上海中考英语作文专题指导讲课教案

1、上海中考英语作文专题指导精品文档上海中考英语作文专题指导一、中考英语作文写作模式一一“四审四注意”写作法“四审”：一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you或第三人称she, he,it或they为主；三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who，when

2、，where，what，how，why 等要素展开。“四注意”：一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无 语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, whe n, although等状语从句，Ithi nk / I hope / I believe that等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握； 三注意适当运用连接词，女口 on one hand, on the other hand; whaS more; however等，这

3、样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题，做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正 确的“中国式英语”，更不能乱“发明一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句 式已很不错。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分，词数不能太少也不能太多，笔者觉 得,以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失 分。二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析1.时态错误嶠误类型中丈错谋炭达正确表迖时态 错误他在这儿已经7她常给我们讲故He lias been here since 7 vears.JSh 已 often

4、tell usHe has been licit: for7 years.Sh often tells usstories,stories.2.时间状语错误错误类型中文错锲表达正确表达误用去年菇夭 今晚 明;t下午4点last yeur spring todays night; ilii night toinorjo afieiLioon at 1 oclocklast spring tonighl; this evenin呂 ；Ll 4 o clock turiKmw aflernoon多余一天下午 在下个月 明天上年one day afternoonin next monthin / on

5、 tomorrow inurningone afternoon next month tomorrow morning3.名词单复数错误中文错误表迖正确表达一些信息some inJormationsstjine inlonnalion真有趣！Whai a greai fun!What girat (mi!三份工作three worksthree pieces of work / Lhree jobs4.动词误用误型中丸错课表达正确表达分词 错误看见某人正在做某事有某人在做某事对感兴趣see sb, did Rhthere be sb- doing sth.bo interesting inse

6、e sb. doing sth.there he sb. doing sth.be interested in不定 式错使茉人做某事 请某人来希望某人做make sb. io do sth. ask sb. uomehope sb, lo do make sb. do sth.ask 黑b. Lu cunie hope sb. will / can do want / wish sb. to do .用词 不当瘵加活动join activincstake part in / join in activities按少我很高兴乍very happy;1 am verj h話卩py.动词他很累匸He

7、 very lired.He 也 very tired.5.语态错误错误I；中文错谋表达正确表达误用 主动它是上诲制造的、 乩叫海伦。某物竈用Il made in Shanghai. She cdlcd Helen, islh. can useIl is made in Shanghai She is (called) Helen, jdh. can be used误用这韦好卖。 难说二The book is sold well. It is hnrd to be 曲id.Great changes have bten lakeJi pljce in Shanghai.The book sel

8、ls welL ll is hard to say.Great charmcs havekrtakenplaceidShanghai.披动上海笈生了很大 变化：构成 错误正在建诜一座桥上周我们看到了 刘翔，A bridge is been building.Liu Xiang is seen by us Iasi week.A bridge is being builtLiu Xiang was seen by us last week.6.词性误用错谋 类型中丈错谋表达正确表达她的英语很好U1Her English is very well.She is good at English. /

9、adj. /adv.努力学习 沿着笔直地走 独自地做某爭:vork hardly;o straighdy along k stlk lonely adj.)Iler English is very good, work hard go slraiglit along do sth. Liloiteadv. /V我乘车去上学。1by bus io school.ID)go ro school by bus / i a bus.prep./tidv.地离公屯远.is kilometres far rotn is kilometres away1mmprep./V.过马路across the str

10、eetgo across i cross the streettiitni./ adw第一第二 第 三1Ihe first The second “ The third First (Firslly)Second(Secondly) Tliird (Thirdly)nr /在北部in the norihcminthe northH. / V.他感谢了我。14e (hanked【门 / fnr me.He thanked / was thankful to mu.7.介词误用类型中文错误表达正确表达在村庄附近ncaiby the villagenear the village误用对有良效 在老师

11、的帮助下 熟悉某人/某事 大声地在阳光F读书have a good effed io under ihc teachers help familiar with sb. / to sth, with a loud voice read under the sunhave a gixid efftei on with I hi teachers help familiar to sb. / with sth. in a loud voice read in the sun多余到那儿在菜人回家的路 上为人民服务anived at (here, gar id thereon ones way to

12、home serve for the peoplearrived / reached / gor thereon ones wav homeserve ihe penpe8.某些搭配和惯用法误用中文错误表达正确表达价格便它Che price is cheap.Ilieprice is low.请你做Pleast you do Please do他告诉我Hetold me whether He told me (that)她15趴She i* fifteen years age. / She is fifteen- vear-okl.JShe ia rifiecn. / She is a gir

