Lesson3-报告类议论文

议论文题型分类大全,搞定这一步，稳稳上6.5分！,2020/6/7,TwoQuestions=Report,原因分析+解决方案原因分析+有何影响原因分析+随机(鬼才知道会问什么)造成的问题+解决方案-特别注意你有可能遇到其中任何一种组合,往年真题,很多人不认识自己的邻居。(原因+解决)全世界的城市越来越相似。(原因+影响)爸妈在家扮演的角色有很大不同。(原因+会不会有改变)人类寿命越来越长。(导致的问题+解决),TwoQuestions=Report,注意区分这两个问题，经常导致TR低分Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatproblemsdoesitcause?,分析原因的原则,1.不能只局限在中国；2.客观的出发点(要有证据，别感慨)；3.如果有比较级，要通过年代对比找到原因(至关重要)；4.范围缩小一些；,2020/6/7,用来写原因的topicsentences,1.Thefirstreasonfortheshortageofyoungerteachersisthatateachingjobpayspoorly.2.Thefirstreasonwhybicycleridingisnolongerpopularisthatpeopletodayhavemuchmorechoicesfortransportation.3.Inaddition,theincreaseintheamountofrubbishisalsoaresultofpeopleusingmoredisposableproducts.4.Itistruethatpoorhealthofthegeneralpopulationisassociatedwithpeoplesbadeatinghabits.,2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(原因+解决方案版本),1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(考察改写能力)+承上启下(可以只预告第一个问题/也可以两个都预告)2.第一个原因分析。(idea-support)3.Anothercauseisthat,第二个原因分析。(idea-support)4.(因为很严重/因为做某事很重要)someasuresshouldbetakento.解决方案1+(sothat)结果解决方案2+(Inthisway,)结果5.总结重复原因/解决方案,2020/6/7,范文-1,2020/6/7,Task2：Fewerandfewerpeoplechoosetoridebicycleswhengoingoutside.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatcanbedonetoencouragepeopletocycle?,范文-1,2020/6/7,Owningabicycleandusingitfrequentlyseemstobemuchlesspopulartoday.Ibelievethatthegrowthinthesizeofcitiesandtheadvancedmoderntransportsystemarethemainreasonsforthis.Thefirstreasonwhyridingbicyclesisnolongerpopularisthatcitieshavebeengrowingbigger.Thismeansthatthedistancebetweenhomeanddestinationshasbecomemuchfarther.Ifpeoplekeepthehabitofcycling,thentheywillfinditreallytime-consumingandenergy-consuming.Whentheyfinallygettotheschooloroffice,theywillprobablyfeelexhaustedandcanhardlyconcentrateontheirworkorstudy.,范文-1,2020/6/7,Anothercauseisthatagreatervarietyofmeansoftransportareavailabletodailycommuterstoday.Inthepast,ridingabicyclewasthemainchoiceformanypeopletogotoworkorforfun.Today,however,peoplelivingincitiesandtownscanhaveawiderrangeofchoices,includingmorebuslines,undergroundrailways,taxiesandeventheUberservice.Anyoftheseismoreefficientandcomfortablethancyclingandthereforethistraditionalwayoftransporthasbeenlosingpopularity.Itisimportanttorememberthatridingabikeisbeneficialforboththeindividualandsociety,someasuresshouldbetakentoenticeandencouragepeopletobemoreactiveinthischoice.Firstly,thegovernmentcouldbuildspeciallanesforcyclists,sothattheycanridesafelyandquickly.Inaddition,subsidiesshouldbeprovidedtopeoplewhopaycloseattentiontothepriceofbicycles.Inthisway,morepeoplewouldbeabletoaffordabikethattheylike.,范文-1,2020/6/7,Inconclusion,althoughthedevelopmentofmoderncitieshasledtoadecreasingnumberofpeopletravelingbybicycle,Ibelievethatmeasuresmentionedabovecouldeffectivelyreversethissituation.,范文2分析,Alotofyoungpeopledonotknowhowtomanagetheirmoneywhengraduatingfromhighschool.Whatdoyouthinkarethereasons?Whatcanbedonetoteachthemthisimportantskill?,2020/6/7,范文2分析,这篇文章的两个原因写成了一个段落，因为各自展开比较少。为了保持段落平衡，合成一段比分开写更合理。,2020/6/7,范文2分析,Manyyoungpeopleareleavingschoolwithoutabasicandvitalunderstandingofhowpersonalfinancesoughttobemanagedintheadultworld.Thislackofknowledgeisduetoalackoflifeexperienceandlimitededucationwhichcanbesolvedintwosimpleways.Onemainreasonwhysomanyyoungpeopleareunabletomanagetheirownfinancesuponfinishinghighschoolisthattheyhavebeenlivingalongwiththeirparentsforfree.Asaresult,theyhaveneverneededtoearnasalaryorsavetheirmoneyinordertopaybills.Anothercauseisthatschoolsdonotfactorpersonalfinancialmanagementintotheircurriculum.Schoolsfocusinsteadonclassicsubjects,suchasmaths,geography,historyandlanguages,whichmeansimportantlifeskillsarenotbeingtaught.Bothteachersandparentsarefailingtoprepareyoungpeoplefortherealworld.,2020/6/7,范文2分析,Therearetwooptionsforsolvingyoungpeoplesinabilitytomanagepersonalfinances.Firstly,parentsshouldspendtimewiththeirchildrenteachingthemhowmoneyisearned,budgetedandusedforeithersavingsorexpenses.Onesimplestepcouldbeforparentstostartbyteachingyoungchildrenhowtomanagetheirpocketmoneyand,astheirchildgrowsup,expandintomoreserioushouseholdexpenses.Secondly,schoolsshouldincorporatelifeskillsintotheircurriculumforfinalyearstudents.Inthisway,childrenwillbeabletolearninasupportiveenvironmenthowtheirfinancesneedtobebudgetedandmanagedtoavoiddebtproblemslaterinlife.Inconclusion,youngpeoplelackfinancialmanagementskillsduetothenegligenceofparentsandschools,whichcanonlybesolvedifbothtakemoreresponsibilityforequippingschoolleaverswiththerightskills.,2020/6/7,解决方案-切实可行,1.政府-至关重要(收税/花钱/颁布法律)；1).Thegovernmentcouldimposehighertaxesonsothat.2).Whatthegovernmentshoulddoistoinvestin./financiallysupport./spendmoneydoing.3).Thegovernmentoughttorequire.to.2.家长3.学校4.公司5.authorities,2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(原因+有何影响版本),1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(扩充或者缩减原题)+承上启下(最好两个问题都预告)2.Oneofthereasonsisthat第一个原因分析。(idea-support)3.Inaddition,第二个原因分析。(idea-support)4.过渡句-Tomyknowledge,thereare完全取决于你自己(好/坏/虽然.但是.)5.总结(重复原因/影响),2020/6/7,Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearechangingcareersduringworkinglife.Whatdoyouthinkarethereasons?Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopmentforsociety？,2020/6/7,Inthepast,manypeopleusedtostayinthesamejobfortheirlifetime.Today,however,jobhoppinghasbecomethenewnorm,which,frommypointofview,isduetoacombinationofreasonsandseemstohavesignificantnegativeeffectsonsociety.Onemainreasonformorepeoplechangingcareersistheincreaseintheirchoicesofjobs.Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandtechnology,therehaveemergedagreatnumberofnewoccupationswhicharebelievedtobemoreappealingincreativityorflexibility.InChina,forexample,anincreasingnumberofwhite-collarswithrepetitivedailyroutineshaveswitchedfromworkingintheofficetostartingtheirownbusinessesontheinternetandworkingathomewithgreatflexibility.,2020/6/7,Anothercauseofcareermoveisthecontinuouslyrisinglivingcostinmostcountriesaroundtheworld.Asthepriceforalmosteverythinghasbeensoaring,thereisenormousfinancialpressureimposedonadultswhowanttoprovidetheirfamilieswithhighqualityoflife,whichdrivesthemtoseekbetterpayingjobs.Oneofthemosteffectivewaystoachievetheirfinancialambitionisbelievedtohopfromonecompanytoanother.Althoughitmayberewardingfortheindividualtochangejobs,therewillbeseveralundesirableoutcomesforsociety.Firstly,asmorepeopleconsiderswitchingtheircareers,thereislikelytobeawasteofmoneyandtimespentonthetrainingofnewemployees,whichasaresultwillnegativelyaffecttheprofitabilityandproductivityofcompanies.Inaddition,jobhoppingmayalsocauseaburdentothegovernment,becausepeoplebetweenjobsmaybedependentonthefinancialassistanceprovidedbypublicfunds,whichwillleadtoinsufficientinvestmentinmoreimportantservices,suchaseducationandhealthcare.,2020/6/7,试着自己写个结尾段,2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本),1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(扩充或者缩减原题)+承上启下(我认为这会导致的问题，他们能够被解决)2.第一个问题扩展(idea-support)3.Inaddition,第二个问题扩展。(idea-support)4.针对这两个问题提出解决方案5.