高考英语书面表达训练选好词写好句课件

书面表达训练,如何算是一篇好的文章？,1、覆盖了所有的要点。2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型【高级】和语法多样化【较复杂】）3、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,书面表达六步法,书面表达,审,抓,遣,连,查,抄,1.审：审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态文体：记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文要求：（见试题）人称：第一、二、三人称时态：过去式或者一般现在式.,2.3：抓、遣：列要点（关键词动词或动词词组）4.连：(1)扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。(2)组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。,5.查：复查全文（1）体裁格式是否正确；（2）内容要点是否全面；（3）全文的行文是否通顺、连贯。（4）句子的时态、语态是否正确；（5）主谓是否一致；（6）标点符号与大小写有无错误；（7）字数是否相符等。,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,1.Heading点题，一两个好句；概括性,2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending小结，呼应主题,选好词，写好句,一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。,指点迷津,你将很容易找到我的家,Youwillfindmyhouseeasily.,-,-,-,S,V,O,时态：一般将来时。S+Will+V原形,1、Youwillfindmyhouseeasily.,havenodifficultyindoingsth,Youllhavenotrouble/difficulty(in)findingmyhouse.,她很喜欢运动。,Shelikessportsverymuch.,-,-,-,S,V,O,1.Befondof2.beinto3.beinterestedin4.enjoy,Sheisfondofsports.Sheisintosports.Sheisinterestedinsports.Sheenjoyssports.,我们将尽力学好英语。,Trytodosth,WelltrytolearnEnglishwell.,doeverythingsbcantodosth,Trytodosth,1.Ihopetoreceiveyourlettersoon.2.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.,Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.,Becauseof/Thanksto/Owingtothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.,二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词,短语选择使用其他恰当的同义词、词组来代替。,1.HelearnsEnglishwell,helearnsmathswell,too.2.AnearthquakehappenedinWenchuan.IthappenedonMay12th.,dowellinbegoodat,takeplacecomeabout,3.我们认为他是位了不起的人.4.我的朋友们很容易就找到了我家。,Weallthinkhighlyofhim.,Myfriendshadnotroublefindingmyhouse.,5.我们学校有七十二间教室。6.她有些重要的事要处理。,Shehassomethingimportanttoattendto.,Ourschoolismadeupofseventy-twoclassrooms.,7.结果这个计划失败了。,Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.,三、学会套用句型,1.Hewasverytired.Hecouldntwalkanyfarther.,tooto,Hewastootiredtowalkanyfarther.,BecausepeoplecommunicateinEnglisheveryday,itwillbecomemoreandmoreimportanttohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish.WithsomanypeoplecommunicatinginEnglisheveryday,itwillbecomemoreandmoreimportanttohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish.,Textbookpage11,With+宾语+宾语补足语（doing/done/adj/todo/adv）,1.Becausehehasalotofhomeworktodo,hedoesntwatchTV.2.Mr.licameintotheclassroom,hehasabookinhishand.3.Thefarmersleeps,andhiswindowisopen.,With+宾语+宾语补足语（doing/done/adj/todo/adv）,Withalotofhomeworktodo,withabookinhishand,withhiswindowopen.,2.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakegreatprogress.,Studyhardandyoullmakerapidprogress.,祈使句+and/or+陈述句（陈述句要用将来时态）,IwaslateforschoolbecauseIgotuplate.,Thereasonwhyisthat,ThereasonwhyIwaslateforschoolwasthatIgotuplate.,四、通过合句，将意义相关的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过收缩，去掉一些多余的成分，或无意义的重复，避免冗长累赘，松散无力，以增强句子的连贯性，达到更好的表达效果。,Theschoolissurroundedbymanygreentrees.Itlooksverybeautiful.,Theschoolsurroundedbymanygreentreeslooksverybeautiful.,Theschoollooksverybeautifulwithmanygreentreessurroundingit.,五、有效的使用句子间的连接成分，使句子间的逻辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，连贯流畅。,Cellphoneispopularamongteenagers.Cellphonemakesitpossibleforteenagerstotalkwiththeirfamily.Cellphonemakesteenagersfeelcool.,cellphoneispopularamongteenagers.cellphonesmakeitpossibleforteenagerstotalkwiththeirfamily.cellphonesmaketeenagersfeelcool.,Asweallknow,Ononehand,Ontheotherhand,IthinktheInternetishelpfulnotharmfulassomeoneelsethinks.WeallknowthattheInternetisveryimportantinourdailylife.OntheInternet,wecanreadnewsandgetmuchinformation.WecansendE-mailsormakephonecallstoourfamily.Wecanattendthenetschool,readmanybooksandeventeachourselvesEnglish.,Inmyopinion,ratherthan,Asweallknow,isplaying,amoreandmoreimportantrole,Usebetterphr