写作专题1ding.ppt

,初中英语写作专题,银川市回民中学丁梅琴,HerearesomephotosofGary.Inthefirstphoto,heis,inthefirstphoto,inthesecondphoto,isswimming,atthepool,atthemall,iseatinganapple,isridingabike,inthepark,isrunning,atschool,7年级下unit5图三,inthethirdphoto,inthelastphoto,_,WriteashortpassagetotalkaboutwhatGaryisdoing.,Practice,Itsa_!Forwhom:_Time:_Place:_Comeandhavefun!,Birthdayparty,Lisa,Friday,June30,at4:30,Lisashouse,15thStreet,invitation,Canyouusethesephrases?,wouldliketodosth.haveabirthdayparty.beheldonFriday;onJune30;at4:30atLisashouse;on15thStreet,_,Writeashortpassagetoinvitefriendstocometothebirthdayparty.,Practice,一定要记住啊！遵循的写作步骤：,1.确定主题及主题句；2.确定正确的时态；3.主要的句型模式；4.调整语言顺序。,写作（共15分）假定你是赵方，今年暑假你将和父母一起去上海参观世博园，火车票已买好。请根据下表信息给你在上海的好友Jenny写一封信，告知她你们的行程安排，并与她约定一个见面的时间。字数：80词左右。,2010中考作文,1.确定主题及主题句,Theactivitiesyouaregoingtodoin4days.1.确定主题句,2.确定正确时态,写作（共15分）假定你是赵方，今年暑假你将和父母一起去上海参观世博园，火车票已买好。请根据下表信息给你在上海的好友Jenny写一封信，告知她你们的行程安排，并与她约定一个见面的时间。字数：80词左右。,2010中考作文,一般将来时,2.确定正确时态,Imgoingto,leaveYinchuanonJuly15,visitthepavilions,stayinJiangtianHotelwhichisabout4kilometersawayfromthepavilions,gotoShanghaitovisitthepavilionsoftheWorldExpo.,arriveinShanghaionJuly17,plantoreturntoYinchuanonJuly20,3.主要的句型模式；,4.调整语言顺序,Part1:Ivegotgoodnewstotellyou.ThissummervacationmyparentsandIaregoingto.,Part2:Wearegoingto,Part3:IwillbefreeontheeveningofJuly19.Canwemeetthen?Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou.,查漏补缺!,DearJenny，Ivegotgoodnewstotellyou.ThissummervacationmyparentsandIaregoingtogotoShanghaitovisitthepavilionsoftheWorldExpo.Wehavealreadyboughtthetraintickets.WearegoingtoleaveYinchuanonJuly15andarriveinShanghaionJuly17.WearegoingtostayinJiangtianHotelwhichisabout4kilometersawayfromthepavilions.Duringthenexttwodayswearegoingtovisitthepavilions.WeplantoreturntoYinchuanonJuly20.IwillbefreeontheeveningofJuly19.Canwemeetthen?Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,ZhaoFang,1.检查主题,2.语法,3.拼写,4.句型是否过于单一,5.核查词数,写作（计分分）假定你是西夏中学的一名学生，你校上周举办了“英语周”。请你根据下列表格中的汉语提示写一篇题为“TheEnglishWeekatXiXiaMiddleSchool”英语短文，介绍英语周期间的活动情况并谈谈你的感受。字数“字。文章题目和首句已给出，不计入总字数。,1.确定主题及主题句,2.正确时态,3.句型模式,4.调整语言顺序,activitiesyoudidonlastTheEnglishWeek,一般过去式,Itookpartin,sang，joined，watched，guessed，,Part1：LastweekourschoolheldanEnglishweek.Part2：activitiesyoudidonTheEnglishWeek.Part3：WhatdoyouthinkofTheEnglishWeek?Goodorbad?,Mostmanyotherasmallnumberofno,HowdostudentsinClass1gettoSchool?Inourclass,moststudentsgotoschoolbybike.Manystudentswalktoschool.Otherstudentstakethebus.Asmallnumberofstudentsgotoschoolbycar.Nostudentstakethesubway.,8年级上unit4图三,NorthAmerica,China,Japan,Hongshanhu,Kaishandao,byboat,most,schoolbus,some,walk,ride,most,train,others,walk,ride,city,bike,bus,A:HowdostudentsgettoschoolinB:MoststudentsSomestudents,8年级上unit4图一,Hongshanhu,Kaishandao,most,walk,ride,bike,most,others,schoolbus,some,city,Poster,Volunteerwork:HelpingsickkidsWhywedoit:TocheerthemupWhatwecoulddo:tellstories,singsongs,playwiththemTime:ThisweekPlace:Class6,Grade9,Comeandjoinus!Quickly!,9年级unit8图二,_,Writeavolunteerlettertocallupstudentstohelpsickkids.,Homework,总结,1.确定主题句,2.正确时态,3.句型模式,4.调整语言顺序,5.查漏补缺,1.检查主题,2.语法,3.拼写,5.核查词数,4.句型是否过于单一,1.学写优美流畅的句子,A.正确构建简单句；,B.恰当使用复合句。,2.学会写段落,A.主题句(Topicsentence)和支撑句：写段落的第一步是确