英语人教版八年级下册writing.ppt.ppt

,Unit5,Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?,临武二中刘爱云,SectionB23a-3b,Whatwas/weresb.doingwhentherainstormcame?,Sandy,Twinbrothers,Sammy,father,mother,dog,Lead-in,3aMakenotesaboutaneventyourememberwell.,Whatwastheevent?Whendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?Whatwereyoudoing?Whatwereyourfriendsdoing?Whywasitimportant?Whydoyourememberthisevent?,Pre-writing,3bWriteashortarticleabouttheimportanteventin3a.Trytowritethreeparagraphs.,1.First,writeabouttheevent(whenandwhereithappened).,2.Next,writeaboutwhatyouandsomeofyourfriendsweredoingwhenthiseventhappened.,3.Then,writeaboutwhythiseventwasimportant.,Writingskills,AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasWenchuanEarthquake.IthappenedonMay12,2008inWenchuan,Sichuan.WhenIheardthenewsofthisevent,Iwasworking.MyfriendswerewatchinggamesonTV.Thiseventisveryimportanttomebecausemanypeoplediedintheearthquake.Theyneedsomehelp.Lotsofpeoplecametohelpthem.,Samplewriting1,when,where,Whatandhow,Meaningwhy,who,Inourcity,therewasanearthquakeat8:32yesterdayevening.Atthattime,Iwaslisteningtomusicinthebed.Mymotherwascookinginthekitchenandmyfatherwasworkingonthecomputerinthestudy.MyeldersisterAlicewaswatchingTVinthelivingroom.Wewerealittlescared.Luckily,theearthquakewasnotbiganditdidntlastlong.Wewereallsafe.Howluckywewere.,Samplewriting2,thebeginning(whenandwhere),theprocess(whoandwhat),theresult(why),Freewriting,AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwas_.Ithappenedin/on_at/in_.,WhenIheardthenewsofthisevent/Whenthiseventhappened,Iwas_.Myfriendswere_.,Thiseventisveryimportanttomebecause_./Irememberthiseventwellbecause_.,Whenwhere,Whatwas/weresb.doing,Why,Check,1Checkbyyourself2Checkyournoteswithyourpartner,Dontbeaf