UsingLanguageⅡ (8).ppt

ProofReading短文改错,生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。,包头市蒙古族中学史志欣,Whatisproofreading?,1.correctsomegrammarmistakes2.connectionbetweensentences3.themainideaofthewholepassage,设错方式？,改错格式？,多词缺词错词,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。,改错步骤,1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）,2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthegrammarmistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）,3.Readthepassageagain,checkyouranswers.（检查核对，敲定终稿）,HowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading?,ProofReading,动词,名词,冠词,代词,连词,介词,形容.副词,小试牛刀,1.TheGreatWallofChinaisoneofthelargestconstructionprojectsevercomplete.2.(2012全国)Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.3.(2013全国)TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.4.Amongtheparkstreesthereareasciencehall,anartcentre,agym,and,won,drunk,completed,is,一、动词,归纳总结,错误主要错在,时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、,非谓语动词（todo/doing/done）,小试牛刀,1.(2010全国)Iftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize.2.(13全国)Infact,mygrandfatherevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.,3.IwillbeverygladwhetherIcanworkwithyou.,what,when,if,if,whether,如果条件状语从句,是否及物动词后的宾语从句且没有ornot,是否通常引导名词性从句,二、连词,小试牛刀,归纳总结,错误主要错在,并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用，上下文逻辑关系理解错用,4.(2011全国)IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.,5.Ireceivedmymotherscalltellingmeshewouldcome,butIhadtocanceltheappointmentswithyou.,and,so,小试牛刀,1.(2011全国)Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.2.(2014全国)WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.,3.AfterlearningEnglishforseveralyears,Ihavemadeagreatprogress.4.IfIchoosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.,luggage,cups,the,三、名词四、冠词,名词错误主要错在,单复数；可数与不可数；,归纳总结,冠词错误主要错在,泛指与特指；a.an.the混用漏用和多用,小试牛刀,1.(2012全国)MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.2.(2014全国)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.3.(2014全国)Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.,五、形容副词,pleased,tasty,4.BeingamemberoftheStudentsUnionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities.However,IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively.,Therefore,5.Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient.,patiently,wonderful,归纳总结,错误主要错在,词性错用，副词混用；原级、比较级最高级的混用,小试牛刀,1.(2010全国)Beforeherleaving,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestohim.2.Tomakemydreamcometrue,IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatIllconcentratemoreonstudies.,归纳总结,错误主要错在,六、代词,her,myself,指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用；主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合句，名词性、定语从句）,小试牛刀,1.(2011全国)LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket.2.(2014全国)Nearlyfiveyearsagoandwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden.,归纳总结,错误主要错在,七、介词,in,of,固定搭配,聚沙成塔-Summary,动词时态和语态主谓一致勿忘记还要注意非谓语名词多考单复数连词并列和从属上下逻辑要清楚形容副词看词性代词前后要一致介词搭配要记牢还有冠词a/an/the改完复查敲定稿,Attention,三不改,三原则,标点符号不改字母大小不改词语顺序不改,以保持句子原义为原则实词以改变词形为原则虚词以添加或删除为原则,Challengeyourself!,1.MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS,whichwasveryinterested.2.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.3.Sincethenforalltheseyearswehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.4.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamouswriter.,(2010-2017全国卷),a,buying,has,a,interesting,5.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.6.Forawhilemyparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforel