东城作文 装饰教室作文讲评.ppt

1、东城期末情景作文,假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英语园地正在开展征稿活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你们班近期美化教室的活动记述下来，向校报投稿。词数不少于60。,1. 写出下列动词的过去式和过去分词 hold held held hang hung hung put put put bring brought brought think thought thought teach taught taught buy bought bought beautify,2. 写出以下固定搭配以或用法 一个热烈的讨论 a heated discussion 我们讨论的非常热烈 We

2、discussed warmly/ heatedly 班长将我们分成三组去 The monitor divided us into three groups to 我们被分成三组去 We were divided into three groups to,suggest的用法 suggest doing/ + that sb. should do advise的用法 advise (sb.) to do/ + that sb. should do 第二天 The next day/ On the next day/ On the following day 达成一致 reach an agre

3、ement,When, Who, What,Last month/ Recently, our monitor, hold a class meeting, discuss how to beautify our classroom.,成句：上个月，我们班长举行了一次班会去讨论如何美化我们的教室。 Last month, our monitor held a class meeting to discuss how to beautify our classroom.,thinkingHow to make your sentence better?,Last month, our monit

4、or held a class meeting to discuss how to beautify our classroom.,加个定语从句 meeting作先行词 Last month, our monitor held a heated class meeting which was about how to beautify our classroom. /whose topic was how to beautify our classroom.,2. 班长在班会上建议我们应该做些事情去装饰教室。 Last month, our monitor suggested at a cla

5、ss meeting that we (should) do something to decorate our classroom.,When, Who, What,During the meeting, some classmates/ some of us, others, suggest, advise, think, want, put forward,成句：在班会上，一些同学想再墙上挂些图片，还有一些建议在教室中放一些花。 During the meeting, some classmates wanted to hang some pictures on the wall; ot

6、hers suggested putting some flowers in the classroom.,thinkingHow to make your sentence better?,During the meeting, some classmates wanted to hang some pictures on the wall; others suggested putting some flowers in the classroom.,add some details (形容词，连词，原因） During the meeting, some classmates advis

7、ed to hang several pretty pictures on the wall, while others thought putting some plants in the classroom was a great idea because it could bring us fresh air.,2. 加必要的过渡 连接第3和第4幅图 Most of us preferred the second idea. /In the end, we reached an agreement that was to buy some flowers.,When, Who, What

8、,(on) The next day, we, bring, put them on the windowsill,成句：第二天，我们带来了花并把他们放在了窗台上。 The next day, we brought some flowers and put them on the windowsill.,thinkingHow to make your sentence better?,The next day, we brought some flowers to the school and put them on the windowsill.,add some details (形容词

9、,非限立刻创造了令人放松的氛围) The next day, we brought various flowers to the school and put them on the windowsill, which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere.,2. 用被动语态试试看 The following day, a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school, which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere.,When, Who

10、, What,Every day, we/ some of us take care of, water them.,成句：每天，我们都照顾这些植物，给他们浇水。 Every day, we took care of these plants and watered them.,thinkingHow to make your sentence better?,Every day, we took care of these plants and watered them.,1. 每天下课后，我们投入空闲时间去照顾这些植物，并定期浇水。 Every day after class, we de

11、voted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly.,2. 试试使用刚学的assign sb. to do sth. The monitor assigned us to take care of these plants and water them regularly. We were assigned to take care of these plants,How to write the ending,1. 谈活动的感想。 Through this activity, we learned ho

12、w to make our environment better and how to fulfill our responsibility. 2. 谈花的作用。 With fragrant flowers around us, we felt at peace and it surely helped us reduce some stress.,标准范文：,Last month, our monitor held a class meeting to discuss how to beautify our classroom. During the meeting, some classm

13、ates wanted to hang some pictures on the wall; others suggested putting some flowers in the classroom. Most of us preferred the second idea. The next day, we brought some flowers and put them on the windowsill. Every day, we took care of these plants and watered them. Through this activity, we learn

14、ed how to make our environment better and how to fulfill our responsibility.,经典范文：,Last month, our monitor held a heated class meeting which was about how to beautify our classroom. During the meeting, some classmates advised to hang several pretty pictures on the wall, while others thought putting some plants in the classroom was a great idea because it could bring us fresh air. In the end, we reached an agreement that was to buy some flowers. The following day, a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school, which imme