Revision　module　B.ppt

书面表达专讲,合肥市第36中学刘元坤,Writingskills书面表达六步法,一、审题1.确定体裁和格式2.确定主体时态3.确定中心人称4.确定得分点,2017年安徽省中考作文真题,2017年安徽省中考作文参考答案,1.befriendlyto.,Sheisfriendlytoeveryoneatschool.,Mydreamcametrue.,2.bebadfor,Eatingtoomuchisbadforourhealth.,二、遣词造句步骤1.抓主干，定时态；2.套句型，连成句；,二、遣词造句,6.buyfor,Sheboughtsomepresentsforhermother,etrue,4.takesb.tohospital,Wetookhimtohospital.Hewastakentohospital.,5.flykites,Theywillflykitesintheparknextweek.,1.Phillips12岁了.Phillipsistwelveyearsold.2.他来自TheUSA.HecomesfromtheUSA.HeisanAmerican.3.他喜欢游泳.Helikesgoingswimming.4.他也喜欢画画.Healsolikesdrawing.5.他还喜欢照顾动物，等等。Helikestakingcareoftheanimals,andsoon.6.周末的时候他帮助打扫动物园。Heoftenhelpstocleanthezooattheweekend.7.他为动物制作标志牌。Heusuallymakessomesignalboardfortheanimalsattheweekends.,PhillipsandAnimalSignsManyteenagersloveanimals.Phillipsisoneofthem.EthanPhillipsistwelveyearsold.Heisastudent.Hestudiesinamiddleschool.HecomesfromtheUSA.HeisanAmerican.Helikesgoingswimming.Healsolikesdrawing.Helikestakingcareoftheanimals,andsoon.Heoftenhelpstocleanthezooattheweekend.Heusuallymakessomesignalboardfortheanimalsattheweekends.,三、成文创设好的开端,适当使用一些关联词，把材料按一定的逻辑顺序串联起来，使之连贯,首尾要注意呼应,使文章结构完整.,EveryoneshouldlearnfromPhillips,weshouldtakecareoftheanimals,theanimalsareourfriends.Letsdoittoday.,四.修改注意事项1.时态是否正确;2.主谓是否一致;3.要点是否全面;4.人称是否正确;5.语序问题;6.是否符合语言习惯;7.固定短语。,1.Heshobbyisplaybasketball.3.Heoftenbybiketoschool.,hisplaying,hisplaying,Hishobbyisplayingbasketball.,Thoughwereweretired,wehadagoodtime.,Heoftengoestoschoolbybike.Heoftentakesabiketoschool,4.Myhometowninsummerhasmanybeautifulflowers.,Therearemanybeautifulflowersinmyhometowninsummer.,火眼金睛，洞察秋毫,2.Thoughweweretired,butwehadagoodtime.,实战演练,实战演练,实战演练,实战演练,实战演练,5.Iverylikemakingfriendswithyou.Ilikemakingfriendswithyouverymuch.6.IwatchingTVnow.IamwatchingTVnow.7.Therewillhaveabigpartyintheparktomorrow.8.Theywerehadapicnicintheparkyesterday.,Therewillbeabigpartyintheparktomorrow.,Theyhadapicnicintheparkyesterday.,火眼金睛，洞察秋毫,9.Hewithoutbreakfastgoestowork.,Hegoestoworkwithoutbreakfast.,五、誊写书写工整、卷面整洁会为高分奠定基础。六、检查誊写以后要检查一遍，看有无单词拼写、标点符号、字母大小写等错误。,Writingskills书面表达六步法,实战演练现场直播,实战演练假设你是李华。中考后，你们班将到阳光农场郊游。请你通过e-mail将有关事项通知全班同学，要点如下：,参考词汇：getclosetothenature（亲近大自然）strawberries（草莓）词数60-80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）,文中不能出现真人真名所给的要点必须用上，紧扣主题适当发挥Hello,everyone!Wouldyouliketohavefunaftertheexam?WellWelcometojoinus!Yours,LiHua,Hello,everyone!Wouldyouliketohavefunaftertheexam?WellhaveanexcitingtriptotheSunshineFarmonJune28th.Onthatday,wewillmeetontheschoolplaygroundat8:00inthemorning.Theschoolbuswilltakeusthere.Wecangetrelaxedandgetclosetothenature.Onthefarm,wewillhaveapicnic.Wecanalsopickvegetablesandfruitssuchastomatoesandstrawberries.Butwemustntswiminthelake.Andwecantgooffonourown.ImsurewewillenjoyourselvesontheSunshineFarm.Welcometojoinus!YoursLiHua,短文欣赏,根据提示和要求完成下面短文。假如你(LiLei)在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信(60-80个词)表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容：1向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。2礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。3告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。,Homework,关于提高