英语人教版九年级全册How to write an essay.ppt

EnglishWriting,凤台四中毕娟,Iswritingdifficult?,Whenwasthefirsttimeyouwereaskedtowriteacomposition?Howdoyoufeelaboutit?Easyordifficult?,AthousandmilesjourneybeginswithasingleStep!千里之行始于足下！,Iswritingdifficult?,Howtowriteagoodcomposition?,书面表达五步曲四“K”和一“B”,列（Rank）,连（Link）,想（Think）,美（Beautify）,看题目要求、想主题、涉及内容、语态,列词汇、短语、句型结构,用关联词连接成句，完成文章,用优美语言、相关语句丰富美化文章,查（Check),检查全文中拼写语法等错误，规范书写,Yesterday,TonyandAnnawereontheirwayhome.,Step3:Weneedanoutline(提纲):,talkhappily,walk,carryfalldown,runeverywhere3.help.standup,pickup4.helpgohome,参考作文：,Yesterday,TonyandAnnawereontheirwayhome.Theytalkedhappily.Anoldwomanwalkedinfrontofthem.Shecarriedabasketofapples.Suddenly,theoldwomanfelldownandtheapplesraneverywhere.TonyhelpedhertostandupandAnnapickedtheapplesup.Thentheyhelpedtheoldwomantogohome.Shewasverythankful.,travel,stayathome,visitfriendsorparents,work,writing2,1.Mostpeopletravel.2.Manypeoplestayathome.3.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.4.Afewpeoplework.5.Enjoyyourvacation.,Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thenmanypeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.someotherpeoplewouldliketovisitfriendsorparents,becausetheywanttospendmoretimewiththeirfamilies.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,Proverb（谚语）/saying,Whilewriting:Beautify,Howtobeautifyyourcomposition?,1.使用高级词汇Ihopeyoucanhelpme.Heisagoodman.,Imlookingforwardtoyourhelp.,Heiskind-hearted.,2.使用形容词、副词、介词短语等Ourteachercameintotheclassroom.,Ourteachercameintotheclassroomhurriedlywithasmileonhisface.,3.使用连词Wearegoodfriends.Weshouldhelpeachother.Iplayedfootballontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.,WhenIwasplayingfootballontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.,Becausewearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.,4.使用固定句型让句式富于变化IwasdeeplymovedandIcouldntsayaword.Weshouldprotecttheenvironment.,Iwastoomovedtosayaword.,Itsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.,5.适当使用从句Wewillmakeasnowman.Hisbrothercametoseehim.Shefoundthewallet.Itwaslyingontheground.,Ifitsnowstomorrow,wewillmakeasnowman.,HisbrotherwholivedinCanadacametoseehim.,6.适当使用谚语,Shefoundthatthewalletwaslyingontheground.,Enjoysomeproverbs,1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.4.DoastheRomansdo.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。（笨鸟先飞）,失败是成功之母。,5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.,3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.,6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.,Enjoysomeproverbs,7.Nopains,nogains.8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.9.Behonestratherthanclever.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.,一份耕耘，一分收获,一天一个苹果，医生远离我。,与其聪明不如诚实,活到老，学到老。,mistakesinthiscomposition?,InaMondaymorning,Mr.Smithgotupatseventhirtyandputuptheclothes.Hewishedhisfaceandbrushedhistooth.Itwasaquerterpasteight.Hesaidgood-byetohiswife.Hedidntcatchthebusbecausethereweremanypeoplesatonthebus.Herantowork,hegavetheletterstothepeoplewhowaitedforthem.Hegoeshomeatfour.Heweretired,buthewashappy.,On,on,washed,teeth,quarter,was,sitting或去掉,and,went,Mr.SmithgotupathalfpastsevenonaMondaymorning.Afterthebreakfast,hesaidgoodbyetohisfamilyandlefthome.Unluckily,bythetimehearrivedatthebusstop,thebushadalreadygone.Sohehadtowalktothepostofficeandgotletterswhichheshouldsend.Inthedaytime,hewasbusysendinglettersandnewspapersfromhousetohouse.Hedidntreturnhomeuntilfouroclock.Hewastiredbuthappy.,难度较大：,作文园地,FirstoneSecondThirdFourthFifth,Summary,Whathavewelearnedinthislesson?,Homework,Writeacomposition当今世界，随着社会的发展与生活水平的提高，越来越多的人追求幸福的生活，“什么是幸福”也成为当今社会的热点话题。幸福是什么呢？有朋友就是一种幸福。请以“WhatIsHappiness?”为题写一篇讲稿，谈谈你对幸福的理解和感受