13、l nt IS, / She is fifteen years old. / Shea 15-yeai-old giL我花了 1()元买书一1 cost / spcni 10 yatin lo bux lhe book.Ilie bunk cost me 10 ynutr / 1 spent 11) yuan (im buying / on the book.F中考英语总复习专项训练题写作专项训练A.中考英语热门写作话题1. 关于学习Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi“ow to leann English well ”(以“

14、怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ) Whe n did you start lear ning En glish? (in / . years ago) How do you lear n En glish? (liste n carefully, study with a group, read En glish everyday .) What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar .)2. 关于兴趣Write a

15、passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy interest”.（以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ） What is your in terest? Why do you like it so much?3. 关于写事Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCUnforgettable memories.（以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点

16、符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ） What is your un forgettable memory? Why do you thi nk it is un forgettable?4. 关于计划Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy pla n for summer holiday ”.（以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容

17、供参考 ） What are you going to do duri ng the coming summer holiday? Give at least two poi nts.5. 关于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy good friend ”.（以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ) Who is your good friend? What do you often do wi

18、th him or her? Why do you regard him or her as a good frie nd?6. 关于写人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy English teacher”.(以 “我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ) Who is your En glish teacher? Do you like him or her? Why do you like him

19、 or her?7. 关于英语Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topid“cha nged my ways of lear ningEnglish”.（以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ） How did you lear n En glish in the past? Why do you cha nge your ways of lear ning En glish? How do you

20、 lear n En glish now?8. 关于旅行Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topieAn unforgettable trip”.（以 “一次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ） Where did you go? What did you do during that trip? Why do you think it is unforgettable?9. 关于动物Write a passag

21、e of at least 60 words about the topiCMy favourite animal ” （以 “我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ） Whats your favourite an imal? Why do you like it so much?收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除10. 关于网上购物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi（O nli ne shopp i

22、ng is cha nging theway of our life ”.（以“网上购物正在改变我们的生活方式”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ） Whats your view on on li ne shopp ing? What are its adva ntages and dis-adva ntages? Please give one or two suggestions to your friends if they love online shopping.11.

23、 关于学科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy favourite subject”.（以 “我最喜欢的学科”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.以下内容供参考 ） Whats your favourite subject? Why do you like it best?12. 关于变化Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi“hanges in myself.（以

24、“我的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.（以下问题可供参考） Have you had any eha nges in yourself since you came to the middle school? Which are the most importa nt cha nges? （Give at least 2 examples） What do you think of the cha nges?13. 关于节日Write a passage of at least 60 wor

25、ds about the topicThe Lantern Festiva”.（以 元宵节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a referenee.（以下内容供参考） Do you like the Lantern Festival and why do you like it? What do people usually do on the Lantern Festival?B.提示性作文每个人都有自己的梦想，努力坚持终能实现。请根据下图及表格中所提供的信息写一篇文章TomTomTomL出身贫寒，付不起学费，但一直自

26、学. 普上了大学。2上大学时坚持扌T零工（psirtTime job）,并照顾遭遇车祸的父母3.坚持梦想（follow ones dream人拥有 了自己的农场。你的梦想You如何实现 你的挈想勤奋学习【要求】1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥；2. 介绍Tom,谈谈你的梦想并自拟两点实现梦想的途径;3. 文章不少于90词；4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整2015年中考英语总复习专项训练题（六）参考范文A.1.How to lear n En glish wellEn glish is very importa nt for us. Every one wan

27、 ts to learn it well. Do you know how to learn it well? Here are my ways:Firstly, I liste n to the teacher and make no tes carefully in class. I review / go over my old less ons and prepare my new less ons after class.Secondly, I like speaking English with my classmates, not only in classroom, but a

28、lso on the playgro un d. Its importa nt to improve my spoke n En glish.Thirdly, I keep a diary every day to practise my written English.Besides, I ofte n read En glish n ewspapers and magaz ines in order to en rich my kno wledge on En glish culture.2.My in terestI have a wide range of interests and

29、enjoy doing many things in my free time. I am a lover of readi ng. I ofte n read in my spare time. I read many kinds of books and newspaper. I like the stories and news in them very much. There are a lot of knowledge and interesting things as well. I am also a music lover. I like all kinds of music.

30、 I often listen to the music programmes on radio. Although I cantsing English songs well, I like them a lot. I like sports as well. I often play badminton after classes in the after noon. I ofte n run in the morni ng. Whe n I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble and worry. Of course, sports can

31、also help me in build ing my body.In short, I enjoy my life here in school. Read ing books, liste ning to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.3.Un forgettable memoriesHow time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head.Teachers, classmates,

32、 hard work and above all frie ndship stay in mind. Look ing back,I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help Ive made great progress. But Im a ca

33、reless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beg inning and it gives me a cha nee to overcome my shortco min gs. As it is said,“Itnot our abilities that show what we tuly are, it is our choice.-rnomthdntwdaywill also provide me the freedom to think

