美化你的作文

1、写作过程：,审,列,加,hot dry noodles,hot noodles with sesame paste,芝士浓酱拌意大利面条,hot Italian noodles with sesame paste,热干面,Beautify your Composition !,Fu Yazhen No. 9 Middle School,Is writing down the last step?,Absolutely not!,满分作文特点,主旨明,要点全,句子顺,语法准,有亮点,书写美,段落清,15分,Yes!,没有题目要起个题目，如已给出首句， 不必再写作文题目。 要点要全。 分段。 十句

2、话。（套用句型为主） 5. 写大字，工整字，每行12-13词。 6. 标点符号要写大些，写清楚。,Be positive！,No!,作文内容勿靠近作文区域边框。 禁用铅笔及非黑色0.5签字笔。 字母间距小，单词间距小。扫描后会是黑乎乎一片。 4. 不打草稿。,写作过程：,审,列,加,审,列,加,连,美,写作步骤,HAVE A TRY,A COMPOSITION,全球气候变暖给人类和动物的生活都带来了很大的影响。你校就此问题举行了一次题为“拯救人类的最后一次机会”的演讲。请结合漫画内容，写一篇演讲稿，倡导低碳生活，至少包含三条环保措施。（如多步行或骑自行车、自备购物袋，多种树等）,Write a

3、 composition now!,注意：词数：80词左右。 参考词汇：低碳生活:low carbon life 北极熊： polar bear,The last chance to save mankind,Dear teachers and classmates, Its an honor to talk with all of you here about global warming. As we know,TIPS: YOUR COMPOSITION SHOUD BE WRITTEN ON EVERY OTHER LINE.,Generally speaking, its enoug

4、h for us to write ten sentences.,正确为先；流畅为好；文采为妙。 只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、主语从句，非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一两个，特别是对关联词的使用（如：so that, bothand , not onlybut also等）会使你的文章结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚、不同凡响、更有文采。,1.学会使用较高级的句型,2.学写优美流畅的句子,3.学会写段落,4.学会构建篇章,5.学会使用好过渡词语,1.学会使用较高级的词汇 同义结构替换法：英语中很多实用地道的短

5、语，用在写作中可以让文章的味道更浓。比如，thanks to, turn out, as a result, as for, on the other hand, make it等。另外英语中还常用分词结构或介词短语结构来替代一些状语从句。 例如: 一般：If the weather is fine, well go climbing tomorrow. 高级：Weather permitting, well go climbing tomorrow.,2.学写优美流畅的句子 1）正确构建简单句 2）恰当使用复合句 简单句：A girl was injured in the accident.

6、 She is now in hospital. 定语从句：The girl who was injured in the accident is now in hospital. 3)恰当使用分词结构： Feeling tired, I went to bed early.(= Because I felt tired, I went to bed early.) 4)长短句结合 5）尝试特殊句型：感叹句、强调句和倒装句 6) 适当引用格言谚语,3.学会写段落 1）主题句(Topic sentence)：如：Smoking is bad for health.其中smoking 是主题（id

7、ea）,is bad for health是自己的看法。 2）支撑句（Supporting details）：比如上文的主题句Smoking is bad for health，可以使用下列细节来支撑：Heavy smokers often suffer from lung diseases./ Smoking gives people yellow teeth and bad breath./ People get addicted to smoking.支撑细节务必要紧扣主题，不能随意发挥。比如：Smoking costs a lot of money就不能很好地支持Smoking is

8、bad for health这个主题句。 3）统一性和连贯性：在选择支撑信息时，要注意必须围绕主题句；同时要使用恰当的连接词汇，保持上下文的连贯性，如上面练习中用到的first of all, also等。,4.学会构建篇章 一篇文章的结构与段落类似，包括：主题段、支撑段和结尾段。 主题段点明文章的中心思想，支撑段可能有1-3个，是对中心思想的展开和讨论。结尾段可归纳全文，也可改变措辞，回顾主题，还可以提问，引发思考。,5.学会使用好过渡词语 并列与递进：and, also, as well as, besides, furthermore, in addition, whats more,

9、etc. 转折：but, however, although, though, after all, etc. 对比：or, like, unlike, while, instead of, on the other hand, etc. 因果：because, as, for, since, so, thus, therefore, as a result, because of, for this reason, etc. 总结：in all, in brief, in a (one) word, in general, in short, on the whole, generally

10、speaking, etc. 时间顺序：and then, next, after that, firstly, secondly, and finally, at once, immediately, shortly after that, two days later,Skill One Make your sentences correct,Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meet

11、ing today. I hope I can come true my dream.,Study hard and make progress.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,Skill Two Express in different ways,Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the

12、 computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.,YOUR HANDWRITING SHOULD BE AS BEAUTIFUL AS IT CAN BE.,SKILL 3：,采用“三段

13、式写作法”。 第一段：引出话题或亮明观点（略）：一两句即可。 第二段：围绕主题或者作者的观点展开（详）：即对所陈述的内容，发表评论。 第三段：总结全文（略）：一般是再次强调文章的中心思想，首位呼应。或是对前两段的论证得出结论，写出你的建议、希望和祝愿，两句话即可。 好处：（1）帮助学生在写作过程中理清思路，将信息点写全。（2）方便老师阅卷，给阅卷老师留下好印象。 提示：“三段式写作法”只是一种概括的说法，并非一定限制写成三段，可以根据需要将文章分成四段、五段均可，但要注意句子间和段落间的衔接。要使文章连贯流畅，还少不了连接词或者过度语的使用。,Skill 4,中招作文中的经典短语,sosuch

14、that. not until not any more not onlybut also bothand neithernor the morethe more asas possible asas in order to prefer to do rather than do,1.There are many people who - There are many things that - 2.It is said that-/ It is reported that - /It is widely known that - 3. do / does + 动词原形 It is -that

15、 - 4.In my eyes +句子 / In my opinion,+ 句子 5.In our life , + 句子 6.If I were-, I would - 7.The more -, the more -,It is necessary for sb. to do sth. You had better do sth . He also believes that I do not quite agree with. Its not a good way to because. I find it + adj.+ to I think chatting is not a bad

16、 way.,经典句型,经典句型,It is +adj.+ for me to I find it +adj + for me to do sth. Doing sth is (动名词作主语） I have troubleproblems doing sth The problem my biggest problem is that. Another thing that troubles me is that.,The last chance to save mankind . As you know, global warming is becoming more and more ser

17、ious. Its not only harmful to mankind, but also harmful to animals. Because of global warming, polar bears have less and less living space. They may die out one day.,In order to improve the situation, I think all of us should do something to protect the environment. Living a low carbon life is surely a way of great help . We can walk or ride a bike for short journeys. When we go shopping, dont use plastic bags. Instead, take your shopping bag with you. Of course, planting