习作-身边那些有特点的人(语文人教部编版三年级下)ppt课件

1、猜一猜,能吃能睡，遇事就喊：“大师兄，师傅被妖怪抓走了,长得方方正正，住在菠萝屋里，养了只宠物叫“小蜗,天生胆小，怕鬼，怕喝中药，怕做噩梦，还怕剃头,身边那些有特点的人,小书虫,乐天派,热心肠,运动健将,智多星,小问号,幽默王子,故事大王,昆虫迷,乐天派：是指遇到什么事都不会烦恼、不会忧愁也不会焦虑。总是乐观、积极地面对生活。为人处世抱着乐观态度的一类人,你还会想到哪些词语？ （）飞毛腿、开心果、足球迷 （）鼻涕虫、瞌睡龙、爱哭鬼,小书虫,乐天派,热心肠,运动健将,智多星,小问号,幽默王子,故事大王,昆虫迷,看到这些词语，你会想到谁？为什么？ 他的什么表现？ 他做的某一件事,要说运动健将，那肯

2、定非林小玉莫属啦！她是我们女生里的“运动明星”。 每次上体育课，第一名都是林小玉。运动会的时候，她报名参加了女子400米项目。枪声一响，小玉像风一样跑了出去，跑过了所有人，赛过了风。跑过终点线的那一刻，她欢呼了一声：“哇，我赢了！”比赛结束了，她得了第一名。 林小玉真是我们班的运动健将啊,怎么选择人物的特点呢？ （身边的人、熟悉,她不但是个神奇的“画家”，还是全世界最强壮的女人,厨师妈妈,大力士妈妈,画家”妈妈,我会说： 我的妈妈是_。 我的妈妈像_。 我的妈妈_,我的妈妈很能干。每一次在超市、菜市场、商店、文具店、书店，所有的大包小包都是妈妈一个人拎的，所以我的妈妈很能干。 我的妈妈还很善良

3、。不记得是哪一天了，我回到家时隐约听到有鸟叫声，叽叽喳喳的。真奇怪！妈妈说：“宝贝，回来了！”我说：“是的。妈妈，为什么我们家有叽叽喳喳的鸟叫声？”妈妈支支吾吾地说：“那个，去你房间看看吧。”我在房里发现一只雪白的小鸟在笼子里唱歌，笼子里还有一个装满水的小碗。我问妈妈：“小鸟怎么会来我们家呢？”妈妈说：“我回家时在路上捡来的，他受伤了，需要有人照顾”我说：“那，我们以后就叫她小雪花吧。”妈妈说：“好，这个名字起得好。”所以我妈妈很有爱心，我觉得妈妈很善良。 我的妈妈还是大厨师。我妈妈做的菜很好吃，我特别妈妈做的红烧肉、煮菠菜，所以我的妈妈是个大厨师,你觉得哪一段写得好， 为什么,金钥匙： 中心

4、句+事例（语言、动作、神态、心理,自己动手写一写吧,外貌描写站,怎么写好人物的外貌呢？ （观察、抓住特点,我有一个天真又可爱，聪明又活泼的弟弟， 俊俏的脸上长着一双又黑又亮的眼睛，鼻梁高高的。当弟弟笑起来的时候，就能露出一对洁白又整齐的牙齿，十分有趣。我非常喜欢他,她长着浓浓的眉毛，圆圆的脸上有一双水汪汪的大眼睛，鼻梁高高的，嘴唇红红的，胖乎乎的小脸非常招人喜爱。她就是我 的好朋友小丽,眯眯眼,迷人的大眼睛,眼睛的区别,修辞手法,笑的时候眼睛都眯成了 一条缝,长长的睫毛，水汪汪的眼睛， 就如夜晚的星星一样明亮,双眼皮的大眼睛,你来说一说,大大的眼睛，两颗黑色的眼珠像两个黑葡萄一样， 又像两个黑

5、色的纽扣,金钥匙： 外貌描写（顺序+主要特点+修辞,开头结尾怎么办,开头：点明你与人物的关系、人物特点。 我有一个弟弟，他活泼调皮、机灵可爱，是一个不折不扣的淘气包,结尾：总结全文+感受,这就是我们班的运动健将，她也是我的好朋友，我真应该向她好好学习,题目：用上表示人物特点的词语,我们班的“小书迷” 爱美的妈妈 我家的“淘气包” “运动健将”林小玉 幽默王子,题目：用上表示人物特点的词语。 开头：点明你与人物的关系、人物特点。 外貌描写（顺序+主要特点+修辞） 中心句+事例（语言、动作、神态、心理） 结尾：总结全文+感受,注意：只能写一个人物的一个特点,第四步：方法（以例文为例,抓住人物的语言

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