欠规范，涂汰现象不少。不注意书写整洁。二：英语中考列文（请同学们务必熟看每篇作文，从中你会学到许多表达方式，可以帮助你培养语感，积累短语和句型，总之能一举几得）（1）How To Learn English Well (怎么学好英语)English is important in the modern world. It is spoken all over the world. But a few students dont learn English well. So they want to drop English. I suggest that you shouldnt give up English, because English is used in many countries as the first or second language. Most business letters are written in English. It is helpful for you to work in the future. If you dont know English, you will fall behind others in future. How can you learn English well? First, you should persevere. Its true that English is sometimes really very difficult for us. But if you have a good method of learning, I think you will be good at it. Both English listening and speaking are the most difficult for almost every beginner. Sometimes, it seems impossible to learn. But I think if you do a lot of practice, you will make progress, you should speak more and listen more often. Youd better speak English with your classmates as often as possible not only in class but also out of class. I advise you to buy a radio, so you can listen to some English programmes over the radio. （2） If I had a million dollarsIf I had one million dollars, I would do a lot of helpful things. For example, Id give a part of dollars away to poor people. Id give some money to medical research. Id use some money to build a large library for children who like reading. Id also buy a big car for my father use the rest money. What would you do if you had one million dollars? Dear Ms Li, （3）Im very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I dont enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together. When I get back home from school, Im not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favourite music. I feel worried about them. I dont know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?Best wishes.（4）My sisterThis is a picture of my sister, Alice. She likes dancing very much. My sister is very cute. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. She always wears glasses. She has long hair. And she is of medium height. Shes kind of thin. She likes sports, too. Shes the captain of the tennis teamDear sir, （5）Ill writing to tell you some information of a survey with my senior middle school. 40% think middle school student can wear mobile phone, but other student are against the idea. In my opinion,Middle school student should wear mobile, for it do more good than harm.For example, it is convenient if we contact our friends; if we have poser, we canSolve it on internet; sometimes, its impossible for us to remember more useful information, then we can put it in it; As a middle school student, we have more and more pressure, we need something to make us relax. Sure, we can play some games with it, too.As for its bad effect on our study, when it rings, Oh, I think we can adjust it to vibration. The above are my survey result, and some viewpoints of mine.（6）假如你是新华中学的学生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日，我国已经禁止使用塑料袋，你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?Im Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I dont like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they cant decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people cant get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. Its good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment.Lets make our world more and more beautiful.（7）6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛，要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题13方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例13方面进行说明，字数80左右。Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:Im very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, Im a bit nervous as Ive never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse .In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike. We can use shopping baskets not plastic bags .when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. （10）2010年我的世博会Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. Our government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Chain, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.(11) 中国是一个地震多发国，由于“汶川地震”的发生，成千上万的学生和老师失去了生命，假如你们学校要进行一场“地震逃生知识讲座”，假如你是讲座演讲人,名叫LinTao ，请据以下几方面写一个简单的发言稿，可以自由发挥,但至少要补充两条注意事项。1.地震来临前要镇定，为了您自己和家人的人身安全请躲在桌子等坚固家具的下面; 2.摇晃时立即关火，失火时立即灭火; 3.不要慌张地向户外跑 ;4.将门打开，确保出口; 5.在户外的空旷的场合，要保护好头部，避开危险之处; 6.在学校，购物中心、剧场时依工作人员的指示行动。(划线部分是要求填写补充的)Dear classmates, teachers, head teacher headmaster :Im LinTao in Class 6,Im very proud Ive been chosen to speak to you . I make a speech : “How to protect and save our lives?” When the earthquake happens, how to protect and save our lives is important? In “Wenchuan earthquake” on “5.12” in Sichuan, thousands of students and teachers died of it.You must be/keep calm when the earthquake happens. You go into under the table or hard furniture fast. You must turn off or put out the fire so that you and your families are safe when the buildings are shocking. Dont run out nervously; Open the door and keep EXIT open. When you are in the open air, you must sit on the wide place/ground, such as :playground etc, you must look after your head and keep away from the dangerous things.When you are at school, in the shopping center or theatre, you must follow the teachers or offficers,let them lead you to the safe places. Bring some food, water and medicines to safe place as possible as you can, you must wait the people to save you if youre in dangerous . You must keep living (12) How to stay our health /fit?Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle school student first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Dont eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Third you need enough sleep or rest. Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thank you bye! (13) We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at the school gate at eight in the morning and we will go there on foot. Take your pens and notebooks with you. We should listen and watch carefully and write down something interesting when you visit the museum. Please dont make any noise in the museum and dont take any pictures. Youll have to hand in a report about the visit next Monday（14）My Chinese TeacherOf all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And were getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.