八下期中复习书面表达讲评.ppt

,书面表达讲评,根据以下信息文提示，写一篇80词左右的短文1.Jack是我最好的朋友，很爱打篮球，经常花很多时间在打篮球上。2.上周五，放学后和同学打篮球淋了雨。回家后头疼，喉咙痛并伴有咳嗽。到医院检查后，医生说，他得了感冒，服些药，睡一觉就会好些的。3.周六，学校进行了义务服务社区的活动。Jack因为昨晚的感冒到得晚些。4.当他到那儿时，同学们有的在扫地，有的在倒垃圾，有的帮社区老人做其他的事。大家很高兴。5.然而父母给他的学习压力也很大，他不知怎么办？请给他点建议。volunteerwork;neighborhood;serve,一、审题三审1.审“时态”分析用什么时态2.审“人称”用第几人称3.审“要点”理要点，找出关键词时间短语,一般现在时，一般过去时，过去进行时,第三人称单数,lastFriday,afterschool,afterhome,lastSaturday,时间从句动词短语,afterthedoctorlookedhimover,whenhegotthere,1.likedoingsth.,playbasketball,Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.spendsometimeonsth./indoingsth.,2.playbasketballwithsb.getwethaveaheadachehaveasorethroathaveacoughlookoverhaveacoldtakemedicinehaveagoodsleepfeelwell,3.dovolunteerworkintheneighborhoodserveintheneighborhoodasvolunteersgetlatebecauseofillness4.sweepthefloorhelpsb.todosth.takeouttherubbishbehappy5.givesb.alotofpressure/stressnotknowwhattodo,二、圈动词、定词形,1.likedoingsth.,playbasketball,Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.spendsometimeonsth./indoingsth.,2.playbasketballwithsb.getwethaveaheadachehaveasorethroathaveacoughlookoverhaveacoldtakemedicinehaveagoodsleepfeelwell,3.dovolunteerworkintheneighborhoodserveintheneighborhoodasvolunteersgetlatebecauseofillness4.sweepthefloorhelpsb.todosth.takeouttherubbishbehappy5.givesb.alotofpressure/stressnotknowwhattodo,1.Jack是我最好的朋友，很爱打篮球，经常花很多时间在打篮球上。,1.Jackismybestfriend.Helikesplayingbasketball.Heoftenspendslotsoftimeonit.,三、配主语，组句子,2.上周五，放学后和同学打篮球淋了雨。回家后头疼，喉咙痛并伴有咳嗽。到医院检查后，医生说，他得了感冒，服些药，睡一觉就会好些的。,2.LastFriday,heplayedbasketballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Heallgotwet.Afterhomehehadaheadache,hadasorethroatandhadacough.Sohewenttoseeadoctor.Thedoctorlookedhimover.Hesaidhehadacold,askedhimtotakemedicineandhaveagoodsleep.Hewouldfeelwellsoon.,3.周六，学校进行了义务服务社区的活动。Jack因为昨晚的感冒到得晚些。,3.LastSaturday,thestudentsinhisschoolservedintheneighborhoodasvolunteers./didvolunteerworkintheneighborhood.Hegotlatebecauseofillness.,4.当他到那儿时，同学们有的在扫地，有的在倒垃圾，有的帮社区老人做其他的事。大家很高兴。,4.Whenhegotthere,someclassmatesweresleepingthefloor,someweretakingouttherubbish,otherswerehelpingtheoldpeopletodotheotherthings.Everyonewasveryhappy.,5.然而父母给他的学习压力也很大，他不知怎么办？请给他点建议。,5.Buthisparentsgavehimalotofstressongrades.Hedontknowwhattodo./whatheshoulddo.Ithinkheshouldtalktohisparentsaboutit.Lethimstudyhappily.,四、加连词，成段落，定结构五、读全文，去斑点，得高分,Jackismybestfriend.Helikesplayingbasketball.Heoftenspendslotsoftimeonit.LastFriday,heplayedbasketballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Suddenlyitrainedheavily.Heallgotwet.Afterhomehefeltterrible-hadaheadache,hadasorethroatandhadacough.Sohewenttoseeadoctor.Thedoctorlookedhimover.Hesaidhehadacold,askedhimtotakemedicineandhaveagoodsleep.Hewouldfeelwellsoon.LastSaturday,thestudentsinhisschoolservedintheneighborhoodasvolunteers./didvolunteerworkintheneighborhood.Hegotlatebecauseofillness.Whenhegotthere,someclassmatesweresleepingthefloor,someweretakingouttherubbish,otherswerehelpingtheoldpeopletodotheotherthings.Everyonewasvery