高中英语作文写作教学整理公开课 观点议论ppt课件

.,Whatmakesagoodessay?,英语作文写作,观点类作文写作,.,基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析,话题词汇、短语错误2.词汇、短语、句型贫乏3.句子语法错误4.连贯性差,积累少,语法不扎实,篇章意识不足,.,考场作文TIPS,1.取悦评卷人:有清晰的整体脉络,有自然的段间衔接.经典的用词用句,有整齐美观的书写.,2.经典的用句：感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。,.,写作基本步骤,1.仔细审题，列举大纲。2围绕要点，写出句子。3.添加过度，确保连贯。4.先求正确，再求灵活。5.认真眷写，卷面整洁。,.,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。,观点类作文写作,.,Theoutlineofthewriting,Conclusionparagraph:结尾,Introductionparagraph:开头引出话题,.,高三学生_春游_讨论_高考临近_接触自然_精神放松_呼吸新鲜空气_大脑休息_没心情玩_耽误学习_,相关词汇短语默写,1.introduction(topic):,2.body(supportingideas):,3.conclusion:,senior3students,gospringouting,discussion,withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,beclosetonature,relaxthemselves,breathesomefreshair,resttheirbrains,（dontfeellikegoing）,(wastethetime),inmyopinion,.,主题句的内容要明确，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性,WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.,1.introduction(topic):,.,巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系,Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowardsPeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.,.,Thebodypart,Point1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）翻译：Moststudents,about65%,areinfavoroftheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.,Thebodypart,point1：,表达观点一句型：ofthemholdtheopinionthat.ofthemareinfavoroftheideathatPeoplewhoarefortheideathink,.,Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,TheythinkitgoodtodosthsthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion,itisofgreatbenefittodosth翻译:Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair,Reason1：,.,表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,.SecondlyThirdlyInthefirstplaceInthesecondplaceInthethirdplaceFinally/Lastbutnotleast/,.,.,Reason2:活动是精神放松/大脑休息/有利于学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连接）翻译:Whatsmore，theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.表示递进、强调的关联词.Besides/Apartfrom/Whatsmore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse,Reason2：,.,Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。,Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.,Conclusion,.,However,ofthemholdadifferentview./ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdontthinkso.Differentfromthose.,peoplethink.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleareagainsttheidea.,Point2:的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）翻译:Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）,point2：,.,表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,.SecondlyThirdlyInthefirstplaceInthesecondplaceInthethirdplaceFinally/Lastbutnotleast/,.,.,Reason1:高考临近，没有心情玩翻译:Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydontfeellikegoinganywhere.Theysay/believe/holdtheopinionthat.,Reason1：,.,Reason2:春游耽误学习翻译:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycantaffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.表示递进、强调的关联词.Besides/Apartfrom/Whatsmore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse,Reason2：,.,结尾常用句型Inmyopinion/Pe