新高考英语读后续写continuation writing课件(共43张)(1)【精品】

1、 读后续写的具体内容 提供一段提供一段350350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所 给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150150词左右），将其发词左右），将其发 展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。 第五档： 21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档： 11-15 第二档： 6-10 第一档： 1-5 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 内容比较丰富，应用

2、了内容比较丰富，应用了5 5个以上短文所标出的关键词语。个以上短文所标出的关键词语。 所使用的语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，所使用的语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误， 但不影响意义表达。但不影响意义表达。 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 第四档： 16-20 第五档： 21-25 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 内容丰富，应用了内容丰富，应用了5 5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用语法

3、结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完 全不影响意义表达。全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 记叙文阅读理解能力 记叙文书面表达能力 读后续写过程中存在的问题： 续写内容与所给短文在叙述意图上不一致 续写内容与所给短文在相关细节上相矛盾 续写内容与所给短文在语篇结构上不连贯 读后续写的能力要求 一、记叙文阅读理解能力 二、由读到写的思维能力 三、记叙文书面表达能力 一、记叙文阅读理解能力 浅层的信息定位能力： 深层的文本分析能力： what, whe

4、n, where, who, why, how等等 厘清故事的发展线索厘清故事的发展线索 明确文本的主要矛盾明确文本的主要矛盾 关注故事的语言风格关注故事的语言风格 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant su

5、bject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned

6、around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she w

7、alked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry a

8、nd thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along t

9、he stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow b

10、louse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _ 2016年10月高考读后续写 Read for information who: what: where: Jane, Tom Jane was lost. in the forest One weekend in July, Jane and he

11、r husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked

12、 away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she crie

13、d. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be

14、with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She dra

15、nk and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it im

16、possible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _ R

17、ead for the organization In what order is the material developed? One weekend in July, As night was beginning to fall, Jane rose at the break of the day, But and it was getting dark again. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. time sequence Read for the plot behaviorsfeelings para. 1quarrel, walked awa

18、yangry para. 2 was lostfrightened, regretful, confused, para. 3 cried para. 4kept moving, had to stop, wanted para. 5saw, drank, ate, felt strongerjoyful, hopeful para. 6 heard, took off, thinkinghopeful, anxious Beginning Climax Ending quarrelled got lost cried wanted saw, drank, ate heard, took of

19、f, thinking that . angry frightened regretful (helicopters) joyful hopeful no more helicopters woke up rescued? feelings? Read for the language 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a l

20、ake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a

21、long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone

22、in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him ho

23、w much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anyt

24、hing better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,

25、 another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _ With no path to follow, Jane , she turned around, hoping to Jane

26、 took off her yellow blouse, thinking that Jane rose, hungry and thirsty. If only she had not left her mobile phone Never in her life had she tasted anything better. 二、由读到写的思维能力 细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系； 围绕划定的围绕划定的1010个个关键词，合理创新故事情节。关键词，合理创新故事情节。 Para. 1: But no more helicopters

27、 came and it was dark. How did Jane feel then? How did Jane struggle through the night? Did she fall asleep? Para. 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Was Jane rescued? Who rescued Jane? How was she rescued? How did she feel then? The underlined words where020304 yellow blouse walkedTom helicopter

28、Jane lake stream climbed at a distance to her great joy Classify 10 key words into different groups. _: Jane, Tom _: walked, climbed _: helicopter, yellow blouse _: lake, stream, at a distance _: to her great joy characters behaviors tools places feelings 三、记叙文书面表达能力 ( (一一) ) 语言的丰富性语言的丰富性 ( (二二) ) 语

29、篇的连贯性语篇的连贯性 ( (一一) ) 语言的丰富性语言的丰富性 1. 1. 词汇、句式、语法的多样性词汇、句式、语法的多样性 2. 2. 情感表达的多样性情感表达的多样性 3. 3. 动词使用的丰富性动词使用的丰富性 1. 1. 词汇、句式、语法的多样性词汇、句式、语法的多样性 简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。 主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、的复合结构、 虚拟语气的使用情况。虚拟语气的使用情况。 常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。常见初

30、级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。 比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。 句式结构：句式结构： 语法结构：语法结构： 词汇选择：词汇选择： 修辞手法：修辞手法： 2. 2. 情感表达的多样性情感表达的多样性 Janes feelings walked away, turned around, cried Is that for me? “Tom!” “Help!” Night was beginning to fall. It was daybreak. confused, hungry and thirsty. walked away, turne