总结(问题+解决),2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本),Ariseinthestandardoflivinginacountryoftenonlyseemstobenefitcitiesratherthanruralareas.Whatproblemsmightthisdifferencecause?Howmighttheseproblemsbereduced?,2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本),Therehasbeenasignificantriseinlivingstandardsofpeopleinmanycountries,suchasbettereducationqualityandsmallerincomedisparity.However,itseemsthatsuchimprovementsaremostlyenjoyedbyurbandwellersratherthanthoselivinginthecountryside,which,inmyopinion,willresultinmanyundesirableoutcomesforbothcitiesandruralareas.,2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本),Asurbanliveskeepbecomingincreasinglyappealing,anoverwhelminglylargenumberofpeoplewillbedrawntocitieseitherinsearchofmoreemploymentopportunitiesorseekingsuperiorlevelofmedicalcareservices.Thiswilldefinitelyposetremendouspressureonbothlocalsandnewcomersofbigcities,suchasrisinglivingcosts,frustratingtrafficcongestion,andintensecompetitionforjobs.,2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本),Asforruralareas,theproblemscausedarealsosignificant.Tobespecific,therewillbeasevereshortageoflabourforceworkinginagriculturalindustry,withtoomanypeoplemigratingfromvillagestotownsandcities.Asaresult,farminglandwouldbeleftuncultivatedandcropyieldswouldsignificantlydecline,possiblyfollowedbyariseinfoodpricesnationwide.,2020/6/7,report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本),Ithinkthat,therefore,measuresshouldbetakentonarrowthegapoflifequalitybetweenurbanandruralareas.Firstly,taxreductionandexemptioncouldbeapossiblesolutiontotheproblemoflabourdrain.Inotherwords,bothindividualsandbusinesseswouldchoosetostayifthereissuchafavorable(preferential)policy.Secondly,thegovernmentcouldalsomakepeoplewillingtostaywheretheywerebornandgrewupbyimprovinglocallivingconditions,suchasbudgetingmoremoneytowardseducationandhealthservices.Inconclusion,theproblemscausedbythedisparitybetweencitiesandvillagesareconcerningpeopleofbothplaces.Theycanonlybesolvedifthegovernmenttakesmoreresponsibilityforclosingthegap.,2020/6/7,Report类型的第一段一般不需要背景句，题目中的现象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接开始改写的工作就可以了。,2020/6/7,report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语),1)Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentsbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?Poorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadprobleminmanycountries.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.Parentsandschoolsshouldberesponsibleforsolvingthisproblem.（提前总结型过渡:预告了原因和解决）,2020/6/7,report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语),2).Childrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimesthanbefore.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Howshouldtheybepunished?Thenumberofcrimescommittedbychildrenandteenagershasbeenincreasing.Ithinkthattherecouldbeseveralreasonswhythisishappeningandthattheyoungercriminalsshouldbepunisheddependingonwhattheyhavedone.（空话型过渡）,2020/6/7,report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语),3).Someemployersthinkthatformalacademicqualificationsaremoreimportantthanlifeexperiencesandpersonalqualitieswhentheylookforanemployee.Whyisitthecase?Isitapositiveornegativedevelopment?Formaleducationalqualificationsarebelievedtobemoreimportantthanlifeexperiencesandpersonalitytraitswhenacompanyisrecruitingnewstaffs.Thiscriterionofchoosingemployeescanbeexplainedbythefollowingreasonsandfrommypointofview,itisapositivedevelopmentforbothjobseekersandcompanies.（空话型过渡）,2020/6/7,report类型的介绍段(基本句型的切换),4).Theaverageweightofcitizenshasbeenincreasinginmanycountries.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?Manycountriesacrosstheworldarefacedwiththeproblemofobesity.Ithinkthatunhealthylifestylesoftodayspeoplearethecausesofthisproblem.（提前总结型过渡）,2020/6