茂名一模写作.ppt

完型填空15语法填空10阅读理解35,信息匹配5-10基础写作15读写任务25,高考英语答题时间,注意答题顺序：试卷顺序（先易后难；作文最后）时间就是分数，时间就是金钱，时间就是前途,120:4110:10100:1690:1889:23,班平均分:95.24级平均分：96.03理科排：13名,120:3110:10100:1290:1789:32,班平均分:92.05级平均分：96.03理科排：23名,基础写作,存在问题：1.词汇严重缺乏，很多内容无法表达2.中式英文,逐字翻译，不按文法。3.时态错误：4.书写潦草，卷面不整洁。5.有相当部分的学生没写作文或写一两句。,我国首次对高速公路行驶的小汽车实行免费运行政策,Ourcountryisfirsttimetocarryoutthepolicythatcarsdriveonthehighwayarefree.,第一句要用一般过去时，而误用了一般现在时，陈述观点本来要用一般现在时或一般将来时的，但学生误用了一般过去时等。,十一黄金周小汽车实行免费通行刺激消费第三产业亲友驾车相聚人与人距离拉近了车流量猛增事故发生率上升,theNationalDayholiday,freepassagewasgiventocarsonthehighway,carscanrunonthehighwayforfree,youcandrivecarsonthehighwayforfree,stimulateconsumption,thethirdindustry,friendsandrelativesreunitewitheachotherbycar,bringpeoplecloser,thetrafficflowwillincreasetremendously,higheraccidentrate,好句子：1.Somepeopleareinfavorofitforthereasonthatnotonlycanitstimulateconsumption,whichisbeneficialtothedevelopmentofthethirdindustrysuchastourism,butalsoitcontributesalottoourgettingclosertoourrelativesandfriendsbydrivingtovisitthemoften.2.Whatsmore,sharingcarswithfriendsorrelativescanmakeeachothercloser.,DuringthelastNationalDayholidays,freepassagewasgiventocarsonthehighwayforthefirsttimeever,whichcausedaheateddiscussionnationwide.Onthebrightside,somebelievethatitisgoodtostimulateconsumptionandboostthethirdindustry,suchastourism.Tosomeextent,thispolicybringspeoplecloser,forthosewhowerereluctanttovisittheirfriendsaresomehowseducedtoreunitebycar.However,withcarsflockingtothehighways,othersareconcernedthatthetrafficflowwillincreasetremendously,resultinginworsetrafficjamandhigheraccidentrate.Personally,freepassageiswhatthepublichavebeenlongingfor,butmorefollowingmeasuresshouldbetaken,forexample,somecontingencyplansshouldbemadetodealwiththepotentialproblemsandmoreclearroadsignsareneededtogivedriverspreciseguidance.,读写任务,存在问题：A.概括部分：1、概括要点不全2、概括的表述错误：,Thepassagetellsusthatanationsurveyaboutthesenseofhappiness.,1).CCTVdidasurveyaboutwhetheryouwerehappy,2).mostpeoplegaveapositiveanswerwhilesomedidnt,3).theNobelPrizewinnerMoYansaidhedidntknowwhetherhewashappyornot,B.正文部分：1.书写潦草，涂改太多，卷面不整洁。2.每段段首空格不够，全卷分段不明显，影响卷面效果。3.时态错误。在正文部分第二段描述一件幸福的事时，有些学生全没有应该用一般过去时的概念，或者有的学生忘了谓语动词的相应词尾变化。4.内容不够充实。5.存在一些表述错误。如：谓语都是be+动词原形（myparentsisloveme.）、词性乱用（happyisverysimply.）等,尤其中式英文出现率很高。,好句子：1.AsfarasIamconcerned,IfirmlybelievethatIdolivehappilyforthereasonthatIhavesomanypeopletoloveandtobeloved.2.AlthoughIwillfacesomechallengessometimes,Ifeelsatisfiedastheyaretoosmallcomparedwiththepeoplewhoaresufferingfro