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Unit1,Follow-upexercises,1,Writeafocusedtopicsentenceforthefollowingsubject,LookingforjobsApersoncanlookforajobinseveralways.PenguinsPenguinsresemblehumanbeingsinmanyrespects.,2,PersonalityOnespersonalityplaysanimportantroleinforeignlanguagelearning.WeatherLivinginaplacewheretheweatherisalwayswarmhasmanyadvantages.,3,4.ParagraphIAllinventionsareeitherbasicinventionsorimprovementsonearlierinventions.Paragraph2Therewasaseriousaccidentinthechemistrylabyesterday.Paragraph3Nutritionaldeficiencyisamajorproblemoftheelderly.,4,5.Paragraph1Theworldhasenjoyedmanybenefitsfromtheinventionoftelephone.Paragraph2Ihadaterriblemorningtoday.,5,8.Severaltechniqueshavebeenusedtoachievecoherence:l)Repetitionofkeywords:junkfood,students(asareunderlined)2)Useoftransitionalsignals:Foronereason,Also,Asaresult,however(asareitalicized)3)Useofpronouns:they,their,this(asareboldfaced),6,Unit2FOLLOW-UPEXERCISES,3.WhenIwasachild,wenevervariedourChristmasEveritual.Wealwaysbeganourprivatecelebrationpromptlyat6p.m.onDecember24whenthewholefamilyassembledinoursmallkitchen.WewatchedasMotherandmyoldersisterpreparedalightsupper.Assoonaswefinishedthemeal,werushedintothelivingroomtodecoratethetree.Theyoungerchildrenstartedthedecoratingbyputtingtinselandcolorful,7,ballsonthebranchesnearthebaseofthetree.Meanwhile,thetwoolderchildrenwereplacingornamentsonthehigherbranches.Finally,ourparentscompletedthedecoratingbyplacingabeautifulgolden-hairedangelattheverytopofthetree.Afterwefinishedthetree,wehurriedlydressedandwalkeddownthestreettoMidnightMass.Aswelistenedtotheservice,werememberedthereasonwecelebratedChristmas.ThenwereturnedhomewhereweatesomeofMothersChristmasgoodies.WealwaysendedourChristmasEveritualaround2a.m.bygatheringaroundthetreeandsingingSilentNight.,8,4.Logicalsequenceofthesentences:41051237159142118136-1Topicsentence:Myfamilyspenttwofun-filleddaysatDisneyWorldlastyear.,9,10,11,12,Concludingsentence:Althoughwewereverytiredatmidnight,weagreedthatourtwo-dayvacationatDisneyWorldwasoneofthebestwehadeverhad.5.(1)Then(2)morning(3)afternoon(4)Then(5)Afterthat(6)when(7)already(8)after,13,6.SampleparagraphTheNewYearcelebrationwassounforgettableformewhenIwasachild.WeeksbeforetheNewYearsDay,mymotherwouldletmehelphersendoutNewYearscardsandgoshoppingwithher.Inthecrowdedmarkets1boughtfirecrackers,likealltheotherkids.Then,beginningonNewYearsEve,thesoundofexplodingfirecrackerswaseverywhere,dayandnight.OnNewYearsDay,Iwatchedhugeparadesgobyinthemiddleofthestreets.Peoplewearingcostumesdancedpastus.Someofthemwereplayinginstruments;somewerehavingliondances,anddragondances.Afterwards,weworshipedourancestorsinatempleandvisitedfriendsandrelativestowishthemHappyNewYear.,14,Unit3FOLLOW-UPEXERCISES,3.Logicalsequenceofthesentences:3614752Relationship:Primarily,theorganizationoftheparagraphrepresentsmovementingeographicalspace.,15,4.l)Standingintheburned-outshellofmylivingroomwasashockingexperience.Abovemyheadwerecharredbeams,allthatremainedofourceiling.Infrontofme,whereourtelevisionandstereohadoncestood,weretwistedpiecesofmetalandchunksofblackenedglass.Strangely,someitemsseemedlittledamagedbythefire.Forexample,IcouldseetheTVtunerknobandadustyCDundertherubble.IwalkedthroughtheashesuntilIcametowhatwasleftofoursofa.Behindthesofahadbeenawalloffamilyphotographs.Now,thewallandthepicturesweregone.Ifoundonlyawater-loggedscrapofmyweddingpicture.,16,2)Thecentralfocusisashockingexperience.Tosupportthemainidea,thewriterusesalotofdescriptionsandorganizesthesedetailsaccordingtothespacerelationship,andthuscoherenceisachieved.,17,5.(1)into(2)crosses(3)Inthecenterof(4)Outside(5)inside(6)Onthefront(7)over(8)down(9)linedwith(10)Attherear,18,6.Thisparagraphisdevelopedinacircularorder,i.e.fromeasttonorth,andthentosouth.Youareencouragedtodescribethehouseusingotherwaysofarrangement.,19,Unit4FOLLOW-UPEXERCISES,Lookateachothersparagraphontheproceduresofcompletingsomehouseworkinpairs,commentoneachotherswriting,usingwhatyouhavelearnedinthisunit.,20,3.Pattern:descriptionwithsupplementaryexplanations.,21,22,4.with(2)while(3)slowly(4)Gradually(5)With(6)Bythistime(7)Suddenly(8)final(9)ending(10)applause,23,5.Task1,24,Linkingwordsandphrasesthatconnecttheseprocedures:firstly,also,afterward,Then,signalstheend,25,6.AccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar,the15thdayoftheeighthlunarmonthisthedayfortheMid-AutumnFestival,andthedayusuallyfallsononeofthedaysinthelatterhalfofSeptember.Forthisoccasionpeopleneedtobuymooncakesinadvance.Andwhenthateveningcomeswithafullmoonrising,Chinesefamiliesbegintohaveabigdinnertogether.Thefamilymembersenjoymanydelicacies,includingsweetorsaltymooncakesaswellassome,26,specialfoodliketarosandyoungsoyabeans.Forthosewhoareabsentfromthefamily,mooncakeshavealreadybeensenttothemdaysbefore.Whenthefamilyenjoyallofthese,theywilllookupatthefullmoon,chattingormissingtheirfarawayrelativesorfriends.Forthem,thefullmoonsymbolizesreunion.SuchfeelingsandscenesarefullyexpressedbyaChinesesaying:themoonathomeisexceptionallybrighter.,27,Unit5FOLLOW-UPEXERCISES,TheoutlineforParagraphB:Topicsentence:WorkinginanappleplantwastheworstjobIeverhad.Examples:I.Firstofall.theworkwasphysicallyhard.,28,Specificdetails:l)Fortenhoursanightitookcartonsthatrolleddownametaltrackandstackedthemontowoodenskidsinatractortrailer.2)Eachcartoncontainedtwelve32-ouncecansorbottlesofapplejuice,andtheywereheavy.,29,2.Thesecondbadfeatureofthejobwasthepay.Specificdetails:Iwasgettingtheminimumwageatthattime,$1.25anhour,plusaminimumofanickelextraforworkingthenightshift.,30,3.Theworstfeatureoftheappleplantjobwastheworkingconditions.Specificdetails:1)Duringworkwewerelimitedtotwo10-minutebreaksandanunpaidhalf-hourforlunch.2)Thesteelfloorsofthetruckswerelikeice:thequicklypenetratingcoldmademyfeetfeellikestone.Concludingsentence:Ifelthumiliatedbythepovertythatforcedmetodosuchabitterjob.,31,4.Logicalsequenceofthesentences:3-6-1-8-2-4-7-5Pattern:ItfollowsPatternlandusesmanyexamplestoillustratethecontrollingidea.,32,5.