（15）My Father My father is a kind man. He is not very tall but he is a man of perseverance. He works very hard and his services are highly appreciated. My father is a man of devotion. Every morning he gets up the earliest to make breakfast for us. In the evening, he is always the late to come back home. At weekends, he always takes us to go outing in his car. He is a man of few words, but he often says to me A little learning is a dangerous thing. I will always remember these words. （16）A Wonderful Day Last November 24 was my birthday. I had a party at my home. My friends came to my home in the afternoon and I got a lot of presents from them. At the party, we ate a big cake, sang songs, watched TV and listened to music. We were very happy. But all good things must come to an end. We said goodbye at about ten. We had a very good time on November 24（17）An Unusual Experience One day, I went to ski with my friend, Li Mei. We were playing happily on the ice when I heard a shout” Help. I turned back and was surprised to see a boy falling into a ice hole. But neither of us could swim. So Li Mei and I ran to ask for help. A few minutes later, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. What an unusual experience it was!（18）Planting Trees It was fine on March 12 ， 2001 . I got up early that day. All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees. We arrived at the hill at eight oclock. The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees. Then we started digging ， planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of time. Among us ， Wang Lin ， our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill ， he worked harder . When he finished his task ， he went on to help others without even a little rest . He was wet all over after work. “ I must learn from him ，” I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees ， we smiled happily ， forgetting our tiredness .（19）A Picnic It was a sunny day. We decided to have a picnic outside the city. In the morning, we took an early bus to Nanhui. It was quite a colorful world. There were GREen trees, orange leaves, red peach blossoms. At noon, we reached the place; we sat by the river bank and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and so on. But all of a sudden, it began to rain. Unluckily there was no shelter nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry. What an unforgettable picnic it was!（20）Nobody can get through life without friends. Im no exception. I met my best friend Sunny in a cram school during our last year of junior high school. We prepared for the high school entrance examination together and often discussed our lessons as we were studying after school. Sunny is a smart and well-mannered girl. Not only is she as expert at studying, but she also knows how to have fun. Every time I am blue, she soothes me and helps me find solutions to my problems. Im glad that I have a friend who is like an intimate sister. I value our friendship and hope that it will last forever. （21） Making Friends on Line These days many students like to make friends on line. Most of them think its interesting to know a stranger through the Internet. As a matter of fact, only a few of them have succeeded in getting a real good friend in this way. Most of them have been cheated. Some of them have committed crimes withThe friends on line. So we should be careful of making friends on line. Wed better pay more attention to our study.（22）Study in Class and out of Class Our study can be divided into two parts: one is in class and the other is out of class. Both of them are important to students. They depend on each other. We must attach importance to after-class what we have learnt in class is very. Limited, because only knowledge in textbooks can be acquired. However, we can learn more out of class. A most important thing is that knowledge comes from practice. In the after- class study we can apply out knowledge to practice. Just Iike after-class study, study in class is also very important. It occupies most of our time. We must pay much attention to it. In-class study and after-class study are closely connected with each other and improve each other.（23）my student life Speaking of my student life, its very interesting. Besides studying, we have many parties at our school for special festivals. Of course, we must study many subjects at school and do homework every day. I receive instructions from my teachers and discuss problems with them. Although sometimes we have many exams in our student life, it can be good for us. Everyone hates exams, but it helps us realize how much wehave learned from school. Just enjoy your student life. It goes by fast. ( 24) MoneyMoney is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I dont think we should regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. This way, all of us can lead a happier lives. (25) the Way to Keep Healthy Its important for us to be healthy all our life. We cant study or work well without healthy body.Therere many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise. (26)Water pollution 水源污染Water is used in homes, in farming, and in manufacturing. The water used by the people comes from oceans, lakes, rivers, and streams. Many water sources are becoming polluted. People are throwing things into the water. Factories are dumping waste materials into the water. Cities are dumping sewage into the water. Some water sources have become so badly polluted that the water cannot be made fit to use. Would you like to drink water that came from a source that had been so badly mistreated? Now is the time that we should take up our responsibility to protect our environment from being polluted.(27)My Experience in Examination In my opinion, examinations are one of the important activities in school life. I have gone through all sorts of examinations since my primary school I have tasted the flavor of happiness and sadness. Before examinations, I always have a hard time and dont know what to do. During examinations I feel nervous and sometimes my mind becomes blank. Only after examinations does the world seem to be bright again and am I brimming with vigor. We often complain that our teachers make trouble for us on purpose. But it is not true. The fact is that examinations are just a way to help us do better in our study.(29) Teachers DaySep. l0th Wednesday Fine It is Teachers Day on September 10th every year. Teachers are the greatest people in the world, I think, because they teach us how to write and read. The most important is that they teach us how to be a real man. They are also kind to everybody and they dont want anyone to fall behind others. They always get on very well with their students, and they are our best friends. When students are in trouble, they can help them in time. I will be a teacher when I grow up.(30)We often hear the saying Time is money.”But I think time is much more precious than money. Because If we lost time, we cant find it. But We can try to woke harder to get more money. No matter whatever you do ,you can not get lost time back.Time flies time and tides wait for no men. You can see how important time is. Lunxun had said” I spent the time on my work while others are having coffee.” We must make good use of our time, especially for our students, we shouldnt waste time in playing games and the like.(31)爱护动物-Take Care of Animals June 23rd Sunday Sunny It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were s