中考英语作文专项复习.ppt

1、Writing,题型特点： 书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。 中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们更多的自由表达空间。提示性词语越来越少，给同学们的思维空间越来越大。,2014年中考书面表达考察要点;,1.根据要求运用所学词组、句型写出 易懂的短文。 2.短文有层次、有条理，能清楚表达自己的意思。 3.能较为准确地运用语法、词汇，并且单词拼写、标点使用正确。 4.能使用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。,中考评分标准： 作文一律按档给分。,影响作文分数的因素： 1 题目要求、内容要点； 2 句子准确、通顺； 3 层次结构清晰；

2、4 拼写、语法等错误； 5 字母大小写、字母书写规范、标点符号 6 卷面整洁度；,Writing,书面表达六步法：,一、 确定作文方向基本要素:,审,二、 抓要点，确定主要词汇：,抓,三、 扩展成句,扩,四、 连句成文,连,六、 抄写,抄,五、 查漏改错,改,Writing,书面表达： 假如你在2010亚运会期间碰到外国朋友，请你根据下表的提示介绍进入NBA的中国球员易建联的情况。要求：主题鲜明，语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥，拼写正确，书写工整。80词左右。,一、审题：人物介绍、一般过去时态、一般现在时,审,二、 抓要点，确定主要词汇：,抓,篮球运动员,流行音乐、努力学习英语,pop musi

3、c, try to learn English,basketball player,出生、,be born,入选国家队,be chosen to play for the National Basketball Team,加入NBA、,become an NBA player,三、 扩展成句,扩,Eg:basketball player , be born, Yi Jianlian,a famous basketball player,is from Guangdong China. He was born on October 27th,1987.,2.be chosen ,play , t

4、he National Basketball Team,in January 2004,He was chosen to play for the National Basketball Team in January, 2004.,3. become a player , in July , 2007 ,NBA,He became an NBA player in July , 2007.,四、 连句成文(form a passage),连,本文应按时间顺序，in 2003, in his spare time ,常用连接词: because, so, but, until, when, s

5、ince, before，after,on the other hand, so that, , first、second、 third、finally,中考书面表达常见错误,一、名词的单复数： There are two hundreds student on the playground. There are two hundred students on the playground.,五、 查漏改错,改,二.主谓一致：,David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday.,David with his little bro

6、ther goes to the park every Sunday,David and his little brother go to the park every Sunday,三.时态和语态：,A thief is seen break a window to climb into an office of the factory last night.,四.逻辑性问题：,She wasnt careful, so/and she fell into the river.,She wasnt careful, but she fell into the river.,A thief w

7、as seen to break a window to climb into an office of the factory last night.,五.词类错用：,六.中式英语：,When I was happily, I played computer games.,When I was happy, I played computer games.,I very like English.,I like English very much.,15,我最喜欢的科目是英语. My _ subject is English. I _ English _ _ any other subjec

8、t. I _ English _.,避难就易,favourite,like,best,like,than,better,七 如何拿高分,范文赏析： Yi Jianlian,a famous basketball player, is from Guangdong, China. He was born on October 27th , 1987. He is 2.21 meters tall. This handsome boy became a collage student in 2003. Yi Jianlian was chosen to play for the National

9、Basketball Team in January, 2004. This young man became an NBA player in July , 2007. In his spare time, he likes listening to pop music and playing computer games. Now he is trying his best to learn English well.,学会避难就易，祝你成功！,作文一般框架： 文章分3段： （1）综述：概括性强，最多2-3句话引入主题； （2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面

10、，每个方面最多2-3句话； （3）结尾：紧扣主题，2-3句话结束，尽量升华。,* 词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于 100词。 不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被 视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。,Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中国的一所中学教英语。有一天，在他回家的路上,遇见他的中国朋友李雷，李雷告诉Peter 他住在哪儿，并邀请他去家里吃晚饭。Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。,Peter 出生于英国。 2. 去年他来到中国，并在一所中学教英语。 3. 有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter正好遇见他的 中国朋友李雷。 4. 李雷告诉Peter他住在哪儿。 5. 然后他邀请他去家

11、里吃晚饭。 6. Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。,One possible version: Peter was born in England. Last year, he came to China and taught English in a middle school. One day, on his way home, Peter met his Chinese friend, Li Lei. Li Lei told him where he lived. Then he invited Peter to his home for supper. Peter was ve

12、ry happy because he liked Chinese food very much.,我是个中学生, 对电脑特别感兴趣, 一放学回家就开电脑，有时玩游戏，有时上网和朋友聊天，有时给朋友发电子邮件。尽管我喜欢玩电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做，他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。,1.我是个中学生。 2.我对电脑特别感兴趣。 3.我一放学回家我就开电脑。 4.我有时玩游戏, 有时上网和朋友聊天, 有时给朋友发电子邮件。 5.尽管我喜欢电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做。 6.他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。 7.于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。,One pos

13、sible version: Im a middle school student, and I am interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They

14、think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.,写作注意的几个问题：,尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记 “避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。 把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。,你如何写开头,1.开头常用词语： as far as we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说,你如何写结尾,1.结尾常用词语： after all 毕竟at last 最后in a word