初中英语英语书面表达汇编技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析

1、【英语】初中英语英语书面表达汇编技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（ 武汉外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达长跑是人们热衷的体育活动之一。武汉马拉松（wuhan marathon ）因独具特色的赛道及赛事组织已成为一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李华，你的笔友tom 想知道关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。请用英文给他回一封电子邮件，介绍这项赛事。内容包括以下要点：1.马拉松是非常流行的国际体育项目；2.通过马拉松，人们可以强身健体，还可以结识新朋友；3.首届马拉松于年举行，吸引了很多人的关注；4.赛通途径多个武汉著名景点,如：中山大道、东湖绿道、黄鹤楼，被视为最美的马拉松赛道；5.补充一

2、至亮点个人想法。注意： 1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2.次数 60-80，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总次数；3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译参考词汇：event n. 项目track n.赛道greenway n.绿道hi tom，i hope youre doing well. in your email, you asked me someting about wuhan marathon. here is the information._li hua【答案】 hi tom，i hope youre doing well. in your email, you asked me some

3、thing about wuhan marathon. here is the information. marathon is a very popular international sport. through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. the first wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. the players will pass by many famous scenic spots in wuhan, such

4、 as zhongshan avenue, donghu green road and yellow crane tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.i think the people in wuhan likes the event.most of them want to take part in it.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友tom 写一封电子邮件，给他介绍关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。题目中给我们列出了具体的写作内容，我们可以按照这些提示来组织语言，并增加一些内容，

5、使文章更加充实。其中第五条需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充一到两点的个人想法，这一部分是不受限制的，学生们可以自由发挥，但需要注意内容需要与全文大意连贯起来。通过审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要灵活运用，并使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时需注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译题目中的内容，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。在文章中还应使用一、两个高级句型或复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给 tom 写电子邮件，介绍了关于武汉马拉松的事情。首先短文内

6、容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并对信息进行加工、处理和补充，使文意更加清楚、连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，个别句子使用了过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。文章句式以简单句为主，表达简洁、明了，穿插使用了复杂句式，如宾语从句、定语从句等。调整文章节奏，提升了文章档次。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如through the marathon, peoplecan keep fit and make new friends. 、the first wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of att

7、ention. 、the players will pass by many famous scenic spots in wuhan, such as zhongshan avenue, donghu green road and yellow crane tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course. 、 i think the people in wuhan likes the event. 等。2（ 上海市澧溪中学初三期中） write a passage of at least 60 words abo

8、ut the topic “ yesterday once more（以”“昨.日重现 ”为题写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）当昨日重现之时，在脑海里的都是回忆。记忆中有没有让你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。请选取一个方面，结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）the following is for reference only （以下表达仅供参考）used to be./make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remin

9、d sb of sth 【答案】例文yesterday once moreit goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. among all the persons i havemet, the most unforgettable person is my father.i used to be such a shy and silent girl that i c ouldn t say any words in public. whenever teachersasked me to answe

10、r questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to lookdown. once, i tried talking with my father frightenedly. he listened to me all the time with brightsmile and e ncouraged me to be brave. he told me,“ you don t have to be perfect but when youdo your best, you make your paren

11、t proud.” with the support of my father, i gained so muchencouragement that i determined to be a more confident person.in one word, father s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应注意选取一个给你留下深刻印象的人、事或物， 你 在的生活造成了影响。 合自身 ， 你当 的 以及 在的感受。2

12、.例文点 ：例文采用三段式：用第一人称来叙述故事内容： 采用一般 去式 主，叙述 去的 ，叙述完整清晰。3.高分亮点：短 ： full of ； in public ；again and again； all the time ； encourage sb to do sth ； do one sbest； with the support of 。句型： suchthat ； sothat 引 的 果状 从句；whenever引 的从句； used to do 。3（ 四川中考模 ）旅行是学 的最好方式之一。 以“ travelling ”，根据以下思 的提示，写一篇短文，并 表你的看法。注

13、意：1. 要点 全，适当 ；2. 从思 sayings 部分， 恰当的格合理利用在短文中；3. 数： 100 左右；【答案】例文travelling is one of the best ways for learning. you may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. seeing is believing. if you are a careful observer, you can learn much

14、during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. you can also create great memories for your lifetime. furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. no matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn throu

15、gh travelling.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways ， learnmuch， an exact picture of ， a careful observer ， seeing is believing， no matter ， a lot 等。而非谓语动词结构 seeing is believing./ furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. 和 if you are a careful

16、observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ no matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面

17、表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4（ 扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟）假如你是liu bin，请用英语给笔友bob 回复邮件。注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数 100 左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。dear bob,i m very glad to know that you will come to

18、 our school.yours,liu bin【答案】 dear bob,im very glad to know that you will come to our school. let me tell you something about it. our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. we go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. there is also an activity class in the afternoon.