(l)Forexample(2)Furthermore(3)Instillanotherinstance(4)Even(5)his(6)these(7)contemporary,33,7.1)IveneverseenagirlaslazyasArena.2)EnglishteachersareapplyingdifferentmeanstoteachtheEnglishlanguage.3)Americanshavebeendecreasingtheirworkinghourssinceearly19/)0s.4)Myfatherhasbeenagenerousmantohischildren.,34,Unit6FOLLOW-UPEXERCISES,3.Subject;Class;CharacteristicsRepublic:aformofgovernmentinwhichpowerresidesinthepeople(theelectorate)Wolf:alarge,dog-likecarnivorousmammalwithyellowishorbrownishgrayandcoarsefur,erectpointedears,andabushytail,35,Jazz:astyleofmusicthatfeaturesimprovisationandperformancePersistence:akindofqualitynotgivingupevenduringroughtimes,36,4.Improveddefinitions,Astadiumisastructureorbuildinginwhichsportsspectacularsareheld.Socialismisatheoryorsystemofcommunityorganizationthatadvocatesthevestingoftheownershipandcontrolofthemeansofproduction,capital,landandsoforth,inthecommunityasawhole.,37,3.Photosynthesisistheprocessbywhichplantsusetheenergyoflighttoproducecompounds,suchassugarandstarch,fromanumberofsubstancesincludingwaterandcarbondioxide.4.Surreptitiousmeanssecret.,38,5.Politicalconservativesarepeoplewhoarededicatedtopreservingtheexistingconditions,suchasWilliamF.Buckley,Jr.,andPatRobertson.6.Hearingaidsareakindofdevicewhichenablesdeafpeopletohearsoundssuchasnormalspeech.,39,Unit7Follow-upExercises,Keytoexercises3.1)Pattern:singleeffectandmultiplecauses2)CausesEffectgotdrunkatthepartyhadtakenthedrugofBartJr.ssuicideAccutaneadolescentdepression,40,4.Logicalsequenceofthesentences:241365Patternofcauseandeffect:singleeffectandmultiplecauses.5.TaskOneTopic:Societyitselfmaybeproducingthedistortionsofpersonality,mentalillness,andemotionalinstability.,41,PointsCausesEffect1societyscompartmentalizing2.societyscompetitivedemandsdistortionsofpersonality,etc.3.inabilitytorebel,42,Unit8Follow-upExercises,Keytoexercises3.1)Topic:UniversityStudentsEntertainmentTopicsentence:Universitystudentsentertainmentcanbedividedintothreecategoriesaccordingtowhereittakesplace.Division:a)entertainmentathomeb)entertainmentoncampusc)entertainmentelsewhere2)Topic:RolesofYoungMarriedWomeninSocietyTopicsentence:Theaverageyoungmarriedwomenintodayssocietyhasherlifedividedintothreedifferentroles.,43,Division:a)theroleofwifeb)theroleofmotherc)theroleofself3)Topic:NeighborsTopicsentence:Neighborsfallintothreecategoriesaccordigntotheirdifferentattitudestowardsyou.Division:a)thosewhoarefriendlyb)thosewhoareindifferentc)thosewhohateyou,44,4.1)Mattresses:Queen;twin;firm;doubleSinglebasis:size2)Exercise:Fatigue;swimming;gymnastics;jogglingSinglebasis:field3)Churches:RomanCatholic;Baptism;Protestant;OrthodoxSingleBasis:branch,45,4)Vacation:Seashore;winter;summer;weekendsSinglebasis:time,46,5.Logicalsequenceofthesentence:,7310915842116Subject:ChristmasgiftsTopicsentence:Christmasgiftscanbedividedintothreegroups,accordingtotheirafter-Christmasfate.,47,Division:thosethatarewelcomedandputintouseverysoonthosethatarehalfwaybetweenbeinghatedandlovedthosethatyoubanishassoonaspossible.Concludingsentence:ByNewYearsDay,youhaveeitherused,storedordisposedofeachofyourChristmasgifts.,48,Unit9Follow-upExercises,3.Pattern:point-by-point,49,50,4.Lo