34、over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.4.My pla n for summer holidayThe summer holiday is coming. We will have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves. But I think we should plan the time carefully. We had better make a list of all the things we wish to do and tr

35、y hard to keep a balance between work and play. In the holiday we can do many activities. For example, we can play with friends. We can do different sports. It is also meaningful for us to work as volunteers. Besides, we can do someread in g. It can help get us prepared for the new term. I hope all

36、of us will have a won derful holiday.5.My good frie ndI have a good frie nd. Her n ame is Susa n. She is 14 years old. SSsefrom America. Shes a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golde n hair. She likes doing sports, especially swim ming and running. She enjoys read ing books and liste ning t

37、o music. Whats more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. Shes lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. Sh6s also helpful. She ofte n helps me lear n En glish. With her help, I made much progress in En glish. Im lucky to have suc

38、h a good friend.6.My En glish teacherOur En glish Teacher Ms Huang, came to our school two years ago. She has bee n an En glish teacher for more tha n 30 years. She works hard and has bee n a model teacher for many years. She is kind and frie ndly to us after class, but she is rather strict with us

39、in class. She always en courages us to speak and read more En glish. She ofte n says,“ Practice makes perfect. ” She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every less on lively and in terest ing. She ofte n gives us slide shows, teaches us En glish songs and helps us put on short En glish pl

40、ays. She is not only our teacher but also our frie nd. We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to atte nd an importa nt meet ing, at which she will be give n a medal for her adva need deeds.7.I cha nged my ways of lear ning En glishAs an intern ati on al la nguage, En glish plays a great

41、character in our life. En glish has become more and more importa nt to us. Therefore, I cha nged my way of lear ning En glish so that I can improve my En glish ability.In the past, I didntlisten to English news often. So I changed it. I began to listen to En glish son gs. And I liste ned to the word

42、s of the song carefully in order to lear n more words. Everytime when I met the words which I didntknow, I would looked it up in the dictio nary. And I always tried to remember it after look ing it up. After a mon th, I found that I knew more words tha n my classmates.I used to write as few words as

43、 I could. No doubt, I cha nged it.With the help of my friends and my teacher, I tried to write more articles. Fin ally, I succeeded. I took up writi ng as a hobby and I will n ever forget it.Im glad that I cha nged my way of lear ning En glish. And everyth ing I cha nged will make me more and more i

44、n terested in En glish.8.An un forgettable tripI went to Chongqing in July 22. It is a city which was built n ear mountains. So people call it Mountain City. In Chongqing, I went to the Red Stone Centre, to see the places which the pris oners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There

45、 were a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns n ear the pris ons. And most of the pris oners were good men. They didntwant to tell the bad people where the other people were. So they 精品文档were put into the pris on. They lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink. They had o

46、nly twenty minu tes to stay outside per day but they still said nothing. I think they are the heroes in that century. I will follow their spirit.9.My favourite ani malMy favourite animal is dog. I like it because it can help people in many different ways. Many, many years ago, dogs were already peop

47、le pets. They lived in caves with people. Dogs were very good helpers. They guarded the caves and kept people safe from dan ger.Nowadays, dogs are also peop pets. But some people are unkind to their dogs. They do not look after them and leave them in the street. We should be kind to dogs. They are o

48、ur frie nds. They can help us do many thi ngs. They help the police catch thieves and find miss ing people. They also help bli nd people cross the road safely.10.On li ne shopp ing is cha nging the way of our lifeAs we all know, on li ne shopp ing has become more and more popular among people especi

49、ally the young people. We can buy n early everyth ing on the Intern et. I n my view, online shopping has already changed the way of our life. People tend to surf the Internet to buy what they n eed. I think the adva ntage of on li ne shopp ing is its convenien ce. People only sit in the soft and cli

50、ck the mouse at home to buy what they want. It can save people a lot of time and money. The disadvantage is that online shopping is not always safe. Sometimes your private information will be let out. So if you love on li ne shopp ing, please be careful with your pers onal in formati on and the webs

51、ite so that you can ben efit from on li ne shopp ing.11.My favourite subjectEn glish is my favourite subject because En glish is used widely in the world, especially in Shan ghai, a city with so many foreig ners. Wha more, I like it because my En glish teacher is kind and frie ndly to me.In order to

52、 lear n En glish well, I read En glish aloud every morning and liste n to the teacher carefully in class. After class, I often watch English programmes and keep an En glish diary every day.In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better.12.Chan ges in myselfEvery one has cha nged a

53、little or a lot since the day he came to the middle school. So have I. I am no Ion ger a little girl because I am a middle school stude nt no w. I think that I have cha nged a lot. For example, I become more con fide nt and frie ndly tha n ever before. I have made a lot of friends and we ofte n have a good time. We help each other and share thi ngs together. And I also get rid of some of my bad habits. For example, I used to spe nd much time on computer games. Now I alwa