19、usually i take exercise after school so that i can keep healthy and study better. sometimes i listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. of course, i help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.my classmates are very nice. we often help each other. everyone has

20、his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. besides, it is important for us to communicate with each otherand share our happiness and sadness.im looking forward to your coming.yours,liu bin【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to， listen to themusic， five days a week， so that

21、，prepare for ， for a while ， of course， at the weekends ， help each other ， look forward to 等。而固定句型 it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. 和 im very glad to know that you will come to our school./ usually i take exercise after school so that i can

22、keep healthy and study better./ sometimes i listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使

23、用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5（ 陕西中考模拟）下周一下午轮到你在英语课上做课堂报告, 你打算把你爸爸最近网购的音乐机器人（music robot ）介绍给同学们。下图是关于这个音乐机器人的广告, 请你根据所提供的信息写一份发言稿。我是能听会 的小音 机器人 ,只要你 我 歌曲的名字 , 我就能唱 你听。我 有其他本 参考 :small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates,convenient要求 :1. 参考提示 , 可适当 ；2. 句涌 , 意思

24、, 写工整；3. 文中不得出 个人真 信息；good morning, everyone! here, i d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online._【答案】 good morning, everyone! here, id like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. it is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. after you connect it to the inte

25、rnet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. for example, you just say, ding dong, i want to listen to shes songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. you can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.

26、 i am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. i really love it!【解析】【分析】 篇 面表达主要描述爸爸最近 “我” 的音 机器人。【 解】 是篇材料作文。内容上首先要介 个音 机器人，其次表达 什么“我”要介 个机器人，也就是 它的喜 。在写作 ，首先要 自己熟悉的短 或者句型，在能力范 之内， 句式 要 予 化， 才可以更好的 。同 也要 合适的 接 ，把各个要点 成一个完整的整体。6（ 北京中考模 ）假如你是李 ，你的英国笔友jack 你写

27、 件表达了想参加你校暑期 外国学生 的 夏令 的愿望，希望你告知活 的具体 地点，活 安排以及你的建 。提示 ：chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示 ： when and where will the chinese summer camp be held? what activities will be held at the chinese summer camp? what is your advice for jack?dear jack,i am very glad to know that you are intere

28、sted in the chinese summer camp in ourschool this summer holiday.yours,li hua【答案】 dear jack,i am very glad to know that you are interested in the chinese summer camp in our school this summer holiday.the chinese summer camp will be held in our school from july 10th to july 30th this summer.the activ

29、ities of this chinese summer camp are as follows:first, you will attend chinese classes, learning the meaning of chinese characters.second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of china and chinese culture, especially chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.what s mor

30、e, you will have chances to visit some museums and the great wall. what you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.if you have any questions, please tell me. i am looking forward to your early reply.yours,li hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

31、2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称i 进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。3.高分亮点：短语： as follows，take part in ， whats more， look forward to 。句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。7（ 辽宁初三） 生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。白杨是我的同学。她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工

32、作。请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。there are always some things in life that move you. there are always some people that touch you._【答案】 there are always some things in life that move you. there are always some people thattouch you.my classmate bai yang comes from a poor family. she takes good care of her

33、 mother who has a serious illness. but she never gives up her studies. she keeps studying hard and has got good grades. what s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. during her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.sh

34、e sets a good example to us all. everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. in our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. no matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.【解析】【详解】这是一篇人物介绍。人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时

35、。注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。【高分句型一】she takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. 她精心照顾生病的母亲。 who has a serious illness 为定语从句。【高分句型二】no matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.她仍然笑对生活。no matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。不管生活多么艰苦，8（ 浙江中考模拟）如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中简要描

36、述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇tony 的母亲。请110 词左右的短文向parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。_【答案】 tonys mother wanted to keep watch on tonys study. she was wrong to do so. first of all, he violated the right to privacy. it also disturbs tonys study and makes him respond strongly. from a childs point of view, chil

37、dren may yearn for independence. what they want is affirmation of their own abilities. but excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities.although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they dont think so. when children find themselves under surveillance, how

38、can they confide in us in the future? it will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. in any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable an

39、d reliable. in this way, monitoring childrens learning is of little significance. we should always do our part well. let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.【解析】【详解】这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中

40、必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】when children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？句子 when children find themselves under surveillance

41、是由 when 引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】it will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious ci

42、rcle affecting parent-childrelationship. 是由 which 引导的定语从句。9（ 河南中考模拟） “苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。 ”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以 “one thing i felt very proud of为题用”英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 词数 80 左右。one thing i felt very proud of_【答案】 i will never forget how proud i felt when i succeeded in makin

43、g delicious dishes for my mother.to show my love for my mother, i decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. i triedmany times but failed before she came back. especially when ma king fried eggs, i couldn t controlthe temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. however, i didn t give u

44、p, and finally isucceeded. watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.i felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇话题作文。【详解】根据题干 “苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“ one thing i felt very proud of为题用英语”写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。 ”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：第一部分：开篇

45、点题 我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主体 具体介绍这件事情的始末。根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。第三部分：总结全文 我为自己感到骄傲。10 （ 长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。内容： 1、健康饮食；2、早睡早起，不熬夜；3、参加运动，强身健体。要求：1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2、80 词左右；3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。_【答案】 he

46、althy habiti think healthy habits are important for us. as we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. how can we develop healthy habit?first of all, we must keep a balanced diet. eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. moreover, we should take e

47、xercise every day. we can walk to school instead of taking a bus. doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. lastbut not least, we d better go to bed early and get up early. the body needs enough sleep to work well. children at our age should ha ve at least eight hours sleep every night.as long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health. 【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。