高中英语作文写作教学公开课(活动安排)

.,Whatmakesagoodessay?,英语作文写作,.,基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析,话题词汇、短语错误2.词汇、短语、句型贫乏3.句子语法错误4.连贯性差,积累少,语法不扎实,篇章意识不足,.,考场作文TIPS,1.取悦评卷人:有清晰的整体脉络,有自然的段间衔接.经典的用词用句,有整齐美观的书写.,2.经典的用句：感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。,.,写作基本步骤,1.仔细审题，列举大纲。2围绕要点，写出句子。3.添加过度，确保连贯。4.先求正确，再求灵活。5.认真眷写，卷面整洁。,.,近3年基础写作分析,活动安排地点介绍,.,基础写作之活动安排,.,学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家积极参与。写作内容,Notice.ThestudentsUnion,典型例题：,.,Notice.ThestudentsUnion,认真审题,学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家积极参与。写作内容,一般将来时,1.时态：,2.信息重组：,.,1.学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境,节约能源”。2.比赛时间：6月5日星期五4:00-5：30。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。3.报名时间：5月25日前。报名方式：studentcenter。4.评奖：一等奖3名,二等奖6名,三等奖12名。5.欢迎大家积极参与。,信息重组,.,本节课的目标,学习与这一话题相关的词句,.,举办_增加/丰富_知识_提高_学生会_参加_保护_环境_口语_英语演讲比赛_,主题n_节约vt_能源n_报名_,相关词汇默写,hold/organize,increase/enrich,knowledge,improve(vt),TheStudentsUnion,takepartin/participatein,protect(vt)protection(n),environment(n)environmental(adj),spokenEnglish/oralEnglish,English-speakingcontest,theme,save,energy,signup,.,(1)增长环保知识：_(2)举办一次比赛：_(3)保护环境：_(4)节约能源：_(5)表示目的的短语：_,enrich/increaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironment,hold/organizeacontest,protectourenvironment,saveenergy,词语翻译,.,(6)在6月5日星期五下午4:00-5:30：_4:00p.m._5:30p.m.,_FridayJune5th(7)教学楼：_(8)在五楼：_the5thfloor(9)演讲大厅：_,on,from,teaching/classroombuilding,to,on,thelecturehall,词语翻译,.,(10)参加比赛的人：_(11)在5月25日前：_May25th(12)在studentcenter上：_studentcenter,before,at,词语翻译,.,(13)三个一等奖：_(14)欢迎参加：_,threefirstprizes,词语翻译,.,句子翻译,1.学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境,节约能源”。2.比赛时间：6月5日星期五4:00-5：30。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。3.报名时间：5月25日前。报名方式：studentcenter。4.评奖：一等奖3名,二等奖6名,三等奖12名。5.欢迎大家积极参与。,.,句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境,节约能源”。TheStudentsUnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontesttoincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish.Thethemeis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”.,适当调整更加顺畅,句子1翻译,.,合并：InordertoincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish,theStudentsUnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhich/whosethemeis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”.(定语从句),合并句子,.,句2.比赛时间：6月5日星期五4:00-5：30。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。ThecontestwillbeheldintheLectureHallonthe5thfloorintheclassroombuildingfrom4:00p.m.to5:30p.m.,onFridayJune5th.,先地点，后时间由小到大,句子2翻译,.,句3.报名时间：5月25日前。报名方式：studentcenter。Ifyouwanttoparticipateinthecontest,youshouldsignupatstudentcenterbeforeMay25th.,中文没有主语时：要补充主语再翻译。,句子3翻译,.,句4：奖项：3个一等奖,6个二等奖和12个三等奖。Therearethreefirstprizes,sixsecondandtwelvethirdones.,句5.希望大家积极参与比赛。Anyoneiswarmlywelcometobethere.,句子4、5翻译,.,1.ToincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish,theStudentsUnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhichis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”.2.ThecontestwillbeheldintheLectureHallonthe5thfloorintheclassroombuildingfrom4:00p.m.to5:30p.m.,onFridayJune5th.3.Ifyouwanttoparticipateinthecontest,youshouldsignupatatstudentcenterbeforeMay25th.4.Therearethreefirstprizes,sixsecondandtwelvethirdones.5.Anyoneiswarmlywelcometotakepartinit.,连句成篇,Thosewho,aresupposedto,it,Lotsofprizeswillbedeliveredforthecontest,including,.,NoticeToincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish，theStudentsUnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhichis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”ThecontestwillbeheldintheLectureHallonthe5thfloorintheclassroombuildingfrom4:00p.m.to5:30p.m.,onFridayJune5th.ThosewhowanttoparticipateinthecontestaresupposedtosignupatstudentcenterbeforeMay25th.Lotsofprizeswillbedeliveredforthecontest,includingthreefirstprizes,sixsecondandtwelvethirdones.Dearfellowschoolmates,youarewarmlywelcometobethereandthanksforyourparticipation.TheStudentsUnion,.,Practice怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇,1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(使用名词性从句）2.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句),Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.,.,3.Iwontbelievewhathesays.(nomatterwhat状语从句）4.Theysangan