英语中考英语书面表达训练经典1

1、英语中考英语书面表达训练经典1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。要点提示：（1）我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2 点）（2） 空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2 点）（3）减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2 点）要求：（ 1） 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。（ 2） 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear students ,As we all know , hazy days have been infl

2、uencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us ofthe seriousairpollution_【答案】 Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For exam

3、ple, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the peoples activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. Whats more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more se

4、rious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, whats more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的材料中列举

5、了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better 表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus 表示乘公共汽车。【高分句型二】Protectin

6、g the environment is our duty.保 境是我 的 。 里Protecting theenvironment做主 ，用的是 的ing 形式。2 最近一份学生体 健康 果 示，学生近 率仍 持在高位水平，且越来越低 化。 根据下表所提示的内容，用英 写一篇短文，并 表自己的 点。现 状大 70%学生眼睛近 主要原因1.睡眠不足2. 看 、做作 、用 等1. 做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 防方法2. 养成正确的用眼 你的 点 .（至少一条）参考 ：近 的shortsighted要求：（ 1） 数： 80 100 个。（ 2）开 已 出，不 入 数。（ 3）要点 全，行文 ，可

7、适当 。The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_【答案】 The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough

8、sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the

9、good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【 解】 是一篇 表作文。根据 干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般 在 写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近 原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough） 2. 看 、做作 、用 等（for a long time）防止近 的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 （eye exercises） 2.养成正确的用眼

10、（have the good habit of）个人 点：如：我 ，我 了解保 眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保 我 的眼睛。（I think ?； tryones best to do sth. ）。常用的重点句型和短 有：sb. spend some time doing sth.， in order to do sth.， try to dosth.， the importance of等。3 写作假定你是李 ，在一位名叫Tiger Mom 的学生家 的博客上，你看到以下内容。 你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求， 位家 回复。I m the mother of a fourteen-year o

11、ld . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法。2. 述自己的理由。3. 提出至少 2 条建 。【答案】 Hi,TigerMom,What pu

12、zzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.

13、There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allowsthem almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choiceto help

14、 them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl ； let herhave more friends and social activities ； and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 学生家 的博客 行回复。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第

15、一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：My idea is that，There are， Some all-Astudents in school have， Thereason. is，So I suggest that等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 表明自己的看法，接下来 述自己的理由，最后介 自己的建 。此 turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, makemist

16、akes, of onewn等s这o些 的运用也 文章增色不少。4近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角 ”投稿 ,内容包括：1. 雾霾的危害 2. 雾霾产生的原因（2 个） 3. 应对雾霾的措施（3 个）提示：雾霾smogpoisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 词数 110 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has a

17、roused great concern among people._【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.Smog has a bad effect on peoples health. Many people, children and the old in particular,suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, ci

18、tizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this.The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people s burning coal, driving cars,industry production and so on.What should we do to stop t

19、he situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars andstricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living agreen life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice.Also plantingmore trees to increase green areas is necessa

20、ry. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在

21、语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。5书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右

22、，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now

23、 I d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .

24、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe env

25、ironment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas ? I m looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正

26、确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词

27、形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go t

28、o work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。6共享单车自从2016 年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的 “照妖镜 ”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给 21 世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。随处可见，出行方便诸多优势有益健康，减少污染费用不

29、高，负担得起未及时归还存在问题占道挡路你的观点我认为 -参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项： 1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中 “你的观点 ”一栏用 2-3 句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。3.词数在 90 个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. T

30、hey have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can beseen everywhere so that it s easy for usundtogeton aropublic bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles notonly is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What s more, using public bicyclco

31、sts so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people canpublic bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it living a green life.【解析】这是一

32、篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括 4 个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。7环境保护人人有责， 如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球 保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以 “Going Green为”主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈

33、我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。提示词语：pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题： What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in ourdaily life? What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems._【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollut

34、ion, water pollution and so on. I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick i

35、t up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we canmake a big difference. Let s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我

36、们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语： save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins；take action ； make a bigdifference 。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big di

37、fference。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； takeaction ； make a big difference 。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确

38、，词数是否符合要求等。8书面表达根据下表用英语写一篇80 词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A 和 City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature3018Hotel Things to do Food In my opinion,is he better place to spend my summer holiday._【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer h

39、oliday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. B

40、esides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【 解】 分析：本 出了两个城市的 行 常、气温、旅 情况。食物等相关信息，要求考生 每个信息 行比 ， 自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。 然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考 考生英 写作的基本功，需要考生 常用的英 句型熟 掌握。熟悉英 的表达方式。避免 式英 。句型不要都用 句。另外，一定要注意 目要求，把每一个信息都 行比 ，

41、不要有漏掉。写作亮点：本篇作文按照 目要求 了城市A 作 自己暑假旅游的目的地。 于城市A的缺点，作者用了“Although尽”管一 。 于 点 重点突出，因 在城市A 可以做很多事情，作者在 里用了 “a lot of 。在”比 的 候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不 ，比如在比 温度 ，直接用比 “higher在” 旅 用了“less comfortable ， ”比 食物 ，用了“asas等”。在 城市A 的原因 ，用了that 引 的 从句。本文大部分都是复 句， 示了作者比 熟 的英 写作水平。9中学生在成 程中 常会碰到一些 。假 你是李 ， 根据下表提示，用英 写一篇 言稿，在班会上

42、 你遇到的 以及你自己的做法。你的 你的做法个 不高，相貌平常父母不理解，朋友少不必在意，相信自己学会沟通，友善待人学 力大， 外活 少（自主 ，至少两点）要求： 1. 数 100 左右，开 及 尾已 出，不 入 数。2. 所写内容必 包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的 。3. 不得出 真 的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.That s all. Thank you!【答案】 Hello ever

43、yone,I am Li Hua. I d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very common. But I donievetcarein myselfandIbel.My parents don t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind toothers and learn to communicate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don t have many chances-classto join the afteractivities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies. That s all. Tha