31、d around, cried walked away, turned around, cried actions words surroundings thoughts looks “Another race, another race!” said the little boy. The wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy with two new challengers, an elderly weak lady and a blind man. “What is this?” said the little

32、 boy. “This is no race.” He said. “Race!” said the wise man. The race was started and the boy was the only finisher, the other two challengers left standing at the starting line. The little boy was excited. He raised his arms in delight. The crowd, however, was silent showing no sentiment toward the

33、 little boy. “What has happened? Why dont the people join in my success?” he asked the wise old man. “Race again.” said the man, “This time, finish together, all three of you, finish together,” said the wise man. urged askdcomplained replied continued 3. 3. 动词使用的丰富性动词使用的丰富性 Use more specific words t

34、o replace “say”. shout, scream, yell, roar, cry, whisper, interrupt, add, continue, tell, remark, predict, repeat,guess, imply refuse, agree, admit, complain, smile, urge, apologize, sigh, beg, explain， promise, comfort, compromise， warn ask, wonder, doubt, answer, reply 方式态度问答 God felt sad and sigh

35、ed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” “No!” the butterfly said firmly, without hesitation. “He was your lover, but now he stays with another woman. Without you, he couldnt have recovered.” God said with pity. “I love him.” the butterfly said in a low voice, “although I cant be

36、 the one he loves, I want him to be happy. Never will I regret what I have done.” God smiled, “True love is the most invaluable thing in the world.” The butterfly then left the town with the best wishes for the man. firmly/excitedly/seriously/jokingly/sincerely in great surprise/a low voice/a soft v

37、oice with delight/excitement/embarrassment/ pride/respect/alarm/satisfaction/caution/ patience/certainty Make your “say” more specific. “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said sincerely. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls!” Jenny refused, shaking her head

38、 violently. “But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. And you can have her tea party outfit too. Okay?” “Oh no darling, thats Okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. “Good night, little one.” eyes hands head stare / glare at / look

39、 her in the eye / with her eyes shining/ filled with tears His eyes sparkle with excitement/ gratitude pat him on the shoulder/head grasp/hold ones hands point to sb/sth wave his hands nod/shake his head violently He thought for a moment Make your narration more vivid with appropriate movement. But

40、no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Amid the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of wild beasts were heard. “If it werent for that stupid quarrel, I wouldnt be trapped here,” she thought to herself, regretful tears clouding her eyes. Surrounded by the fear and tiredness, Jane felt e

41、xhausted and finally slid into sleep. “Tom, is that you?”she murmured. “Tom, help!” In her dream, she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance. It was day break when Jane woke up. After a washing, Jane continued to force her way ahead. In the boundless search, she found it impossible t

42、o find a way out, which threw her into desperation. Fortunately, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter. To her great joy, this time, the helicopter spotted her. The moment Ja

43、ne was reunited with her husband, her tears clouded her vision. They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun. wordssurroundingsthoughtslooks ( (二二) ) 语篇的连贯性语篇的连贯性 1. 1. 内容连贯内容连贯 故事大意一致，写作意图一致故事大意一致，写作意图一致 2. 2. 语句连贯语句连贯 衔接词的准确使用衔接词的准确使用 but/however nevertheless whereas althoug

44、h though unfortunately instead on the contrary besides moreover furthermore whats more whats worse worse still so thus therefore hence consequently accordingly as a result One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately,

45、 on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed

46、to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept m

47、oving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose a

48、t the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now

49、, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead

50、. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _ 3. 3. 语言连贯语言连贯 语言风格一致语言风格一致 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Amid the d

51、readful darkness, strange sounds of wild beasts were heard. “If it werent for that stupid quarrel, I wouldnt be trapped here,” she thought to herself, regretful tears clouding her eyes. Surrounded by the fear and tiredness, Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep. “Tom, is that you?”she murm

52、ured. “Tom, help!” In her dream, she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance. It was day break when Jane woke up. After a washing, Jane continued to force her way ahead. In the boundless search, she found it impossible to find a way out, which threw her into desperation. Fortunately,

53、a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter. To her great joy, this time, the helicopter spotted her. The moment Jane was reunited with her husband, her tears clouded her vision. T

54、hey hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun. One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake

55、, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest

56、and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane wa

57、s so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Q

58、uickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way care

59、fully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they cam

60、e back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _ 3. 3. 语言连贯语言连贯 语言风格一致语言风格一致 With no path to follow, Jane , she turned around, hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that Jane rose, hungry and thirsty. If only she had not left her mobile