2018年中考英语满分作文-北京卷

.题目假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办一场关于京剧的讲座，你打算邀请你们班交换生 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他讲座的时间和地点，以及需要做什么准备。提示词语：lecture（讲座）, invite, information, question, online提示问题：When and where will you have the lecture?What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?Dear Peter,How is it going? Therell be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. _If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua题目静以修身，俭以养德，勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。无论生活富足与否，我们都应该提倡节约，杜绝浪费。某英文网站正在开展以节约是美德为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。提示词语：thrifty（节约的）, save, turn off, food, money, virtue（美德）提示问题：What do you do in your daily life?Why do you do so?Its one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty._考题解析2018年北京卷中考作文与2017年相比，在考试形式上没有什么特殊的变化，还是二选一，学生选择其中一题完成任务的考试形式。都是围绕着一个主题，根据提名提供的信息，提示词和问句进行内容的写作。话题仍贴近学生的实际生活，让学生学以致用。第一个题目主要考察学生的应用能力；第二个话题相对较难，试题以日常生活中的小事为切入点，着眼于中华民族优秀传统文化“俭以养德”。引导学生从自身做起，增强勤俭节约意识，积极践行社会主义核心价值观，传承中华民族传统美德。满分范文Its one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty. Being thrifty is a good virtue which has been passed down from generation to generation. Its a good idea to start on in our daily life.First of all, I constantly check the lights and the taps to make sure that they are off when leaving the house. Besides, never have I wasted any food. Whats more, I dont spend too much money on unnecessary things and save money regularly.The reason why I do so is that I want to make a difference to my life. As the old saying goes, Waste not, want not. I make up my mind to be thrifty as much as possible. I think everyone should take actions to stick to this virtue.名师点评本文体裁属于议论文，话题是节约是美德，难度等级属于中上，是常见的中考作文话题之一。本文需要考生写出生活中是如何提倡节约，杜绝浪费的。具体应从两个方面去写：一、在日常生活中你都做了什么？二、你为什么要这样做？仔细阅读文中所给提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。根据要表达的内容确定本文应以第一人称去写，描述的是日常生活中如何节约的，时态应为一般现在时。写作时应注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，层次清楚。本文是一篇优秀的作文，围绕主题展开论述且包含所有内容要点；上下文意思连贯，层次清楚，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。首先第一段直奔主题，提出节约是美德，运用定语从句阐述了节约是中华民族的传统美德，以此说明节约的重要性，Being thrifty is a good virtue which has been passed down from generation to generation. 接着号召大家在日常生活中要从自身做起。 Its a good idea to start on in our daily life. 接着，在第二段中介绍了平常是如何做的，采用三个连词First of all, Besides，Whats more，清楚地举例介绍了自己生活中节约的三件小事，检查是否关灯和水龙头，不浪费食物，不乱花钱。最后一段，说明这样做的原因，用句型The reason why I do so is