Writing-Skills--letter-of-advicePPT课件

.,1,Writing,By魏丽娟,.,2,Icantmakefriends,.,3,Icantsleep!,.,4,Howtobecomeclever?,.,5,weneedadvice!,.,6,read&compare,.,7,Whatmakesacompositiongood?,.,8,H:handwritingC:contentL:languageS:structure,HCLS原则,.,9,Mr.Worried,Mr.Helpful,.,10,ApersoncalledWorriedwrotealettertoyou.Canyouguesswhatworriedhim?,.,11,DearMr.Helpful,ImahighschoolstudentandImintrouble.IusedtobecrazyaboutEnglish,butnowIhavesomedifficultywithEnglish,especiallywithoralEnglish.YouknowIwanttotakepartinEnglishtalentcompetitioninthefuture,maybeinmyuniversity,soIwanttoprepareitfromnowon.IwonderhowIcanspeaklikeanativespeaker.Idowanttobeoneofthetoptenandgotoaworld-famousuniversity.ButmyoralEnglishisnotgoodenough.WhatshouldIdo?Worried,.,12,请你仔细阅读所给英文信,然后给Worried同学写一封回信.要求包含以下内容：1.写信目的2.你的建议和理由(至少两条)3.你的期望要求：可适当增加细节词数100左右.,.,13,审题,建议信,一般现在时和一般将来时,.,14,Para.1(beginning),Para.3(ending),Para.2(body),structureofanadviceletter,intention,advice,reasons,expectation,.,15,outline?,列提纲并遣词造句,.,16,建议信经典套用句型,闪亮篇首句1.Iknowyouhavetroublein.afterreadingyourletter.2.Imwritingtoofferyousomeadviceon/about3.Imgladtogiveyousomesuggestions.4.Itsmypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon.出彩篇中句1.Firstly,whynot.?Bydoingthis,.2.Besides/whatsmore/inaddition,youshould.Thatway,.3.Lastbutnotleast,itwouldbeagoodideato.精彩篇尾句1.Ihopewhatsmentionedabovemightbehelpful.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.,.,17,writingtime(about10min),连句成篇&修改润色,.,18,makecommentsusingHCSL,.,19,Referencemodel（范文赏析）,DearWorried,IhavereceivedyourletterandImgladtogiveyousomesuggestions.Firstofall,dontbedisappointedandjustbelieveinyourself.Inordertospeakwell,youmustlearntoreadandlistenmuch,whichwillcontributetobuildingyourvocabularyandhelptobetteryourEnglishspeaking.,.,20,Besides,youdbetterwacthsomewonderfulAmericanorBristishTVshows,whereyoucanenjoymanyrealEnglishandpickupsomeveryusefulexpressions.Lastbutnottheleast,itsnecessarytopractisespeakingasoftenaspossible,forpracticemakesperfect.Followyourdreamandyoullfindsuccessisjustaroundthecorner!Ihopeyouwill