2016105培养听说读写技能的先决条件是说写汇总

1、培养听说读写技能的先决条件是说写 【之四 张铁城2016、10、5发送 中国学生要重视写的训练必然会提高说的能力 这是我们熟悉的英语教学大师亚历山大的主张 “Sp eaking and writing are the most imp ortant of these skills, since to some extent, they 译文：“说与写在这几 presupp osethe other two. ” ,是最重要的，因为在某种程度上，这两种能力是 种能力中 另外两种能力的 先决条件。” 【见：亚历山大 (L.G.AIexander )在新概念英语第二 册(全英语版 P Mii ) 遗

2、憾的是：我们北京咼考的书面表达分数一直不咼。2009 年北京英语高考书面表达满分35分，但是平均分数只有 17.5分，相当于100分的50分。 第五章新加坡中学作文 准备向真正的英语原著过渡 比赛成绩公布通知原文及 四篇一等奖获奖作文 共计2,874 个英语单词。 级词汇统计：1,071 个单词 【在这里，你将看到 “全国山河一片红 。】 Looking at her high , small and full , she was like an work of art and I was the who created her . Every feature on her face was

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9、announced that I was good enough to things on my own . My first patient was a young lady who felt because of a too on her small face . I carefully her and explained to her the of the . I felt very of this and thought that nothing could possibly go wrong . It was just a job to me . I was with but I d

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11、s and from the beginning to the end , things getting worse and worse forever .Nothing could be done to the I had caused her. Even when tried to up- the evidenceof my with his , he could only make it look slightly better . Just with one move and her future in my hands .How could I and from me and hav

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28、想象力比 第一篇更加丰富，叙述更加翔实。一个初中学生居然能够以 第一人称的口吻，讲述一位青年整形外科医生经历失败，再 次重新站立起来并且取得成功的故事，确实很不简单。她使 用的一级词汇 的占全文词汇总数 79% 以上，同时使用的词 汇不仅超出中学生应该掌握的3500 个基础词汇，而且还使 用了 76个高端词汇，超出麦克米伦辞典标注的 7500 个词汇，占全文词汇总数 5.65% ，这说明她不但文学原著 阅读量很大，而且模仿文学原著的写作能力也非常高。 NO.6C 第四节 第三篇获奖作文 2008 年新加坡南华中学作文比赛 等奖 中三1班Li Yanzhe st 1 P rize - Secon

29、dary Three Category LiYanzhe （301） “What will my life be like? ” I wondered. As a n ewbor n silkworm resti ng in my cozy coco on, my mi nd was filled with curiosity. Won der was the theme of my life. I enjoyed ask ing all sorts of questi ons about life, and equally enjoyed givi ng each of the questi

30、 ons my own an swer based on my imagi nati on. “Will the outside world be freezing and harsh for me? ” Curled in a warm corner of my solitary sp ace, I sudde niy felt in secure. “ Will I encounter enemies and be hurt by them in that world? ” Heavily struck by the appalling idea, I started to squirm

31、involuntarily. “ Will I successfully find a comfortable shelter and some food to live on in that world? ”I glanced at the soothing silk around me, unable to control the escalating suspicion which had long been fermenting. That world suddenly seemed very distant and scary to me. An uncanny pang of in

32、vincible fear gripped me and threatened to overwhelm me. “That world, ”I murmured, feeling vulnerable.“ That scary world of danger and loneliness - I do not want! ” My fear flared and melted into petulant anger smoldering violently. Under the onslaught of such fear, my interest in an adventurous jou

33、rney of discovery waned. Gradually, I began to repel this outside world. The call of adventure trailed off as I feverishly spun more silk and built a thicker and thicker wall barricading me from the world, until the world disappeared in my mind. I sank into a seemingly eternal state of serenity in m

34、y limited space, yet my heart pounded violently against my chest, as if fear was determined to deprive me of the original privilege of peace that I had enjoyed. The fear melted into fatigue which penetrated every nerve of my body. Feeling drowsy and listless, I dozed off. I dreamt of the mysterious

35、world which scared me before; I dreamt of life and death; I dreamt of my future, my love and my hatred. The dream seemed endless. My brain was on the verge of exploding. The dream did have an end, which was when the unbearable stifling air around me wakened me. No sooner did I open my sleepy eyes th

36、an I sensed something wrong around me. The unbroken darkness engulfed me completely, blinded me and upset me. Although I waited for ages, the brightness remained hidden. Not until I bumped into the wall of my chrysalis did I realize that my cocoon had hardened and was no longer cozy. My previous ign

37、orant action of wrapping myself turned out to be a fatuous and harmful way of venting my frustration I had confined myself within an airtight silk-made chamber which even light could not pass through. Time flew without stopping while I grew weaker and weaker as if under an insidious curse. Just as I

38、 was viciously deprived of my physical strength, I miraculously retrieved my mental sobriety. “I must escape from this living hell. It is life-threatening! ” The idea of death made me shudder, and the fear started to brew again. It was not the same fear which had made me flinch earlier. Rather, it w

39、as a kind of fear which moulded my willpower into working in overdrive. “I must find light! I must gain freedom! ” The fear was surprisingly transformed into a strong determination and ceaselessly stirred me to struggle out of the confinement of ignorance and cowardice. “I must figure a way to survi

40、ve! I must face the world! ” My fear rose again and became a turbulent torrent of motivation. Torrents of motivation were strengthened by a burning desire for survival. It flooded my mind and chased away the initial lingering fear. “Bang! ” I made my first attempt to break out of the confinement by

41、bumping my body against the wall of the chrysalis. I repeated the attempt a few times in a bid to create an access to the outside world, although I did not know whether this action would reap success. “Bang! Bang! ” I persevered in making a hole. Once. Twice. Thrice I did not stop. Blood streaked down my painful body which was riddled with scalding wounds. Yet, the craving for survival outrivaled the physical affliction. H