2011高考短文改错满分宝典.ppt

1、How to correct a composition,短文改错,主讲人：安居育才中学,We all had a good time yesterday. 2. Ill return back to school now. 3. I like playing piano. 4. I majored at English in college.,the,Wrong word,Missing word,in,Unnecessary word,right line,back,高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，9行中都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为,命

2、题特点,短文改错应注意的问题,1.在有错行改动一词。 2.改变实词形式，不能将一个实词换成另一个实词. 3.最小限度地改变单词形式 . 4.添加或删除虚词(如冠词，介词等). 5.多改正，少添加或删除. 6.最大限度地保持句子和短文原意.,Four points that you should not corret:,标点符号不改. 大小写不改. 词序错误不改. 在纲外生词不改 (带汉语注释的词).,得法者，事半功倍,动词形，,名词数,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,介词短语常常考， 固定搭配要记住 从句非谓细辨别,冠词连词常光顾,A Limerick,冗词的多用,1.Last summer

3、,I went to Beijing, my first time trip to the city. 2.Two years later, he returned back home. 3. It is about 200 miles far away from London.,3 steps（改错三部曲）,1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意，同时改正哪些显而易见的错误，例如：名词，形副，固搭，时态）,2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and fin

4、d the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错，也可翻译找逻辑错误）,3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，攻克难点：分析句子结构，找谓语，非谓，引导词等错误）,短篇练习,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._ father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._ a big one. It was almost as taller as the roo

5、m! 3._ They put them in the corner of the sitting 4._,_,On,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,逻辑错误须关注,2012高考英语短文改错模拟训练,room. Kate was covered it with a lot of 5._ Christmas light. The sitting room looked 6. _ really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _ a fire burn in the fire place

6、, and the Christmas 8. _ tree lights were shining brightly. Jim or his 9. _ parents singing and dancing happily. 10._,_,lights,_,beautiful,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,2012高考英语短文改错模拟训练,冠词连词常光顾,and,非谓语，细辨别,burning,Dont make the same mistake twice. 不要重复犯同样的错误。,Proverb,名词数 名词爱考单复数，也要分清可不可,2010全国：Christie w

7、as one of my best friend at high school. 2011全国II ：My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another a couple of day.,friends,days,2011四川卷： Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning. 2010四川卷： In fact, Ive nearly killed three peoples .,trouble,peo

8、ple,2011全国卷2： If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be more than happy to be your guide. 2011浙江 It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you.,冠词连词常光顾,a,. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误 连词but，and，or, so和although等逻辑错误，以及搭配错误,the,2011四川 His boss wanted to fire him if he didnt st

9、art coming on time, but he went to the doctor for a help. 2010课程标准卷：my neighbor picked up the box but announced 2011全国2 Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.,and,a,so,since,2010辽宁卷： Her hair was black and purple, and she wore black sports shoes and a black sweater, alth

10、ough in the summer. 2010全国：All I had to do was to write a story or present it. 2007四川卷： He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal.,even,and,so,动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。,2010四川卷： And after many attempts, she past her driving test

11、and told her husband that 2010四川卷： An English lady was finally decided that she really should learn to drive .,passed,was,2011 全国卷1 However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.,flew,2011辽宁 In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady.,

12、was,2010 重庆.After hearing your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. .,are,2010浙江 I noticed Mother looking at the nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. 2011陕西 I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actors. 2010重庆 He had time for a prope

13、r breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.,making,从句非谓要记住,从句引导词误用，多用或遗漏 三种非谓语的混淆，不定式to的遗漏或多用，非谓语与谓语动词的混淆,occupied,to,2011重庆： Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times. 2010重庆：Here is my idea about how a friend is like. 2010全国：So if they ha

14、d said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize .,what,whom,what,还要注意形和副,2010辽宁：she was, in fact, rather attractively. 2010重庆：Still, your happiness makeshim happily too.,attractive,happy,修饰名词，be，系动词后，以及宾补用形容词。 修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词 比较级和最高级的使用,2011四川： Im pleasing to hear it ,”said his boss,” b

15、ut where were you yesterday?” 2009陕西： The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected,faster,pleased,代词格,2011全国2： Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.,us,代词的错误常见的是代词的性别、单复数及代词的格与文章的逻辑意义不一致。,2011重庆 With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive soon got used to living without my parents .,mine,Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!,myself,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。,lose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoon such many people in a short,a,on,so,介词短语常常考，固定搭配要记住,1.Dont approach to a work of art in such a